Min lines-10
Max lines-20
Check in before postin ya lines
all regular rules apply
no editing

you spit first

all spits due at saturday
10:00 pm

checkin in ill drop later tonight or early sat

__________________



yeah yeah im ill!

kinda hard when i can't do much personals...

His name is lyricalOnslaught,he has no domain he so wack he has to use a alias to get his fame../
Bitch, i rip muther fuckers apart like you, take this 9 and split you into 2/
Few punks escape my wraith im like a hurrican gettin ready to crush yo path./
Gasp for air when that shell hit ya..nuttin personal but i had to get ya/
Rip ya and then spit ya out..., Its a figure of speach dawg.. even George Bush could have figured that 1 out..../
Style Change
Easy Come easy go thats what i always say, spray this uzi at yo crib.. maybe then you'll go away and stay in some garbage can.. cause thats where you belong your like a cheech with out the chong../
i kill bitchs 4 fun.. hell i dont even use a gun, take my wooden bat and let it hang out the winda... cause im gettin ready to bust the head of a fuckin pretenda../

Explanation
LyricalOnslaught: Says he is under a differnamt name
*Most of this i had to make up* lol its weak its gay oh well
Havnt raped in a long time Buh Bye. And GL not like you need it

__________________



yeah yeah im ill!

Ohh shit this is tite they actually have computers in orlando
ok here im checkin in

__________________
Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

I'll remove you with the delete key, he had to make up fake personals
His Played rhymes while my punches and disses come in military arsenals
Your lines are stretched up, lost points in your structure and your flow
He a flyweight, his rhymes still sucks and he signed up a long time ago
Say he a hurricane, he can't reach me cause im the highest mountaintop
Already this fake MC choking in the battle, get this nigga a cough drop
My words and lyrics has got your mouth so dry that you can’t even spit
I’m going to KO’ you like what Eminem did to Papa Doc and Lickety Split
I know that you be ghostwriting your verse, this kid trying to fool me.
Because if you can't look through your lines of rhymes, then M can't C.
This kid claim he a hustler, cause he smuggling to many porn pics.
Because it’s like I'm eating cereal, because this fruit is just trix
MC.CM keep saying he's dope, so I'm smoking him to get higher.
And that is why I'll be burning Cm, like throwing rulers in fire.

__________________
Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

haha nice... you got tons of personals on me oh well ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ uppin

__________________



yeah yeah im ill!

Hands down Lyrical on slaught got this. The personals were nice, Structure was very nice. Mc. Cm i don't even know what u were tryin to say, your structure was messed up dawg and your paragraph jus didn't flow.

vote=Lyrical

__________________
Ya BiTch FA ShO!

Lyrical On Slaught takes dis battle witout a doubt. He had tight personals and flowed through da whole thing. Your verse was dope dawg, keep it up.

Not McCm or w/e da fuck your name is....your structure is way off I couldnt even understand have da shit u were sayin so your content quality was down in my book.

vote: LyricalOnslaught


DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON DA BATTLES BELOW

__________________
<marquee>"Real lyricists don't even respect you or take you serious. It's not that we don't like you, we hate you, PERIOD."</marquee>

Ohh the hate!!! lol ^^^^^ uppin more lets get my ass ko'd people

__________________



yeah yeah im ill!

UPPPPIInnnNNN^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^^ ^ ^^ ^ 4 like the 6495 time ha j/p ^^^^

__________________



yeah yeah im ill!

^^^^ uppin com on peepz can i get at least 1 vote haha

__________________



yeah yeah im ill!

yo it ok man you did ok too but doesnt it feel embarasing losing to a newbie? lol uppin on this thanks for the honest votes and once i get more posts i'll vote on your battles

__________________
Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

Lyrical Onslaught Hands Down Gets Tha Vote... Had Some Wicked Lyrics, Nice Structure, And Madd Crazy Personals... Mc.cm Couldnt Undastand Ya Brah.... My Votes Goes To Lyrical Onslaught

__________________
WHACK MUTHAFUCKAZ NEED TO KILL THA NOIZE....

Yo Lyrcal Onslaught Was Nice! Mc.cm U Were Cool But U Need To B A Bit Clearer!


*everyone Check Marx Vs Slugga On Da Second Page Post Sum Real Votes*