10-12 lines
you spit first
no crew d/r etc
no time limit
etc

g'luck ya'll need it

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This kid doesnt have the lyrical flow but gives lyrical "blows" *
Your like a girl on my dick you wont let go, you just stay down low
Its actually ova for you, after this you might wanna join my crew
You'll even vote for me..then I'll just need 4 more so I can finish you
This has ended and this win has been givin to me and not to you
I "walk through barz" just like I walk through you, yea it's true
Dont be upset you lost to a veteran and you know who I'm betta-than
After this you'll be cryin cuz you know that you surrender-man
I bet that your actual record is a 0-23 score, do you really want more
Girls dont stick to you like magnets cuz they just dont adore
Cuz 5 "blows you givin" that didnt hit...and now you couldnt quit
Wit a quick win...this whole battle will be apocalyptic

* he gives head and I changed his name from lyrical flows to lyrical blows

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.......uppin this shit will return the favor.....
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Naw, I said something just like that in my battle vs. bodycount.. I don't know if you bit it from me or what, but that killed your verse fa me...

Lyrical Flow had...
Flow,
personals,
punchlines & meta's,
I have to hand this vote into his direction....

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he had no punches his who verse was kind a played but w/e its up to you guys

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Yeah Lyrical had some better rhymes than Spanky did. I wasnt feelin Spanky's verse at all. He didnt have no punches or wordplay or nothing. Lyrical wins this one hands down.

Vote - Lyrical

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Pretty good battle, both had good verses, but spanky takes it with better wordplay and flow

Lyrikal- Good verse, your opener was tight, but after that you didn't have nothin that stuck out. You had some good punches, and your personals hit good, but you could've had some better vocab. Also, some of your lines were way long while others were short. Work on struc and wordplay.

Spanky- Good verse from you also. Your opener was wack, but your second line was dope. You came pretty solid throughout your verse, you had solid punches and good personals. Your wordplay was better than his, and your struc was better so you get my vote.

That was explained your gee and w/e da truth is lol were unexplained definetly dick riders

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i know it aint but one they didnt explain like he did and two isnt suspicisious that you voted for them and they voted for you this i also spanky

Spanky... Yea Stuff Was Okay But You Need To Step It Up A Bit Ya Feel Me.
You Had Some Good Shit In There But Like It Was All Sort Of Elementry Stuff
C'mon Now Lyrical Flows To Lyrical Blows
That Lame Son

Lyrical Flows... Good Post Don
You Had Good Structure Son

spanky no doubt lyrical dawg u were to basic way to much spanky had more complexed and use of his words u were like nick nack paddy wack give a dog a bone spanky just come wit da punches
v/spnky
return tha favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131634

after i'm done givin a rap lesson to this cat spanky,
him and his whole crew will be da 1st ones to thank me,
Weak opener..weak. 4/10
u must be diagnosed wit the weak rapper disease,
i dont even have to cock a glock to get u on ur knees,
A little weak, just bein hood on dis 1 5/10
down deep inside this kid is a big fan of me,
and he hopes and wishes to one day be able 2 handle me,
I ain't seein' any punches, this is just talk 5/10
if u ever had any skillz in ur style then uve lost it,
im bout 2 murder u boy, and add ur soul 2 my deposit,
Weak, weak weak..wack. 5/10
when im on da mic, my lyrics come at u like 80lbs of steel,
if u were on a label, id kill the owner jus 4 given a bitch like u a deal,
Aight, aight, but your punches are ass. 6/10
rappin aint the career for u if u have plans on making some loot,
i dont see why u wont just give it up like a fuckin prostitute,
Alright closer, AIGHT. 6/10

averaged: 5.16

This kid doesnt have the lyrical flow but gives lyrical "blows" *
Your like a girl on my dick you wont let go, you just stay down low
Alright, punchline/closer..better than lyrical 6.5/10
Its actually ova for you, after this you might wanna join my crew
You'll even vote for me..then I'll just need 4 more so I can finish you
Wack, wack, wack..just talkin' and easy rhymin' 4/10
This has ended and this win has been givin to me and not to you
I "walk through barz" just like I walk through you, yea it's true
Wack, all talkin, weak punchline..4/10
Dont be upset you lost to a veteran and you know who I'm betta-than
After this you'll be cryin cuz you know that you surrender-man
Lmao, these are assin' lyrics..damn..work on your vocab 4/10
I bet that your actual record is a 0-23 score, do you really want more
Girls dont stick to you like magnets cuz they just dont adore
Pfft..all talkin..Girls dont stick to you like magnets? Lmao 5/10
Cuz 5 "blows you givin" that didnt hit...and now you couldnt quit
Wit a quick win...this whole battle will be apocalyptic
Aight closer just like lyricals...6/10

Advice: Work on Vocab.

Averaged: 4.91

Vote-Lyrical

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Mike Hawk is a wackass......

can yall return the favor and vote honestly and professionally on my current battle 1
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...290#post1383290

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Mike Hawk is a wackass......

This was a pretty evenly matched battle. I dont think either of you opened well, Spanky had to explain his punch...thats never cool to do that. If its that hard peeps should be able to get it. You and You are perfect rhymes I guess...I would reccomend using them together though man. I noticed that you did try to use some wordplay with better-than and surrender-man...but better and surrender dont go together well.
You did have a good structure and the flow wasnt bad at all on the verse...but you closed out weak...you gotta leave peeps sayin man that was ill.

Lyrical you had a tight flow, you really need to elevate your vocab though, you can only rhyme with them little words so much before its played. I have noticed how much youve improved your structure, I think ive criticized you enough on that and you finally got it. You opened your battle good, and you used a personal. You had a few punces they werent that good but they was aight. Now when you closed...your last line was ILL, I was totally feelin that shit.

I give him this battle because his flow was more on point, and he opened hard, and closed hard. (better consistency)

v/Lyrical