10-20 bar limit

all voters accepted
any votes with no explanation can be dq'd
im spiitng first no feeding off my thread

good luck

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BOSTON LYRICIST

ok nigga u got tha ballz 2 steep 2 me.so watsup is u gone spit first.cause i'm ready.drop ya first line so i can drop mine and kill u 1 time

nothin personal all buisness

i'll rock you like head boards when people fuckin...
have you dazed droolin like bitches wit big mouths dick suckin..
snuff ya and face plant you to the grass...
tk o'd in detail like tities pressed to glass...
when im done your name change will be just be a blank...
just like your bitch ass record and rank...
you wont weigh nothin if i run ya ass over wit ah tank...
kelo of what bitch,pussy,ass,and no skillz...
you tight cause you constipated and need exlax pills...
your flow cant even be recited in ths same air as mine...
only way you could win a 2 minute battle is before time...
i give headaces and break mic hands with ease...
only time you real is when you face prosthetic mc's..
slap ya like when you call moms a bitch on accident...
only way to send me hot ryhmes is if the paper is on fire
and you was faxing it...
think clearly,you cant get near me,even wit will smith ears you couldnt hear me...
happy independence day while i give you a permanent hurt...
you full of shit so i'll put a firecracker in ya ass and watch a nasty fire works..

thats enough im done hollah

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BOSTON LYRICIST

ok nigga i gave u ya props ya flow was iight but thats about it.so let me make my self clear mean while i'm spittin let me kick tha flaver in ya hear.yes i is that nigga up in hurr who be talkin mad shit but don't get mad cause ya bitch luv me cause my cock is longer.yeah nigga i'm a fuckin monster and u see tha bitch u be kiss they be suckin my dick nut all over her face she be lovin my shit.she be like.um.papi bostonlyricist be lick her clit.so wat u gone do spit wat u like talkin about u put a firecracker up my ass so u can watch a nasty fire work.hahaha.this little nigga got joke but keep takin ya shit come 2 my hood u get kid nap and have my bitch strap on tha strap on dick and u get butt rape with it. and if u gone start beef don't bring ya crew cause them niggaz u rule with they sum bitch like u wat they gone do when i pop at u,they gone jump in tha way and catch 1 too.and homie i ain't even tryin right now i know readin this and cryin right now.i'm that nigga who be spittin this flow and tha same little nigga who be stickin ya ho.so lets go nigga,nigga spit ya flow we can go up 2 round 9 like nine inch of dick up in ho.so do wat u like come at me again fa all i know we ain't fuckin friend.

aoght my second vote for boston this aint no d/r but he just commin wit it for realz he has a betta style hes beatin me...
but to tha vote
aight boston
punches-9/10
flow-9/10
vocab-9/10
structure-8/10 a lil off
35/40 good job playa

kelo
punches-9/10
flow-7/10
vocab-8/10
structure-8/10
32/40 close battle
v/boston
if u aint got this yet hit it up
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...34&page=2&pp=15

punches-tie...thought bostons hit a lil harder but he had some played conceptz
personals-neither
vocab-boston
wordplay-boston
structure-definatly boston.....kelo break ya shit up so its easier to read

Overall-Boston...for above reasons....good battle

and plz http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132614
drop HONEST votes in this battle of mine ight...peace homies

ya boi is back.i'm say boston did is thing but if that nigga wat 2 come at me again lets do it.u iight but i'm better u kinda kill me once but its all good.lets do this again.if u ain't scared

Oh-
My-
God-

*grabs a priest and lays a hand on kelo's forehead; starts to pray*

"Oh heavenly father, bless him. Bless him Lord, bless him. Just bless him. OH LAWD, BLESS HIM!!!!"

I couldn't understand what the fuck kelo was saying. "Bitch" "Cock" and some other meaningless words are the majority of his vocabulary. His structure is horrific. He uses periods as comas and every other fucking type of punctuation there is. I'm like, "WHAT THE FUCK?" I didn't even read his entire verse. I know this is horrible of me to say this shit, but damn. I gotta give credit when credit it due. You deserved this man.

And you can't call this a hate vote because I don't know either of you. LMAO

Vote- Boston

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And verbal, your critique is whack. How could you give Kelo scores like that?

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Boston def too this one, was comin with harder punches, had the better flow and was consistent about it through out his verse.

Boston - Just work on ya structure a little bit, I noticed esp towards the end of the verse you started to have some streched lines. The flow was good though, and I was feelin most of it.

Kelo, you had no structure what so ever, and your punches were all talkin about his bitch, and self glorifying yourself. You gotta come harder than that, you gotta talk about him, be personal with it, and get yaself a structure so that peeps can understand your flow. Break it down into bars, and lines.

Boston was just ahead in every category.

v/Boston