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Old 07-23-04, 09:17 PM   #1
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Old 07-24-04, 12:41 AM   #2
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Old 07-24-04, 04:34 AM   #3
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Old 07-28-04, 04:30 PM   #4
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Alright, now I'm confused....I know I'm who this benefits
But who the fuck am I battling? I never even Met A Skriptz
I'm making moves...breaking bread while you're sharing crumbs
Even dropping knowledge....and here this dumbass comes a following
So I became a plastic surgeon and started fucking up your colleging
I'm wrecking holmes.....even got him questioning where he's from
When it comes to my fans, he's number one...shoot three in his wig
And Skriptz is fucking envious....he's even sporting a Big E in his sig
I'm sick of this kid....so get ya shit quicker than I'm spitting this bitch
Even if your written is sick....I'm still known for flippin the Skriptz
Don't even spit a verse....fucking bitch, you've said enough
Cause kids who wanna drop E usually end up getting fucked
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Old 07-29-04, 04:14 AM   #5
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He uses a Gas mask for his avatar To hid in Identity as a Fag Dreama
Murking This Bitch so Bad I made he ask is there Eny Gma
He useses a gas mask for His avatar to hide Faggot self from the big boys
Sorry But ya ya not ready yet, Ya still playing which ya Tonka Toys
ya Through Complata Complenday ya Miles well Get ya Ditch
Because Working in a gym is the Only Time you will be hott Bitch
Filling ya mouf wit Gun powder is the only time you will be the Bomb Like Telp
Handout ya Tickets for ya Dick Ride Because ya going to need
Bitch Go ahead And take off ya Gas Mask and Come Up to reality
Cuz if I seen you I real life In will Ripp ya head off like a Mortal Kombat Fitality


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Old 07-29-04, 04:46 AM   #6
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Originally Posted by enygma
Alright, now I'm confused....I know I'm who this benefits
But who the fuck am I battling? I never even Met A Skriptz
^lol..nice
I'm making moves...breaking bread while you're sharing crumbs
I'm wrecking holmes.....even got him questioning where he's from
^lol nice punch..iv seen it before,but it works in this situation..by the way.. i fixed you mistake..thank me later
Even dropping knowledge....and here this dumbass comes a following
So I became a plastic surgeon and started fucking up your colleging
^eh..not to good..just boastin..
When it comes to my fans, he's number one...shoot three in his wig
And Skriptz is fucking envious....he's even sporting a Big E in his sig
^ummmmmmmmm..maybe he changed his sig rofl?
I'm sick of this kid....so get ya shit quicker than I'm spitting this bitch
Even if your written is sick....I'm still known for flippin the Skriptz
^thats decent..nice
Don't even spit a verse....fucking bitch, you've said enough
Cause kids who wanna drop E usually end up getting fucked
^lmao...that was good..




Quote:
Originally Posted by Skriptz

He uses a Gas mask for his avatar To hid in Identity as a Fag Dreama
Murking This Bitch so Bad I made he ask is there Eny Gma
^what...?
He useses a gas mask for His avatar to hide Faggot self from the big boys
Sorry But ya ya not ready yet, Ya still playing which ya Tonka Toys
^to simple.. tonka toys?
ya Through Complata Complenday ya Miles well Get ya Ditch
Because Working in a gym is the Only Time you will be hott Bitch
^second line was iite..lil bit decent..
Filling ya mouf wit Gun powder is the only time you will be the Bomb Like Telp
Handout ya Tickets for ya Dick Ride Because ya going to need
^nice use of face..but punch wasent hard
Bitch Go ahead And take off ya Gas Mask and Come Up to reality
Cuz if I seen you I real life In will Ripp ya head off like a Mortal Kombat Fitality
^Decent..you said gask mask to much in this verse..




ok... to me this was one sided.. Meta i like your punches..sometimes.. but your verses need a lil work..specially in the flow/sylable catagory.. and your verse was the most ledgible.. thats what brought you down.. hard to re read shit..and i hate that..i dont mean that ina good way when i said ihad to re read it..Enygma came with some nice ones..Decent battle verse..no majoy flaws ..

No hate to either one of you.. i just felt the cards were in Enygmas hands in this battle..

