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This is me checkin in

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List of people who've Ducked Me:
KnightShade
mAtW
Bizzy

alrite checkin in

okay

well im checkin in again where's ur verse read them rules u first

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List of people who've Ducked Me:
KnightShade
mAtW
Bizzy

o my bad i forgot about this but anyway i did this in like 10 minutes so it aint that hot

first mistake horizon made comin out the gates was tryin to test me
textcee? this kids fake u bout as real as pro wrestling
horizons a gay cat and my hood it stays straight
this kids flow falls apart like michael jackson's gay face
im eating this kid alive only just because im starvin cuz
have u 'shakin' in the pavement way more than harlem does (harlem shake)
you can drop it how u want but im dodgin when u attack me
i flow hard like a rock u a pussy like a cat B
nobody cares if u lose cause ur verse nobody feels it
i'll make u 'die hard'er than samuel L. and bruce willis
overall im better than u i got skillz u cant fuk wit
call me the mc hammer cause u niggas jus cant touch it
ur flow embarasses rap so ima pulvarize and punish u
my lyrics so sick im givin kids like u the stomach flu

ayo where u at?

ay man where u at?

str8 man, nice drop but a lot of self glorification and overplayed concept(the gay shit)...looks like he got to scarred to drop...anyway hit my battle with Djulien up

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okay bitch. i been waitin for ur verse for a long freakin time man hurry up and spit

ayo is u scared? can i get this kid dq'd and take a win if he dont respond?

MMM AM I SCARED...NOPE JUS ABSENT...so let me show you how to A) murder and B) die

Pussies think they hott...like this fag str8_hood/
Hmm who thinks he should die...i think he str8_should/

Comin up weak and no good how can u call this classic/
Ur lyrics r dry like ur mouth...better get that chap-stick/

Listen to urself even u aint feelin ur rhymes want me to prove it/


Go home u embarrassment askin where i am when it took u 3 years 2 spit/
Look up ur lyrics a) they shit b) they bit & c)...
....how u str8 hood when every action u do is legit/

Ur names like a security blanket...u see trouble n u hug it/
Runnin in clubs wit a buldge....calm down ladies thats his blanket...
........he tucked it/

Fuck this freak show i'd speak slow come weak atcha ho and still kill ya/
Now he deceased bro bite me but u cant read bro now u like MJ...
.......i thrilled ya/

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List of people who've Ducked Me:
KnightShade
mAtW
Bizzy

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List of people who've Ducked Me:
KnightShade
mAtW
Bizzy

OK.......

THUG..structure/flow woz ok...but simple......elevate that coz it catches the eye..
first impressions n all.....
punches were fairly weak and played..micheal jackson n shit.come up wit sum new shit......
basically it woz a newb verse.not bad.but def elevation needed

GANGSTAR-nice structure..it set the punches up well..
i liked your wordplay,sum original punches and concepts.......
overall your verse woz of a higher standard in every area....
micheal jackson is played now though...everyones using it...ive used it twice lol!

vote-gangstarshit

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free agent

ok uppin 4 more votes