aight yo no limit to bars
no time till due
no hater or d/r votes
u drop first aight~one~

ok ok ok

i'm up against this silly nigga named verbal violence/
but when dis battle is ova they gone call him verbal silence/
cuz when i rhyme i stun niggas into a permanent sleep/(to death)
then i put em in the ground and watch they mamas weep/
call me the undertakuh, the soultakuh, the grave makuh/(
i'm the only link between u and yo makuh/god)
and i dont mean to boast, and i dont mean to brag/
but i think i got this one wrapped up in a fuckin grocery bag/
yo if we eva came face to face, then you could call it a face off/
cuz as soon as i seen you nigga, i'd rip yo fuckin face off
but this aint the streets this the net/
and even here i shred niggas up like jason X/
i'll do u like kobe and take yo ass up out the game/
i'll come at u like 50 and foreva curse yo name/ (ja)
double v come at me, see if u can top that/
come harder then mistah tate?, my nigga i doubt that/

aight thats my verse, dont mean to sound real cocky thats just how it came out

aight nigga just to say dont talk about urself through ya whole verse

but heres mine

ayo check it
ya ya aight i heard that silence line one to many times//
i think new b's like u need some plagerized rhymes//
murk u real fast than give u tha signal like mel gibson in signs//
droppin my nine i aint talkin bout da gun but what comes out from behind//
swingin my verbal flows in every direction as i drop lyrical corrections//
im to tha top he stilll steppin its a afce off but there aint nuttin left of him//
jason x huh well im freddy than my flows creep steady trend//
he talkin bout what he gonna do but better yet//
ima murk this cat so hard he thought taffy came in black tar//
my punches swing landin like tarver ur jones u got knocked out//
there aint gonna be a round 2 its like i smoked u up and ur in a droubt//
they say verbal come harder than tate thas why i step up i hear crowds shout//
son u got murked now u tell me whats that about//

uppin fo votes on this drop a link i will drop one for u

uppin fo votes people dont sleep like alwayz lets get some votes
drop a link im sure to get back at ya~one~

come on yall we need some votes up in here, i keep my word when i say i'll return the favor wit an honest vote

uppin....damn is anybody gonna vote on this shit, come on yall!

ya vote so i can win lol j/p tate but vote yall~one~

mistah_tate: you had a nice smooth flow to ur verse...ur personal hits off his name were good, i thought ur punches were strong and ur wordplay with "face off" was hot too....good structure also, u came hard in ur opener and ended off consistent all the way thru.....overall tight verse
verbal violence:good opener and flow in the beginning, structure was alright, some trouble with spellin and shit and kinda stretched lines(a couple)"nuttin left of him"line and "jason" line, but ur shit was good,but u kinda fell off a bit at the end and couldnt quite stay as strong as u did in the beginning..................nice job both but
VOTE:mistah

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i appreciate yo vote, we need some more tho yall c'mon, just read both verses and post ya thoughts and drop a vote