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-v- 5 83.33%
oOnOn_StOpOo 1 16.67%
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Old 07-26-04, 11:33 AM   #1
oOnOn_StOpOo
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From: dA 8oO9iE dOwN bRoNxX
oOnOn_StOpOo vs. -v-

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Aight....quikk Rules...real Simple.....5 To 10 Lines Due In 30 Mins........time Starts When U Check In......u Spit First....
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Old 07-26-04, 11:57 AM   #2
-V-
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Check....................................Check.... ...............................................Che ck!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-26-04, 11:59 AM   #3
oOnOn_StOpOo
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Check................................check........ ...im In.......ready When U Are
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Old 07-26-04, 12:05 PM   #4
-V-
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V'll Leave Ya Waistless,Rip Ya SkullAn Change Ya Face Kid,An “Put Mo Metal To Your Gums” Den “Dental Braces”...(1)
Hits'll Smack Ya Tasteless,Cus “No1 Thinkin Of Stop” Like “High Speed Chases”..
V Bring Da Hype,Den Redeem Ya Sight,V'll “Put A Hualt 2 Ya Air Supply” Wen “Push My Fists Threw Ya Pipes”...
Have Non Buised In Fights,Cus Da Only Tyme “Stops Ova My Head” Is Wen Im “Walkin Unda Sigal Lights”...(2)
My Spits Cause Infections,Im Sick At Text Son,V'll “Have You Thinkin Of A Win(d)” Like Ya “Brain Conncet's-2-Ya-Lungs”..
I Jus Slay Vets For Fun,An ShowYou Why “N.S. Cant Come-Pass(Compass) V” Like “Cardinal Directions”...(3)
Im Ill Wit Rhymes,I'll Conseal Ya Spine,Like “Money Currancy” V'll Leave “S Feel'd Wit Lines”..
My Grip'll Bind,My Tracks Devine,Cus Im “Quick 2 Drop Stop” Like “Runin Ova Traffic Signs”..(4)
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Yours Truelry
-V-


Im Fiya Kid Watch It,Cus I'll “Put More Volts Threw Ya Body” Den “Stick'n Shyt Ina Eletric Socket”..
Afta I Win Mods Jus Lock It,Cus V'll “Drop Non's-Censt(sense”) Like “Holes In Pockets”..(5)
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Old 07-26-04, 12:19 PM   #5
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Look To Tha Sky And Hope For Some Help From Jesus///
Im Merciless.....v's A Puzzle And He's About To Be Torn To 1000 Pieces///
5 To 10 Lines........ima Make It Short And Quickk///
After 2 Lines....niggas Hopeless And Ready To Quit///
Im Cruisin!....havent Even Started To Put My Foot To The Gas Pedal///
Wouldnt Be Safely Protected Against My Ryhmes Even If Ur Body Was Covered In Metal///
V?...versetyle?...godswords?.....are U Confused Which Name To Pick///
Maybe U Werent Ready......next Time Try Second Guessing Your Mouse Click///
U Crossed The Line And Your Accepting Your Own Death///
So Take A Sec. And Catch One Last Breath///
Just Embarassed Ya Flow....but Dont Worry U Still Have Ur Singing Career Left///
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Old 07-26-04, 12:19 PM   #6
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Propzz Kidd....u Did Ya Thing..............uppin For Votesssssss
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Old 07-26-04, 12:25 PM   #7
-V-
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Yea Thanks Stop,Kinda Quick Battle I Half Assed It...................................Up'n
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Old 07-26-04, 12:30 PM   #8
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Word Man..........im At Werk Right......had Too Get Dis Shit Done Quikkkkkk......but Nevertheless.......we Leave It Up To The Voters...
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Old 07-26-04, 03:49 PM   #9
-V-
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Bump.............................................. ...........
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Old 07-26-04, 05:15 PM   #10
-V-
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Damn Vote.......................................Bump!
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Old 07-26-04, 05:34 PM   #11
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danm, v u'r shit is sick

flow: v cause it ran alot smother and easyer to follow
punches: V most def got it cuz every bar was a punch that hit hard and direct at hes oppnet
creative: v cuz he had word-play plus had a well thought out verse that was very slick

vote: v hands down he killed this kid hes whole verse was just sick simply sick...

good shit...
 
Old 07-27-04, 10:53 AM   #12
-V-
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1-0 Up'n.............................................. ...................................
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Old 07-27-04, 12:07 PM   #13
KroNuz
 
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Break Down I

-V-- Wordplay Was Decent, Had Some Personals, Punches Connect, Flow Was On Point, Structure Was Alright, And Had A Few Metaz.....Overal Good Verse

Non Stop- Structure Was Good, Punches Didnt Hit Very Hard... Flow Was Ok... No Wordplay Or Metaz... Overal Ok Verse



Break Down II
Punches- V
Personals- V
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- V
Multis- Niether
Metaphors- V
Structure- Non Stop
Originality- Tie
Vocab- Niether

Final Vote- V

Return Favor And Honest Vote On This:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726
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Old 07-27-04, 05:03 PM   #14
-V-
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[i]2-0....Bump Bump Bump..............................[/]i
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Old 07-28-04, 11:16 AM   #15
N.Tavarez
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this was a battle of two completley different styles
v 's verse was sick i like the punches, the metas an creativity
but the structure made it hard to get at some points
overall hot verse

stop ya verse was much easier to read and straight to da point, but you shoulda got more personal.
ya first line made me laugh and that mouseclick line was good
hot verse
winner: i almost said v cause this was close but i think stop took it at the buzzard
but good shit both of u
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136172
 
 


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