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06-30-04, 03:35 PM | #1 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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sdizzle(0-0) vs. BostonLyricist(0-0)
IP: 95FF 1D86
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm western check in on Tuesday verses due on JULY 7wedsday votes due by the next saturday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max.
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06-30-04, 06:31 PM | #2 | |||||
Light Weight
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Bl
IP: 00AF 249C
Boston Checked In
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06-30-04, 07:58 PM | #3 | ||||
GONE... I QUIT
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IP: 64E3 6603
fuck boston..... * remembers sdizzle is from boston*..... ya go boston
throw u in the charles river...... have u feeling degrated boston pride i see...... well u saw how the celtics made it a legacy depleated, ur uneeded.... so understand ur defeated leave u bleeding....why ur a nut? u were as soon i got the seed in im tired and dont feel like embarrassing a fellow boston nucca........ yo were u from anyway son |
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07-01-04, 11:58 AM | #4 | |||||
Light Weight
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IP: 00AF 249C
PERSONAL
when it come to this shit boston one of the masters.... lift you up to heaven like birsds jersey in the rapters... im responsible for your death so i'll break it to your pop.. spilll your blood all over the kitchen and make your moms mop... im not one to play im metaphorically gifted.... my mind is crazy and lyriaclly cerial killa twisted... i'll have you chopped up and bagged like fresh fruit... and since you dieing during this battle i wore a suite... i'll get you banged out like j lo's ass in a movie..... if you was an actor in a sex scene you would ask for george clooney... your skillz lack everything like an athlete wit no legs or arms... your soft and dont last long like marshmellows from lucky charms... call me whateva but im bettah....im not def but i will jam you wit ah vandettah..cut off your circulation wit a kanye west sweatah......... pull out the bareetah and give you some free stuff like a fox goal gettah.. your done son....bostons finest vs the weakest dont eva come at me with some wack shit like that again.................................i'll kill you...........
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07-01-04, 12:09 PM | #5 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 4289 77F4
vote - sdizzle
he had a 4 line verse....but had punches....and bostonlyricist was horrible....u need to elevate kid.....and stop talking shit when u suck....sdizzle won easily.... |
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07-01-04, 02:38 PM | #6 | |||||
The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
I think you both need to elevate through this league if your gonna want to stay in it for long, but I think BostonLyricist had a better verse... this is the punch that won it for me
your skillz lack everything like an athlete wit no legs or arms... your soft and dont last long like marshmellows from lucky charms... - Good Flow, couple decent lines there. I think sdizzle coulda pulled this out but he stopped writing after 4 lines and the 4 lines weren't all that nasty.... Vote BostonLyricist. Good Luck in the future.
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07-02-04, 07:17 PM | #7 | ||||
Kung Fu
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IP: 3EBB BEAF
wtf is this shit
sdizzle - 4 lines that were OK at the most, but your shit still beat bostonlyricist b/c you actually had some OK punches bostonlyricist - now WTF. this was by far one of the shittiest verses i have seen in my life. you had no personals. you had little punches that didnt even connect,you flow was all fucked up, and your structure is shit punches - sdizzle flow - sdizzle creativity - sdizzle personals - sdizzle length - bostonlyricist ( like that even counts) v/ sdizzle
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07-05-04, 09:58 PM | #8 | ||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Sdizzle ur shit
where the fuck were ur punches.....ill break it down. throw u in the charles river...... have u feeling degrated First line sucks boston pride i see...... well u saw how the celtics made it Your both from boston...ur just dissin where from 2.... a legacy depleated, ur uneeded.... so understand ur defeated Just filler leave u bleeding....why ur a nut? u were as soon i got the seed in Wack.....i dunno what u were attemptin her but u just came out wack other kid.....drop the fuckin ego...but u at least tried harder i'll get you banged out like j lo's ass in a movie..... if you was an actor in a sex scene you would ask for george clooney... your skillz lack everything like an athlete wit no legs or arms... your soft and dont last long like marshmellows from lucky charms... ^at least he tried.....ur both a waste in this league.....i hear abiout dizzle alot so trie harder. Vote Boston lyricist. |
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07-06-04, 12:55 PM | #9 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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IP: 6A6D D21B
vote boston lyricist....well because he put more effort...people if your only going to have two bars then maybe you should have a punch or two that doesn't also affect you...bostons was basic...and not great...but atleast he ahd a couple of punches that weren't also against himself...anyway
vote bl
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07-06-04, 01:22 PM | #10 | ||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 4289 77F4
sdizzle.....
I liked your verse but the were too less of lines and you were dissing were you both were from...and your lines sounded like they were put together 4 min befor your spit.... BostonL.... your verse was elementry....simple and plain....which was enough to beat him....i didn't see any good punches but you did 10X beter than him.... vote boston lyricist 4-2 BL |
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07-06-04, 03:26 PM | #11 | |||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 84F8 62A8
Dizzle- boston pride i see...... well u saw how the celtics made it
your dissin your self son...lol you had an ok verse but more lines would of made it better along with harder punches..cuz those were weak 6.0/10 BL-your shit was simple...no complexity at all ..simple punches simple verse...no good punches i saw but you put in more effort which was enoug.. 6.5/10 vote-BL |
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07-06-04, 03:30 PM | #12 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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IP: 95FF 1D86
thread closed...bl wins...5-2
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07-06-04, 03:30 PM | #13 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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IP: 95FF 1D86
thread closed...bl wins...5-2
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