10-20 lines
No d/r, crew, or hate votes
No feedin, bitin, or recyclin
verse due 45 min after checkin
Any rules broken auto DQ
I'll post my drop first

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check it, im checkin in...........................

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Ok I'm checkin' in.4sho......1

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you try to spit hot lines but ya computer freezes/
my flows is picture perfect so no need for "cheezes"/

---Ohhh, and ya welcome....4 what?.....The free sample.

Open Battles
-none 4 now-

yo, r u droppin 1st. or are we doin it a the same time.

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you try to spit hot lines but ya computer freezes/
my flows is picture perfect so no need for "cheezes"/

---Ohhh, and ya welcome....4 what?.....The free sample.

Open Battles
-none 4 now-

you can drop nah if you ready...I could so mines like 5 min after that.

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you try to spit hot lines but ya computer freezes/
my flows is picture perfect so no need for "cheezes"/

---Ohhh, and ya welcome....4 what?.....The free sample.

Open Battles
-none 4 now-

I'll lyrically abuse you're weak punches n flow
Your lines more wack than a child on dope
It's a "Katastrofe" that they let you on rb
fuck you bein a emcee, your a cracka on extacy
Kept PMin me, tryin to get me ta set up this shit
Wastin 3 credits to hear a fake eminem spit
You gon be takin more hits than a pot heads bowl
Drop rap, maybe youd have a better career in soul
cuz your raps got more holes than swiss cheese
Think you can beat my drops? bitch please

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You dont wanna battle me, you must be lost like Fido/
You bound to loose, like the chinese dude, off American Idol/
To much time fuckin around should of een at the recital/
Now you screwed, can't even be saved by Jsus or a bible/
Nigga you aint on top of shit, you stay fallin' like "Niagra"/
Yo ass couldn't get up wit ten pounds of viagra/
Waited after the check in, this niggas bound to chocke/
And if not from the battle its fromLE dick in his throught/
Tryin to rip ya quick, so I'ma change the pace/
And before you start talkin shit, wipe the cum off ya face/
Already started the battle so theres no time to run/
The best advice I can give you is to put ya mouth on a gun/
I bet you the type of nigga to drop the soap in jail/
And when I'm through wit you, you gonna be the only one in heaven wit a wheelchair/

Damn.

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you try to spit hot lines but ya computer freezes/
my flows is picture perfect so no need for "cheezes"/

---Ohhh, and ya welcome....4 what?.....The free sample.

Open Battles
-none 4 now-

damn my comp. fucked me up.....2nd line should say "been" not "een"
and the 3rd should say "Jesus".....not "Jsus"
Nah mean.

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you try to spit hot lines but ya computer freezes/
my flows is picture perfect so no need for "cheezes"/

---Ohhh, and ya welcome....4 what?.....The free sample.

Open Battles
-none 4 now-

Justify
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few multis...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...alright personals...

Katastrofe
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...structure is good...flow is on target...no multis...wordplay is tight...a few of ur punches connected...personals were ok...

Overall
Katastrofe had the better wordplay...both had a good structure...both had a good flow...both had ok personals...Justify had more multis...as well as more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Justify gets my vote...

VOTE - JUSTIFY

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the second link in my sig against ruff_tuff_thug...thanx...

Uppin, and i'll return wit honest votes if ya dropa link

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uppin

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you try to spit hot lines but ya computer freezes/
my flows is picture perfect so no need for "cheezes"/

---Ohhh, and ya welcome....4 what?.....The free sample.

Open Battles
-none 4 now-

uppin, lets get some votes, ill return the favor with honest votes on ya battles..come on dont sleep on this

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uppin...............

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you try to spit hot lines but ya computer freezes/
my flows is picture perfect so no need for "cheezes"/

---Ohhh, and ya welcome....4 what?.....The free sample.

Open Battles
-none 4 now-

Break Down I

Justify- Structure Is Good, Punches Could Be Better, Flow Is Ok, Wordplay Played.... Overal Ok


Katastophe- Structure Was Ok, Flow Was Ok, Punches Hit Harder Than Justifys..... Overal Ok...



Break Down II
Punches- Katastrophe
Personals- Niether
Flow- Justify
Wordplay- Niether
Multis- Niether
Metaphors- Katastrophe
Structure- Justify
Originality- Tie
Vocab- Tie

Final Vote- Katastrophe

Return Favor With Honest Vote:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726

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