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kay spit ya verse........freestyle only no pre-written or that shit.....

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Freestyle Said In The Rules U Best Not Be Pre_writtin That Shit

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if u aint spit tomorrow...........im goin to the bech tomorrow 7;00 to 6:00 t night

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ima b away till 5:00 tomorrow........best not be pre-written.....

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i nver do pre written shit

good then.................do ya hsit hellrazor......

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tired after 3 freestyles
only after runnin 3 miles
think u the G on the suburb street
try to spit sum gangsta shit but u still weak
holdin dem gats scared to bust dem caps
niggas with hoodies fuckin u up with chains N bats
where do u go from here , sleep with yo eyes wide open
prayin to stay alive , nuthin gone happen that all u hoping
dont start chokin in front of yo own crew Souljah's they all death
don't forget to pass the lead as i take away u & the crew'z last breath

uh uh uh check 1-2..........lol.....

Took Hellrazor two days to finally rite this weak verse
This kids a racist but im half white so he cant call it back in reverse..
"Hells" "runnin three" but has a religiously fantasized obsession wit 8 mile
Only thing hes "Razed" are "miles" of rhymes worse than "Hell" till he "ate" in denial..
Its "Belgium" we better run, the gansgta capitol of the world, Feared by the USA
I wonder what kind of gangsta shit "Razor" will do please dont "cut" any "waffles" today..
Heres some advice stop listening to g-unit, come back to reality, up is ya time
I just merked this "8 mile" wananbe without exceeding past my eight line..

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Well it wasn't pretty but Bigchase pulled this off.

Hell-stop talkin bout G's suburbs caps an shit. Be original. Your verse was way to Played,Basic, an Weak. Overall I say you should veiw other battles an try an formulate summin to the same idea. But Dont Bite.

Big- You fed alot. too much. That's cheating along with lack of originality in your verse. The reason you got this was because of the waffle line. It was original while HellRazor didn't have ne thing of the sort.
[Vote/BigChase
Drop an Honest Vote on the Battles In my Sig. Thanks.

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hell:

had no rythm, flow or structure, terrible verse...
no landed punches, no metas, all around 0/10

big chase:

had some alright structure in there, punches were decent, flow was aight...
...since you had decent flow and structure, and actually had punches that hit.

vote: big chase

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Chase knows me from Rapwarz, and him using a racist joke is like George Bush telling Saddam he's a stupid war-mongering leader....

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hit up the battle in the sig

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bigchase:i liked your wordplay n punches but i agree^^you did feed off his verse but you still came original in some lines i thought your closing was aight......
Hellrazor:you talked about junk,sorry dawg but alot of your rymes were really simple,i think ya should've at least played off his name for a punchline or something,your style seemed like an audio,but still did'nt contain many elements needed 2 win this battle...

vote//bigchase
please hit 1 of these battles up,"honestly" or don't bother voting...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134328
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134245