12-16 lines kidd

you know the rules already

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BOSTON LYRICIST

aight checkin in now along wit ma verse

yo check it
kid my raps or more flexibale like arobics//1
they make u feel small and twisted like u were clasterfobic//2
im out to clean up boston real heroic,he claim da bean well im the one to grow it//3(jack and da bean stalk)^
explode his lines get stripped,obstruction kaos that i verbal flip//4
writin warfare agaisnt boston cuz ima mental trip//5
cuz when it some to da bean i just might roll him up into a cancer stick//6
violence in another brick i just might take my scripts that break ya fragile hip//7
bust him up so much he be havin pussy lips//8
eternal blitz the frame break hearts,he aint no rapper only ive been down from tha start//9
true spiritual rhymes that are eva lastin i come ear blastin, come out like like oscar tha grouch and trashin//10
boston aint on da map i blew out his whole fasion,real rhymes is what im packin//11
hard wood class i be clashin its my pay day the lyricist i be cashin//12
look at da name lyrical killa i do for passion like mel gibson//13
im the law so stop resistin,cuz thing bout to get lyriclly twiston//14

with the name verbal violence all you can do is talk me to death...
and i see that cluttered ass verse you should of saved your breath...
your not very good at this watch how i verbally castrate and react............
when im done you will be breathin heavily like your avitar having an asthma attack............................................ ...............................................
your the theme music on sportscenter your all hype................................
your flows punch as quick as a man wit no fingers types.............
when you flow people dis you like bush after they watch 911 farenheit.....
this battle is no use like stevie wonder getting an eye exam...................
pussy your moms caught you puting on a diaphram on a hidden cam........
you dissin on class-sickz cause you a cold hearted killa.........................
thats because when you rap you look worse than reggie miller......
i crash on you like the ocean on the shore banks............................
i embarras you on the net like an ashton cutcher punked prank..........
i'll have you sad like an anthony hamilton song..............................
your fag thats why you dream of michael jackson in thongs...............
youve just been smashed you had no chance..................................
i have you verbally mute like people at the awards when monique did beyonces dance............................................. ...................

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BOSTON LYRICIST

nice battle..verbal ur structure isnt that good, ok punches but the flow was a little off.. boston nice spit, good punches and personals..a couple lines were a little stretched but overall u got dis..
v/bostonlyricist

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aight.. verbal dlnt think this is a crew vote, but i think boston got this..
verbal your verse sounded good, man, but all you did wa use self glorification on how you was gonna beat him bad and shit... youneed put punches in there.. thats you only fault that and your structuer lol... i didnt liek your structure that much...boston you had punches in there.. they hit harder then verbals, and you had more of them.. this is why o gotta give my vote to boston.. but that period shit gotta go fam... it wasent working lol..

im not just voting for boston cause he in my cew either..

v/boston

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First off both of yalls structure needs help...Verbal Violence more so than boston, so Boston takes that in my book.

Boston your flow was still pretty syck, even though you had a few streched out lines. Verbal I wasnt feelin your flow at all, one line would have 12 syllables the other 22, thats just not good for your flow,

Punches, Verbal i noticed you did try to throw a couple personals but they werent connecting hard. You didnt really have any consistent punches, hardly hit and miss. Boston i did feel a few of yours, like the man without fingers typing, and the Diaphram on a hidden cam. Boston had more consistent punches.

Opener, closer, Boston you came out talkin about his verbal mouth etc. and then said you were gonna leave him mute so that was a decent close. I wasnt feelin verbals opener, about the aerobics, and it kinda never ended.

Not any multis from boston, verbal the ones that you did use I think hurt you more than they helped you because they werent making much sense.

v/boston

decent battle:
Punches-Boston
Personals-Boston
^^^
your not very good at this watch how i verbally castrate and react............
when im done you will be breathin heavily like your avitar having an asthma attack

haha i liked that one

Structure-Tie
Creativity/Enjoyment-Boston.....Verbal u had some interestin lines to tho

Vote-Boston....it was closer then my breakdown looks like the Verbal u just got edged out in most of the categories...good battle keep at it

and plz vote on this battle of mine....it hasnt got any votes yet....peace
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132945

dayum boston

ill verse...i was feelin ur verse...much better structure
your flow was good
your personals were hittin HARD
your punches were hittin him right where it hurts
saw some mult's
good creativitie with that asma attack line
and good meta's...real good shit

one of the best ive seen from u

verbal: ONCe again bad structure
ur flow is ugly
ur punches n personals were aiight
ur meta's were not hittin hard
didnt see any multi's

vote:boston

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i unno if i can vote or not, this is my first post,

flow: verbal
Multies: verbal
Everything else : boston

Verbal u suck, sorry, i read ur verse n it was nuffin special. u gotta fix dat.
Boston u alright bruva, u had this guy.

count it or what not, i could care less.

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i think boston l has this one he has better punches it was close

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