Vote: enygma
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Old 07-29-04, 05:28 AM   #7
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Alright, now I'm confused....I know I'm who this benefits
But who the fuck am I battling? I never even Met A Skriptz
well worded 7/10
I'm making moves...breaking bread while you're sharing crumbs
Even dropping knowledge....and here this dumbass comes a following
ok 6/10
So I became a plastic surgeon and started fucking up your colleging
I'm wrecking holmes.....even got him questioning where he's from
good 6/10
When it comes to my fans, he's number one...shoot three in his wig
And Skriptz is fucking envious....he's even sporting a Big E in his sig
genius!! 10/10
I'm sick of this kid....so get ya shit quicker than I'm spitting this bitch
Even if your written is sick....I'm still known for flippin the Skriptz
v good 9/10
Don't even spit a verse....fucking bitch, you've said enough
Cause kids who wanna drop E usually end up getting fucked
ok closer 8/10

He uses a Gas mask for his avatar To hid in Identity as a Fag Dreama
Murking This Bitch so Bad I made he ask is there Eny Gma
wtf? i didnt understand it 4/10
He useses a gas mask for His avatar to hide Faggot self from the big boys
Sorry But ya ya not ready yet, Ya still playing which ya Tonka Toys
blah u used the word "ya" 4 times in the second line!!! 4/10
ya Through Complata Complenday ya Miles well Get ya Ditch
Because Working in a gym is the Only Time you will be hott Bitch
ok concept but not rele a diss 5/10
Filling ya mouf wit Gun powder is the only time you will be the Bomb Like Telp
Handout ya Tickets for ya Dick Ride Because ya going to need help
2nd line was ok but still i wud expect more
Bitch Go ahead And take off ya Gas Mask and Come Up to reality
Cuz if I seen you I real life In will Ripp ya head off like a Mortal Kombat Fitality
FUCKIN WEAK!!! u spelt fatality wrong! 6/10

vote enygma - easy win

meta with a record like urs i expected better
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Old 07-29-04, 08:07 AM   #8
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I didnt even think E came that hard yet who was miles ahead of Skriptz.

Alright, now I'm confused....I know I'm who this benefits
But who the fuck am I battling? I never even Met A Skriptz
Nice opener

I'm making moves...breaking bread while you're sharing crumbs
I'm wrecking holmes.....even got him questioning where he's from
I liked the wordplay but I think u cud of worded the 2nd bar of the 2nd line better.

Even dropping knowledge....and here this dumbass comes a following
So I became a plastic surgeon and started fucking up your colleging
I really didnt get this. Im guessin ur linkin the "dropping knowledge" with "fuckin up your colleging" but I didnt get it.

When it comes to my fans, he's number one...shoot three in his wig
And Skriptz is fucking envious....he's even sporting a Big E in his sig
yeh he probably changed his sig but thats nice.

I'm sick of this kid....so get ya shit quicker than I'm spitting this bitch
Even if your written is sick....I'm still known for flippin the Skriptz
kool name flip.

Don't even spit a verse....fucking bitch, you've said enough
Cause kids who wanna drop E usually end up getting fucked
thats 2nd part is a played concept. E.g. Kill you with E'z like pills blah blah.

You came not very strong but it was decent.

Im gonna be painfully obvious with ur verse

He uses a Gas mask for his avatar To hid in Identity as a Fag Dreama
Murking This Bitch so Bad I made he ask is there Eny Gma
doesnt make sense. You attempt at whatever failed.

He useses a gas mask for His avatar to hide Faggot self from the big boys
Sorry But ya ya not ready yet, Ya still playing which ya Tonka Toys
wack & basic

ya Through Complata Complenday ya Miles well Get ya Ditch
Because Working in a gym is the Only Time you will be hott Bitch
Played concept & wack

Filling ya mouf wit Gun powder is the only time you will be the Bomb Like Telp
Handout ya Tickets for ya Dick Ride Because ya going to need
1st line [played 2nd line wack.

Bitch Go ahead And take off ya Gas Mask and Come Up to reality
Cuz if I seen you I real life In will Ripp ya head off like a Mortal Kombat Fitality
shut up about the mask..thats such a weak attempt at a personal & u sealed this poor verse with a matching wack closer.

BOOOOOOOOOOOO thats why I said u shudnt be in the tourny. Engyma took this easily

