8 lines
due in 1 hr so 7 10 for west coast
10 10 for east coast

no crew beef dr votes

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^which means its due in 8 10 for west
and 11 10 for east

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naw man, make it 10 lines, i think thats the minimum...

I'll drop here in about half an hour

man this dude spits dirt more than the fuckin worm in his hand (his avvy)
he only spits shit, his lines are unstable like houses built in sand
We both noobs but we can see he ain't on the same level as me
He ain't dropped but i know he'll be wack, just check it and see
This kid wants to be tight, but he can't even spell his own name
He's got 30 minutes to spit, his time is runnin out like trumps rogaine
It's a shame, u a noob like me, but we can see that we're not the same
Cuz me man your lame, and i can see by your avvy that you got no game
Aight man, you dont have to spit, you can just gimme the win by DQ
Because i know imma merk you, so just admit to the fact that i beat u


Aight, i just keyed that real quick...

Quick one...

This kid doesnt drop-fire,he get's dropped in fire, no wonder he's livin in hell..
His bars couldn't be bad ass if they were attached to a jail cell..
This kid fell-off when his level was below-ground..
Just like a deaf convention in winter this kid can't feel my sound..
You and your avy have a lot alike!,your unseen in this battle..
This kid gets grounded from beef like legless cattle..
Your verse contains no personals nor punches nor wordplay..
It seams that no one can fit in your jeans,cause its too small anyway!..
A black plague?so i've done my job, your suicide kid..
If your name represents sickness,you probably have nothin to do wit it..

aight you both seemed even skilled:
black plague,i was'nt feelin your verse at all,need work on creating effective punches,i found you explained them outright,jus 2 simple,vocab could be better,but i liked your structure...
izotope:i thought you came alot harder in this battle,had better vocab,n good punches for a noob,i was'nt likin your closer,not a bad idea"i jus don't think it was written write....both need alot of elevation though...
vote/izotope

Izi took this with punches, flow, structure, nearly every category. BP you shoulda came harder man, decent verses from both but Izo took this one.

Vote Izo

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man this dude spits dirt more than the fuckin worm in his hand (his avvy)
he only spits shit, his lines are unstable like houses built in sand
Ok metiphore. avy personal..blah 4/10
We both noobs but we can see he ain't on the same level as me
He ain't dropped but i know he'll be wack, just check it and see
Seem'd filler 3/10
This kid wants to be tight, but he can't even spell his own name
He's got 30 minutes to spit, his time is runnin out like trumps rogaine
good metiphore and good personal 6/10
It's a shame, u a noob like me, but we can see that we're not the same
Cuz me man your lame, and i can see by your avvy that you got no game
used both lines in previouse bar's 1/10
Aight man, you dont have to spit, you can just gimme the win by DQ
Because i know imma merk you, so just admit to the fact that i beat u
kinda repeated yourself in your last line twice. 2/10
Black Plague. I have seen better from you. You repeated your self in two separate occasion's in your verse. Kinda show'd you really didnt have much to say. Maybe writer's block. Your one bar I like was the bad spellin on the name/Donald trump one. Try an spit constantly at that level and you'll elevate.
16/50

Izo
This kid doesnt drop-fire,he get's dropped in fire, no wonder he's livin in hell..
His bars couldn't be bad ass if they were attached to a jail cell..
kinda weak metiphore-blah 2/10
This kid fell-off when his level was below-ground..
Just like a deaf convention in winter this kid can't feel my sound..
how u fall-off when ur below-ground? don't get what winter has to do wit anything. 1/10
You and your avy have a lot alike!,your unseen in this battle..
This kid gets grounded from beef like legless cattle..
Cattle-Battle...been over this before...everyone's used the ryhem scheme. 1/10
Your verse contains no personals nor punches nor wordplay..
It seams that no one can fit in your jeans,cause its too small anyway!..
You fed off his verse. NO no. 1/10
A black plague?so i've done my job, your suicide kid..
If your name represents sickness,you probably have nothin to do wit it..
Nice. really nice closer. 7/10
Little confused about that winter line. Didn't quite get it. Advice is to not feed. It kill's your verse as far as creativity an originality goes. Your closer was the best line in the battle. Like I said to Plague..make the rest of your lines like thatand you'll elevate.
12/50
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Metaphysik to the words right out of my mouth. I just think Izy came nicer in just about every category.

v/ Izotope

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man this dude spits dirt more than the fuckin worm in his hand (his avvy)
he only spits shit, his lines are unstable like houses built in sand
good opener......6/10
We both noobs but we can see he ain't on the same level as me
He ain't dropped but i know he'll be wack, just check it and see
coulda been better though....4/10
This kid wants to be tight, but he can't even spell his own name
He's got 30 minutes to spit, his time is runnin out like trumps rogaine
haha....funny....5/10
It's a shame, u a noob like me, but we can see that we're not the same
Cuz me man your lame, and i can see by your avvy that you got no game
played....4/10
Aight man, you dont have to spit, you can just gimme the win by DQ
Because i know imma merk you, so just admit to the fact that i beat u
decent closer.....5/10

34/50


This kid doesnt drop-fire,he get's dropped in fire, no wonder he's livin in hell..
His bars couldn't be bad ass if they were attached to a jail cell..
1st line was aight.........5/10
This kid fell-off when his level was below-ground..
Just like a deaf convention in winter this kid can't feel my sound..
Not bad.....7/10
You and your avy have a lot alike!,your unseen in this battle..
This kid gets grounded from beef like legless cattle..
decent line.....5/10
Your verse contains no personals nor punches nor wordplay..
It seams that no one can fit in your jeans,cause its too small anyway!..
whack........3/10
A black plague?so i've done my job, your suicide kid..
If your name represents sickness,you probably have nothin to do wit it..
not good rhymin have to force it...3/10

33/50

V/The Black Plague

Black plague rhymed- but as far as any dope punches or metas or wordplay it wasn't there- and you said your both newbs twice and talked about his avvy twice-- izotope had better punches, his avy line was funny- his disses were funnier and he actually included a little bit of wordplay-- vote-- izotope.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133452

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