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07-20-04, 04:51 AM | #1 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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Iwillripyou vs. motif vs. Maddog
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battles go up monday check in by wensday verses due by thursday votes due by the next sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 12 line max. REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!
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07-20-04, 06:37 PM | #2 | |||
The Truth
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IP: B682 856F
Check
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07-21-04, 03:38 AM | #3 | |||||||||
...Belong...
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IP: 4C49 64C6
Checkin in
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07-21-04, 07:05 AM | #4 | |||||||||
...Belong...
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IP: 4C49 64C6
Here we go...
I'd hate to say this but this is 1 sided aint no boxing match/ Both guys have towels to their arms ready to drop coz they aint battle cats/ Motif the real Dreamcast throwback saw u...and threw you back/ And Iwillripyou says it all really a name like that Destined to be wack/ Only way u two hittin hard is if u snortin strong on crack/ U can 'handicap' this battle...but i guarentee u'll give each others smacks/* Guy's u couldn't make a master plan if u joined 'master minds'/ U could try but why u like home alone crooks gettin hurt by a kid @ 9/ So here's my list; motif! U wack, iwillripyou...na aint checked in yet/ But like a confident bookie...their crapness is a safe bet/ 10 lines i'm done...
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07-21-04, 01:35 PM | #5 | |||
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Lol hmmm will isnt gonna show i dont think..
Run the "Boards" Make his Mind have to cash rent Checks.. ...Turn Carnivor and Eat this Pussy's Verse call me T-Rex.. Make u Chry-Slers more then Bad Motors made by "Mopar".. Inject My Verse into your Blood Make your Artirys Char.. Your More "Go Active" then a Mcdonalds Adult Toy.. Co-Lead with Tony u cant Handle it Your just a Decoy.. The way u battle Herbs They should just flow Toward-Yea.. Just Beat the "Bull" Dog Like i was a 1 Man Def. for Georgia.. quik key
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07-21-04, 04:50 PM | #6 | |||||
..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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Ok Other Guy Must Be Dques 4 Not checkin But Any Way
Opener- I'd hate to say this but this is 1 sided aint no boxing match/ Both guys have towels to their arms ready to drop coz they aint battle cats/ 6/10 Run the "Boards" Make his Mind have to cash rent Checks.. ...Turn Carnivor and Eat this Pussy's Verse call me T-Rex.. 8/10 Section/Motif Closer So here's my list; motif! U wack, iwillripyou...na aint checked in yet/ But like a confident bookie...their crapness is a safe bet/ lol Alright 8/10 The way u battle Herbs They should just flow Toward-Yea.. Just Beat the "Bull" Dog Like i was a 1 Man Def. for Georgia.. 9.2/10 Nice winner-Motif
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07-21-04, 05:08 PM | #7 | |||||
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Punches-Tie
Personals-Motif...both had one and Motif's was better Flow-Motif Wordplay-Motif Creativity-Motif Overall-Motif....for a superior verse....good battle tho Motif: ps: that chry-sler line was pretty creative.... |
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07-21-04, 05:59 PM | #8 | ||||
GONE... I QUIT
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IP: 64E3 6603
wut happned to the third person.......
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07-21-04, 06:42 PM | #9 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: 4C49 64C6
omg.. i really dont want to offend anyone here but after reading the first verse.. i was think "jesus this guy must be new or sumthin... he's gonna get ripped a new asshole." but no... the second kid came wack too..... both WACKITY WACKITY WACK WACK WACK!!!!.. you both need to understand the concept of a punch.. which is obviously short for PUNCHLINE.. which is the funny part after the setup.. neither of you really attempted ANY wordplay or ANY punchlines.... it was all basic statemental shit..... vote: the second guy coz his structure wasnt fucked
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07-21-04, 11:41 PM | #10 | ||||
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IP: 4C49 64C6
^ye what he said...both of you dropped shit. I would say Motif gets this because he put slightly more effort into his shit punches than Mad Dog did. Both need to elevate alot.
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07-22-04, 02:25 AM | #11 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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IP: 95FF 1D86
uppin for votes...i'll edit this with my vote tomorrow
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07-22-04, 05:34 AM | #12 | |||||||
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My vote goes to Motif. He had way better wordplay and multis. I was feelin his verse cuz it flowed better also. Both did a good job though.
Punches: motif Structure: maddog Multis: motif Metas: motif Flow: Motif Vote: Motif |
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07-22-04, 09:40 AM | #13 | |||||||
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this was a pretty good battle props to both battlers.
MAd Dog, your verse was pretty good. You however didn't have that many hard hittin' punches. Yo flow was good, but it went off a tiny bit, in some places. But overall it was pretty good Motif, you had a good verse too. You had some nice hard hittin' punches in there. You flow was hot too. Overall, a very nice battle. Props to both of you for a good one. v/Motif Please return the favor wit honest vote on: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136188 |
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07-22-04, 07:21 PM | #14 | ||||
Dope.
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v/Motif
Both dropped pretty bad in this but Motif was better of the 2 with harder hitting punches.. pz.
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07-22-04, 07:33 PM | #15 | ||||
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yo motif took this one with better punches and wordplay, not a great battle at all. i expected more but this one very one sided.
vote- motif
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