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J_TROOPER | 5 | 55.56% | |
Timeless | 4 | 44.44% | |
Voters: 9. You may not vote on this poll |
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07-23-04, 08:22 PM | #1 |
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Timeless Vs J_trooper
IP: 6203 C8D4
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Due 30 Minz After Check In (no Exeptions) No Dik Rydin, Crew Vote Etc.... GOOD LUCK MAN |
07-23-04, 08:22 PM | #2 |
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Check......on You Man...........................................
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07-23-04, 08:25 PM | #3 | |
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naw we goin 10/15
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07-23-04, 08:26 PM | #4 | |
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waitin on u 2 agree then ima check in
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07-23-04, 08:27 PM | #5 |
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Ok 10 - 15 Lines..... Whatever....................
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07-23-04, 08:29 PM | #6 | |
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IP: D135 D6AF
check in
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07-23-04, 08:53 PM | #7 |
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IP: 6203 C8D4
I kill kids like you for a living, i slightly gone mad r-kelly
Let's face it... MY on-net career's lookin up... ....and yours is lookin up to me I smash you like mirrors with J's face cast your like a window in my rectum... coz you a Payne(pain) in my ass But I'm dropping you boy, like childs game of hot potato Cuz the dopest thing you ever formed... ...came outta a can of Play-Doh. your not religious? but you should now pray to jehova coz this panzie didnt have a chance tho... ...like sunday mornings with the mower!!! Didnt wanna check for 12 lines? even more lines for his diss J your like armless kids at birthdays... ...you will never carry a gift!! Another mcee flattened as i quickly fly-by this battle is like rugby matchs won by kicks... ...because i didnt even try!!! |
07-23-04, 08:58 PM | #8 | |
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IP: D135 D6AF
They all ready pre-warned you that im deadly like one of a Twisted Televangalist
Ya Heart.. is gettin Dissolved from Bars.. that resemble... ones from a Mechanic Call me Arragent but my Perception is that neva have i witnessed any Competition Deadly Lyrical Ambushes touched Front lines.. Newbie of the year.. my Nomination Look Timeless my rhyme is "This" that your Bitchless Murder Graphical Scriptures Vividly Paint my Pictures.10-0 "no mo"mr Time u will never Experience the Gifted Please ya Verses you spittin to me come back.... with more holes than Swisscheese Witness how carefully "Silence Timeless" not Tanya Hardin but i will take off ya Knees Logically u will "C'. thats its Impossible for Me 2 lose Squables especially since im Tellin Pussy Aroma from every bar Time has sent me ive been through more bars than a Felon Neva get the Second Chance to Take the Upper Hand from the rhymes im Deliverin Strictly Pride Tested Notice the Signature Basically like a seizure i will leave u Shiverin
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07-23-04, 09:00 PM | #9 | |
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IP: D135 D6AF
They all ready pre-warned you that im deadly like one of a Twisted Televangalist
Ya Heart.. is gettin Dissolved from Bars.. that resemble... ones from a Mechanic Call me Arragent but my Perception is that neva have i witnessed any Competition Deadly Lyrical Ambushes touched Front lines.. Newbie of the year.. my Nomination Look Timeless my rhyme is "This" that your Bitchless Murder Graphical Scriptures Vividly Paint my Pictures.10-0 "no mo"mr Time u will never Experience the Gifted Please ya Verses you spittin to me come back.... with more holes than Swisscheese Witness how carefully "Silence Timeless" not Tanya Hardin but i will take off ya Knees Logically u will "C'. thats its Impossible for Me 2 lose Squables especially since im Tellin Pussy Aroma from every bar Time has sent me ive been through more bars than a Felon Neva get the Second Chance to Take the Upper Hand from the rhymes im Deliverin Strictly Pride Tested Notice the Signature Basically like a seizure i will leave u Shiverin ______________
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07-23-04, 09:45 PM | #10 |
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yo j that was hot b.. and timeless came atchu... this one's close u both on that same pedestal of hotness... but ima give it to j.. that's ma dawg.. i liked his punches a lil betta but props to both of ya.. stay up
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07-23-04, 09:54 PM | #11 |
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IP: 76A3 9826
breakdown
flow- timeless punches- j structure- j personal enjoyment- j hardness- j personals- nobody really ties thats tha breakdown of ma vote Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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07-23-04, 10:18 PM | #12 | |
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IP: 4289 77F4
ok:
timeless, you had the overall better verse here, you had good flow and structure, ya punches hit hard and you had some creative vocabulary in ya verse,good job.... trooper:your structure was good,but ya lines is stretched a bit, but you had a decent verse, i just dont think vocab wise you were better than your opponent, you need to come harder, and maybe use some personals in there as well... VOTE:timeless
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07-23-04, 11:14 PM | #13 | |
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Timeless: opener, was good, u had some alright punches, nuttin amazin...u had good flow throughout ur verse, and good structure..no personals...ok verse
6/10.... J: Ugly ass structure, do sumthin about that...u also had weak punches, ur lines were stretched, not good doggy....... 4/10... v/timeless for an all around better verse.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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07-23-04, 11:51 PM | #14 | |
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IP: 001B 3DEE
this battle sucked
but i was feelin j's more timeless u didn't rap as much as u should wen i read urs i wanted to stop j u didn't do as well as u could of but urs was more interesting than his punches i give- j structure and flow i give- timeless vocab-j personal enjoyment goest to- j no hatin v= J_trooper Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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07-23-04, 11:56 PM | #15 | |
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Timeless im not feelin your Structure It Kindof Threw Me Off ...
Punches: J Flow: Time Personals: J Metaphors: n/a Enjoyment: J Overall: J took this one... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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