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07-12-04, 12:45 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 48BE E3B7
check..
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...881#post1406881 http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...885#post1406885 http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...887#post1406887 http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...890#post1406890
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07-12-04, 11:20 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 8C64 DD55
check i dunno who spits da lines first? i aint dat good im jus doin dis fo fun...iight go when ya ready i guezz
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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness... ...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness... ...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts... ...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts... |
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07-14-04, 10:55 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 9B39 FEBF
yo dis shit aint even supposed 2 be hot here but imma jus say suntin corny ~!I1I!~
shoot u in da back of da head ya nose poked out n' ya head throbbin.... 1 shot in ya breast will red ya chest u'll look like a robin....
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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness... ...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness... ...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts... ...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts... |
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07-15-04, 03:42 PM | #5 | |||||
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IP: 9DA6 C725
Ok Dont Have 2 Try 4 This...But o-well
Neva 2 Win A Leauge Times Up On Tha Clock... Tha Day He Makes a Punchline?? .................When Shaq Make 3point Shot....
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07-15-04, 07:01 PM | #6 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
This was a pretty tight one.
Magician, I think you should have dropped better, cuz that punch was really that great. But it flowed alright I guess. But good try. Polifik, lol this was tight shit. Nice job wit the Shaq shootin' 3 shit. I liked this one. You didn't try, but it was still a hot punch. v/Polifik |
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07-15-04, 07:03 PM | #7 | |||||
retired.
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IP: FFF9 59CF
blah blah... poor wording on the first one, poor concept on the second. pol still wins though.
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07-15-04, 10:14 PM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: 539E 8B55
shaq made a 3 polifik no beef but dat was dumb 2 say...shaq made a buzza beater 3 when he was in orlando iight ~!i1i!~
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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness... ...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness... ...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts... ...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts... |
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07-15-04, 10:41 PM | #9 | |||||
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IP: 03AF E720
^^ Wow Once....upp................................
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07-15-04, 11:10 PM | #10 | |||||||
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IP: 539E 8B55
good shit doe lolz u prolly won so ~!i1i!~
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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness... ...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness... ...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts... ...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts... |
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07-15-04, 11:12 PM | #11 | ||||
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IP: 3240 794D
Da Magician dont forget to vote on 5 battles and edit ur check in with the links....ery link u are missing u get a point deducted from ur points....and the points make up where u r on the rankings...
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07-17-04, 02:59 PM | #12 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 2C69 8F6D
polifick nice bar, good flow, concept was wack but it was iight
magician i kno u coulda dropped hotter, it wasnt worded well, good multis but the punch didnt hit, no hate v/pol |
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07-17-04, 07:02 PM | #13 | ||||||
pze.
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IP: F042 BB72
-Damagician7.
shoot u in da back of da head ya nose poked out n' ya head throbbin.... 1 shot in ya breast will red ya chest u'll look like a robin.... coo flow, aight wordplay, aight punch -Polifick. Neva 2 Win A Leauge Times Up On Tha Clock... Tha Day He Makes a Punchline?? .................When Shaq Make 3point Shot.... average flow, coo wordplay, straight punch Overall, I think Pol got this. He had wittier wordplay and a better worded punch. Mag, yu had too much of the same word/idea in your verse that wrecked your creativity, like shot/shoot, head and basically made another gun line extrememly obvious. Pol, your structure's really annoying, but I can live with it haha. Maybe add a more complex flow next time mayne. Ya still did aight though. Vote - Polifick. |
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07-18-04, 02:55 AM | #14 | |||||
.:So~So~Good:.
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IP: C241 FE41
Vote=Polifick
Magician had a ok punch,but Polifick had a nice punch.Nice wordplay on it.Decent punch.
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07-18-04, 05:05 AM | #15 | |||||||
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IP: 0CD4 8C79
I gotta say..pol won this punchline....da magician..u used..head to many times..it mad the 2 lines boring and really weak..polifick..had me laughing after hearing ...the shaq...line lol
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