Aaight spit 10 lines

No hating thatz it!!

No time limit, nothing like that?.......................

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when u hear da name bleek u kno its that S.W.A.T./ whos da best bleek,Jae,Azzociate,and pac/i spit fire u'll think its about 100 degrees/ my slugz will stick to u like a cancerous desease/nigga u can get on deeze/ and retire from da game/nigga we all know that ure ryhmes are wack like nintendo games/and i suggest that u run when i show up on ya block/ cuz ima leave ya ass dead in a body bag hard as a rock/im sick wit it nigga cant u see/man i'll freeze up yo block like christmas eve/and i'm da son of tha one that'll make u burn in hell/ nigga i got that fire/I'm da name in da streets that tha crack heads yell/cuz im ready ta make moves and stop acting like a gemnists/and nigga i'll run up on u and rob u for yo intrest/and when i speak i speak tha truth/nigga jus quit cuz one of my ryhmes might jus chip yo tooth!

aight DA PIMP I mean Young_Bleek

yo my nigga will u hurry up and key in ure free!!!

I was out playin ball sucka..

Check it:
Young Bleeks a fagit, sayin "I love when you shoot cum in me"/
him beatin me is often denied...like "Clinton"'s relationship with Lewinsky.
Get "fucked up" by guys, this nigga got excited as fuck/
because he was thought he was gonna get it anally with two dicks provided ta suck.
I put "slugs" in this fag, so he patted me on the tushy/
"What the Fuck!?", this bitch thought I was gonna put "fists" in his pussy.
Wannabe Petey Pablo, singin that bitch's "Goodies" song/
this guy is a "Freak" for dicks who "Leaks" blood in his thong.
His off jobs probably a construction worker, hoo can never get to my par/
So "Y-B" a rapper when you cant even drop a "hard bar".

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Upppin for Votes...................................

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young_bleek
what the fuck was that?...write ur lines down the page not in fuckin paragraphs...flow fell off cause ur structure was so wack...no metas...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

GEE
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few metas....wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had good personals...GEE had the better structure...the more stable flow...more metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that..GEE gets my vote...

VOTE - GEE

Good lookin.............still uppin for some votes

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YOUNG BLEEK:YOU GOTTA WORK ON THAT STRUCTURE DAWG,IT WAS REALLY BAD,I BARELY SEEN ANY SORT OF PUNCH,YOU MADE IT EASY FOR GEE....
GEE:I LIKED YOUR FLOW,YA HAD ALOT OF GOOD ELEMENTS,SOME STRETCHED LINES,BUT I DO THAT 2,ANYWAYS I THOUGHT YOUR WORDPLAY WAS GOOD 2,THIS WAS'NT A VERY EVEN BATTLE.....

VOTE/GEE
RETURN THE FAVOUR:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134020
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025

Good lookin out......Still Uppin for votes...........

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Ihmmm...

GEE: iv seen you come better before.. but it was enuff to get you this win.. punches were present.. they didnt hit that hard, but harder then bleeks..


bleek:that would sound tight on audio, but in text man you gotta make your shit alot more complex.. you had some nice metas and a nice flow i guess..you didnt throw any text type punches at all.. you had gun play, buts about it.. i think you outa be a audio head.. good try tho.. keep at it..

vote/Gee

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134057

^^ give an honest opinion and vote to that one..

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

Gee sucked waaay less than the other dude. had some gay crappy played metas, other dude had none... tried some wordplay... whatever.

v/ GEE.