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07-20-04, 04:43 AM | #1 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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Shadow(1-1) vs. Durmil (1-0)
IP: 95FF 1D86
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battles go up monday check in by wensday verses due by thursday votes due by the next sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 12 line max. REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!
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07-20-04, 01:19 PM | #2 | |||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: B90F 540D
check....
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07-20-04, 03:53 PM | #3 | |||||||
bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
good luck durmil..bring some heat..pece
voted... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136188 http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1429893 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129842
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07-21-04, 09:42 PM | #4 | |||||||
bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
a no show is the only way youll keep your respect.. u cant do audio..and your terrible at textual dialect- the only time you hit hard..is when you "tappin-rectum"- your previous verses are wack..dotn belive?check em'- did u take exlax or is ur style naturally "just shit"?- have vango jizz in ur mouth ..hell "teach u how 2 spit- see hoem boy..they predicted me..the odds are against u- u winning it will only happen in dreams"have some1 pinch u- u wont get better so for you theres no light at the end of this tunnel- i dont have to "cum-hard" ur my bitch just open up and guzzle- please dont spit a verse ur rhymes truthffully just bore me- ur not usless after all u can walk behind me and hold my pants up for me-
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07-22-04, 04:10 AM | #5 | |||||
Banned: Biting
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Fiyah!!!!!!
IP: B90F 540D
*~Sigh-Anora Shadow~* This gon be over quick, and you might not wanna know this shit
But pardon my french when I say I just bonjour(boned your) bitch Excuse me for being 'blunt'....but you could never 'roll with me' Topicals! the shit you spit is like a 'building' all u ever got is 'stories'* It's morality that half way through his verse he accepted his sexuality** Now shadow makin daily trips to his doctor askin "check my nuts for abnormalities" Ya gettin beat up, left wit more 'problems' then 'Jay-Z under emotional distress' Moe-say-ick? lol sounds like a way of exposing ur genitals to the same sex*** Ur shit i've read...couldn't swallow the compititon if u gave the mic head Leavin ya vision blurred like ya sig...and bitch like you Mo-Town is dead**** You got the wackest style...and i aplogize for kickin ya when ya down But Shadow quit now...cuz ya just got 'assed out' like a 'hospital gown' Explinations: *He focuses on topicals....basically hes just the king of makin stories **He used a pink font in the last half of his verse...very girly and very gay (he admitted his gay sexuality by usin the pink font....) ***play on his crew name ****there's no longer Mo-Town the label is dead...just call it Detroit for fukes sakes....and his Mosaic sig is very blurred and terrible All The Wordplay should be understood...if not ask or dont vote |
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07-22-04, 05:57 AM | #6 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 69FE 68C6
Yo tight battle in this one. Both of yall had ill verses but my vote goes to durmil cuz his shit was more complexed. Shadow had nice punches but it was simple.
Punches: tie Structure: tie Metas: durmil Multis: durmil FLow: tie Vote: Durmil |
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07-22-04, 09:24 AM | #7 | ||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: 4C49 64C6
shadow didnt come that hard at all but at least he was dissin well. I mean he had 2 played punches.....
did u take exlax or is ur style naturally "just shit"?- have vango jizz in ur mouth ..hell "teach u how 2 spit- u wont get better so for you theres no light at the end of this tunnel- i dont have to "cum-hard" ur my bitch just open up and guzzle- the rest was basic & had no complexity in the punches at all but he was sorta consistent & making "cusses" i guess. So vote shadow...u have a slight ego so let me break it down why u lost rather than complain after my punch & make claims that I dont ur punches. BTW DONT EXPLAIN UR PUNCHES..WE ARENT MONKEYS...if ur punches are good u wont need 2 explain them This gon be over quick, and you might not wanna know this shit But pardon my french when I say I just bonjour(boned your) bitch ok original...never seen it before & that was pretty funny..ur best line. Excuse me for being 'blunt'....but you could never 'roll with me' Topicals! the shit you spit is like a 'building' all u ever got is 'stories'* 1st line is played...not hard...the 2nd line isnt eve a diss...u had wordplay but not a punch.....how is a diss 2 say he writers stories? It's morality that half way through his verse he accepted his sexuality** Now shadow makin daily trips to his doctor askin "check my nuts for abnormalities" wack...seriously...not funny or complex. Ya gettin beat up, left wit more 'problems' then 'Jay-Z under emotional distress' Moe-say-ick? lol sounds like a way of exposing ur genitals to the same sex*** this was even worse. That 2nd line was awful. How the fuck does mosaic sound ANYTHING homosexual? Ur shit i've read...couldn't swallow the compititon if u gave the mic head Leavin ya vision blurred like ya sig...and bitch like you Mo-Town is dead**** erm...i gess the 2nd line was a personal. You got the wackest style...and i aplogize for kickin ya when ya down But Shadow quit now...cuz ya just got 'assed out' like a 'hospital gown' PLAYED this 2nd line was funny when it was done like 2 years back. so obvious vote Shadow. |
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07-22-04, 11:35 AM | #8 | |||||||
A legendary OG
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IP: A03F 720C
Punches: durmil
Structure: shadow Metas: durmil Multis: durmil FLow: Shadow.. vote durmil...that was a damn good battle to both...
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07-22-04, 01:30 PM | #9 | |||||
..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 0F10 5916
Ok
Opener- a no show is the only way youll keep your respect.. u cant do audio..and your terrible at textual dialect- 8.4/10 This gon be over quick, and you might not wanna know this shit But pardon my french when I say I just bonjour(boned your) bitch ^^ Perfer 2 Your Opponent Not 2 His Bitch..7/10 Closer please dont spit a verse ur rhymes truthffully just bore me- ur not usless after all u can walk behind me and hold my pants up for me- hahahahah 8/10 You got the wackest style...and i aplogize for kickin ya when ya down But Shadow quit now...cuz ya just got 'assed out' like a 'hospital gown' Pretty Nice 8/10 But Winner Of The Verse Is Shadow
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07-22-04, 01:57 PM | #10 | |||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: B90F 540D
Apothesis....saying all he's got is stories is a punch?!?!? its sayin hes bullshit at batle's and he does topicals cuz all he's ever got is stories and not battle versus....are u fuckin stupid?
and if you dont like my second line w/e but u cant ignore a personal.... but ya w/e uppin for more votes |
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07-22-04, 11:49 PM | #11 | |||
Paris Hilton Gone Crip
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IP: E050 384F
STructure: Both
Flow: tie personals: Tie punches: Shadow enjoyed: Tie vote: Shadow
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07-23-04, 12:24 AM | #12 | |||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 51B6 E5B8
Punches: durmil
Structure: shadow Metas: durmil Multis: durmil FLow: Shadow overall: durmil |
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07-23-04, 03:31 AM | #13 | ||||
The Truth
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IP: B682 856F
Im nto explaining
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Exactly
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07-23-04, 01:03 PM | #14 | ||||
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IP: 7B6F 73CE
i think shadow took this battle, he harder punches, closer was tight n funny and had some o.k personals, D didnt come his best here wiv some played lines n some basic filler barz, flow was tight from both n structure was good but shadow had a stronger verse!!!
oh n don't explain ur verse....pz v/shadow
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07-23-04, 02:10 PM | #15 | |||||||
bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
uppin 5-3 my favor
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