rules are:

10 lines
40 mins to drop after check (im installing some shit)
no hate/crew vote
no dickriding
no biting

*checkin in*

damn I got 135 credits!

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This Is Hot Shh! *checking In*
Im Ready But I Dont Really Know How This Works

damn kid you couldn't be hotshh! If I pushed ya in a fire after you keep quiet~
you could only be fire if if you exercised and tried to burn calories on a diet~
you originally from the bronx but now live in the fuckin' place Rhode Island~
blah! only if you you screamed out "I-Landed-On-A-Road" thanks to to G.B.~
you couldn't be a rapper if you was a wannabe "Em" & your visions "see" me~
only way you can flow is if you were flowing in the bottom of any damn sea~
your minds completely blank you ain't see nothing..........just like your sig!~
you stuck at the bottom and can't elevate.......by the fuckin' hole u dig~
I could beat you with my eyes closed...and with no hands to even type~
your rhymez make me sleepy......................as if they were a exhaust pipe!~


facts for the people who don't understand:

"I-Landed-On-A-Road" is a wordplay on were he lives Rhode Island.....
"Em" & your visions "see": that would be another wordplay on the word emcee

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in the second line I meant to say flamez instead of fire my bad

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ok LETS GO

VERSE

U WACK.... WHAT IS THAT FREESTLING? U WILING/
YOU MAD CAUSE YA BABY MOTHER GOT PREGNANT IN RHODE ISLAND(NOT MY BABY)
AN IS YOU CRAZY,I'LL DAMAGE YA, DONT NOBODY REALLY GIVE A FUCK BOUT CANADA!
THEY CALL ME HOTSH, CAUSE I SPIT HOTSHIT
AND ONLY THING G BALLZ SPIT IS HOT DICK////,U DETECTIVE UNDERCOVER U BE SNITCHIN TO THE FEDS// THEY CALL HIM G BALLZ AKA SUPER HEAD!!!!!!
HOW MANY BUMS YOU ATE TO BE 14-5/ COME TO THE BRONX YOU WONT LEAVE ALIVE
YOU BETTER BACKDOWN,THIS IS A CRACKDOWN, U AINT GOTTA WATCH UPN TO SEE A
SMACKDOWN// U A BUM, AND FUC THE HARDWOOD CLASSICS
WE BALLERS FUC CANADA GO STRETCH FOR THEM GYMNASTICS// JUST CALL ME THE GREat, B BALLZ CANT EQUATE, AN DA DAY I GET ATE, U NIGGAS CATCH A STOMACHACHE

THE END

IF ITS MORE THAN 10 THATS OK CAUSE WE DONT FOLLOW RULES WHERE IM FROM
P.S. G BALLZ KISS THESE BALLS

At 8:00 I Am Out So Talk Ya Shit Now, To My Face And Not When I Go
Ill Find Out Who Won Wheni Come Back
And That Was All Keystyle But We Can Do Written Nexttime

iight this was apretty tight battle but i gotta give this one to my man g-ballz..lol
G-Ballz

damn kid you couldn't be hotshh! If I pushed ya in a fire after you keep quiet~
lol.. ight nice punchlines
you could only be fire if if you exercised and tried to burn calories on a diet~
lol..very humorous
you originally from the bronx but now live in the fuckin' place Rhode Island~
decent
blah! only if you you screamed out "I-Landed-On-A-Road" thanks to to G.B.~
Okay
you couldn't be a rapper if you was a wannabe "Em" & your visions "see" me~
lol...
only way you can flow is if you were flowing in the bottom of any damn sea~
IIght.decent
your minds completely blank you ain't see nothing..........just like your sig!~
IIGHT.
you stuck at the bottom and can't elevate.......by the fuckin' hole u dig~
tight shyt right there
I could beat you with my eyes closed...and with no hands to even type~
lol....
your rhymez make me sleepy......................as if they were a exhaust pipe!~
Hahah damn

damn son your verse was fukin funny as hell had some nice personals and some nice punchlines...

Hotshh!

U WACK.... WHAT IS THAT FREESTLING? U WILING/
YOU MAD CAUSE YA BABY MOTHER GOT PREGNANT IN RHODE ISLAND(NOT MY BABY)
No that shyt aint even rhyme
AN IS YOU CRAZY,I'LL DAMAGE YA, DONT NOBODY REALLY GIVE A FUCK BOUT CANADA!
THEY CALL ME HOTSH, CAUSE I SPIT HOTSHIT
no you said the same shyt over again.. wack
AND ONLY THING G BALLZ SPIT IS HOT DICK////,U DETECTIVE UNDERCOVER U BE SNITCHIN TO THE FEDS//
wack
THEY CALL HIM G BALLZ AKA SUPER HEAD!!!!!!
wacker
HOW MANY BUMS YOU ATE TO BE 14-5/ COME TO THE BRONX YOU WONT LEAVE ALIVE
YOU BETTER BACKDOWN,THIS IS A CRACKDOWN, U AINT GOTTA WATCH UPN TO SEE A
SMACKDOWN// U A BUM, AND FUC THE HARDWOOD CLASSICS
you god your structure is horrible
WE BALLERS FUC CANADA GO STRETCH FOR THEM GYMNASTICS// JUST CALL ME THE GREat, B BALLZ CANT EQUATE, AN DA DAY I GET ATE, U NIGGAS CATCH A STOMACHACHE
No not a good punchline
damn son you really need to go to tutorial ..and learn what a punchlines and personal is peace

Vote-G-ballz
please return the favor in the battle in my sig against orijional thank you

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You Right That Aint My Hottest/ I Was Trying To Battle Someone Else
But Stop Dickriding G Ballz Cause On Thursday At 6;00 Ill Be On And Looking For Another Battle . U Down?

And If I Lose It'll Be Because Of Your One Vote So Ill Be Coming Hard

I dont even like G-ballz<---hater!!! But he took this battle.

For the reason that...about 5 lines hotshh! said used in his other battle I read.

AN DA DAY I GET ATE, U NIGGAS CATCH A STOMACHACHE

THEY CALL ME HOTSH, CAUSE I SPIT HOTSHIT
AND ONLY THING G BALLZ SPIT IS HOT DICK/

COME TO THE BRONX YOU WONT LEAVE ALIVE
plus he aint even from the bronx!!!! At least i aint know they had a bronx in rhode island.

v/G-Ballz

wha!!!!!! don't be accusing someone in Authenthik Intelligence of dickriding
man!!!!! and how can it be a dickride vote shit my crew & his are doing
a crew battle!!!!


and if ya talking to me for another battle maybe because my cousins just
got back in the city from ontario.

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uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!leave links!

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G-Ballz
structure was pretty good...some of ur lines were a lil stretched though...flow was decent...u had a few metas...some of ur wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...ok personals...

hotshh!
y do u type in all caps...that shit is mad annoying...structure was wack as hell...seperate ur damn lines man...flow was wack as hell due to the wackness of the structure...no metas...no good wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
G-Ballz had the better structure...the more stable flow...more metas...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...G-Ballz tore hotshh! a new asshole...

VOTE - G-BALLZ

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx man...

oh shit...

...i just realized were in the same crew...

honest mistake...though what i said is the truth...

u can get my vote deleted off the poll...

but this battle was one sided as fuck...