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no recycling
no d/r
spit due within 30 mins...

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The only time your "hot, shit" is when ur in an oven//
i still pulled you out and ate you whole without a fuckin glove on!//
this boys thinks hes guna burn me, cos apparently hes "hot......shhhh"!//
exactly, keep it on the quiet loser your really "not.....shush!"//
is this dude what he sais he is or really a hot chick?//
i cant see through the shit hes postin whether hes grown or they're tits!//
his names jus biting nelly, are you even from the loo? (lou), HUH?//
cos i know thats where your flowin, down south in the sew-er!//
this biter burnt, hard as a "rock", "i smell what hes been cookin"//
i didnt think this pussy would show, hes a "cock" not a "chicken"!//


now post some of your shit homes!!

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you gonna post or not??

i cant be waitin for this shit

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k, i dont think this clown is gonna post! can this be closed??

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i just read this corny shit u wrote 6:15pm july, 6 2004!!!!!!!


how the fuck i was suppose to know u was gonna challenge me? I logged off!!

STUPID!!! didnt u see on my logo it said STATUS: NOT ONLINE? STUPID

WE CAN BATTLE NOW NIGGA!!! WHERE U AT? OHHH YOUR NOT ONLINE!

HOW DID I KNOW?????

CAUSE NEXT TO YOUR NAME IT SAYS:::::: NOT ON ONLINE!!!!!!!!!!

STUPID!!! FUCKING IDIOT LETS GO! REPLY TO THAT NIGGA

They call u soldier but u fake/
i dont care if u the best in the states/
the day i get ate, the nigga catch a stomachache/
the situation aint 4 open debate/
im number one, u number 10, how those numbers equate?/
i cant believe this punk, talk about he a soldier/
but everytime u see him chilling, notice that he bending over/
he ride his bike around the hood and tell ya he got a rover/
I'M A CAPTAIN NIGGA, SO GO AHEAD, BE A SOLDIER!!!!/
YOU under me, and u fucked like u under me,/
NIGGA I DONT NEED TO SPIT SICK, I GOT LUNG DISEASE!!!/

SOLDIER NEED TO LEARN HOW TO SPELL/
I GUESS IN UK, THEY DONT PAY THE TEACHERS THAT WELL!!!!! /
SO WHEN I SAY IM HOTSHH! THAT MEAN I SPIT HOTSHIT/
WITH YA GIRL UP IN MY CRIB SPITTING HOT DICK/
HOT HAM, HOT SAUCE, HOT DAMN, IM DA MAN/
YOU'VE BEEN FUCKED UP SO MUCH
THAT AINT HOW YOU SIT, ITS HOW YOU STAND/
AND IMA KEEP SPITTING TIL YOU GET THE PICTURE....
THIS IS HIP HOP, WE DONT FUCK WITH UK NIGGAS!!!!!!!!!


AND I DARE YOU TO COMEBACK

And One More Thing, I Made That Up Quick But Im Gonna Write A Hit Em Up Verse Just 4 U "doldier"

Not too bad, this was a good battle.

I wasnt really feelin either one of your flow, cause the structure was all off and shit.

Hotshh! threw harder punches, cept the fact that he tried to rhyme with soldier like 50 times...but some of the wordplay was tight. Soldier some of your stuff wasnt even rhymin like cookin and chicken, and loo huh and sew-er?

Not really any tight metas...or multis and you both were about the same on personals.

I just thought that hotshh! came a bit harder than Soldier did.

v/hotshh!

Both of you came kinda weak. This battle wasn't all that. I didnt see any wordplay or punches that hit hard. I liked Hotshh!'s rhyme cuz his had a better flow. As QB said, some of soldier's rhymes didnt rhyme. I was kinda gettin lost in his. So i gotta give this one to Hotsshh.

Vote - Hotsshh!

Vote on mines...links r in tha sig...

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Solder- I just wasn't feeling you, Didn't get the structure, weak punches.

Hotshh!- You came harder, but I'm not saying you came hard, you had some iight punches, decent words, you get the victory.

Winner- Hotshh!

return the favor- http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133615

soldier ur verse was hella wack n ur structure was 2 u didnt seem 2 b connecting punches n the punches were 2 weak

hotshhh u had the better verse ur structure was ight n ur wordplay was batter n sum of ur punches connected

v - hotshh

drop a vote on this link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134062