Vote/Enygma
 
Old 07-29-04, 02:17 PM   #9
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Alright, now I'm confused....I know I'm who this benefits
But who the fuck am I battling? I never even Met A Skriptz
ITS AIGHT....DECENT PLAY ON HIS NAME
I'm making moves...breaking bread while you're sharing crumbs
Even dropping knowledge....and here this dumbass comes a following
NO PUNCH THERE
So I became a plastic surgeon and started fucking up your colleging
I'm wrecking holmes.....even got him questioning where he's from
NOTHIN THERE
When it comes to my fans, he's number one...shoot three in his wig
And Skriptz is fucking envious....he's even sporting a Big E in his sig
LOL PRETTY GOOD
I'm sick of this kid....so get ya shit quicker than I'm spitting this bitch
Even if your written is sick....I'm still known for flippin the Skriptz
LOL PRETTY GOOD AGAIN
Don't even spit a verse....fucking bitch, you've said enough
Cause kids who wanna drop E usually end up getting fucked
ITS AIGHT...
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He uses a Gas mask for his avatar To hid in Identity as a Fag Dreama
Murking This Bitch so Bad I made he ask is there Eny Gma
U WERE TRYNA PLAY OFF HIS NAME,BUT I WASNT FEELIN IT
He useses a gas mask for His avatar to hide Faggot self from the big boys
U SAID THAT GAS MASK THING ALREADY
Sorry But ya ya not ready yet, Ya still playing which ya Tonka Toys
WEAK
ya Through Complata Complenday ya Miles well Get ya Ditch
Because Working in a gym is the Only Time you will be hott Bitch
NOT FEELIN THIS AT ALL
Filling ya mouf wit Gun powder is the only time you will be the Bomb
DONT LIKE THIS AT ALL
Like Telp
Handout ya Tickets for ya Dick Ride Because ya going to need
? HUH
Bitch Go ahead And take off ya Gas Mask and Come Up to reality
ANOTHER GAS MASK?
Cuz if I seen you I real life In will Ripp ya head off like a Mortal Kombat Fitality
WEAK....

ENYGMA DIDNT HAVE AS STRONG OF A VERSE AS I THOUGHT HE'D COME WITH....IT WAS JUST MEDIOCRE....BUT IT BEAT META SKRIPTS..FOR SOME REASON I THOUGHT IT WAS METAPHISIK WHEN I SAID I WAS ENTICIPATING THIS BATTLE......

ANYWAY VOTE ENYGMA...I DUNNO IF ITS 3 OR 5 TO KO
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Old 07-29-04, 02:18 PM   #10
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enygma:



Alright, now I'm confused....I know I'm who this benefits
But who the fuck am I battling? I never even Met A Skriptz
I'm making moves...breaking bread while you're sharing crumbs
Even dropping knowledge....and here this dumbass comes a following
So I became a plastic surgeon and started fucking up your colleging
I'm wrecking holmes.....even got him questioning where he's from
^^^This First Part Was Decent And Worded Nice A Couple Good Punches Some OK W/P....A Good Personal Wasnt As Hott As You Usually Drop


When it comes to my fans, he's number one...shoot three in his wig
And Skriptz is fucking envious....he's even sporting a Big E in his sig
I'm sick of this kid....so get ya shit quicker than I'm spitting this bitch
Even if your written is sick....I'm still known for flippin the Skriptz
Don't even spit a verse....fucking bitch, you've said enough
Cause kids who wanna drop E usually end up getting fucked

^^ This Second Part You Ripped It Tho And Came Real Nice Obviously Using Some SKill You Got There...A Couple Good Personals Decent Punches And Decent W/P

Overall : 7.5/10

Skripts:: Your Verse Was Way Too Basic...You Are Still Talking About Kids Playing With Tonka Trucks And Other Little Toys That You Talk About In Every Battle You Need To Elevate Because What You Have Been Writing Recently Just Isnt Cutting It...

Overall: 3.5/10

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Old 07-29-04, 02:58 PM   #11
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Alright, now I'm confused....I know I'm who this benefits
But who the fuck am I battling? I never even Met A Skriptz
7.5/10...nice play off his name.
I'm making moves...breaking bread while you're sharing crumbs
Even dropping knowledge....and here this dumbass comes a following
5/10...no.
So I became a plastic surgeon and started fucking up your colleging
I'm wrecking holmes.....even got him questioning where he's from
8/10...nice, punch/personal
When it comes to my fans, he's number one...shoot three in his wig
And Skriptz is fucking envious....he's even sporting a Big E in his sig
10/10....battle over.
I'm sick of this kid....so get ya shit quicker than I'm spitting this bitch
Even if your written is sick....I'm still known for flippin the Skriptz
7/10...nice
Don't even spit a verse....fucking bitch, you've said enough
Cause kids who wanna drop E usually end up getting fucked
7/10...lol..good closer
overall - 7.416....the biggie line...


Skriptz
He uses a Gas mask for his avatar To hid in Identity as a Fag Dreama
Murking This Bitch so Bad I made he ask is there Eny Gma
6.5/10...weak personal, didnt rhyme
He useses a gas mask for His avatar to hide Faggot self from the big boys
Sorry But ya ya not ready yet, Ya still playing which ya Tonka Toys
5/10..No.
ya Through Complata Complenday ya Miles well Get ya Ditch
Because Working in a gym is the Only Time you will be hott Bitch
6/10...so simple
Filling ya mouf wit Gun powder is the only time you will be the Bomb Like Telp
Handout ya Tickets for ya Dick Ride Because ya going to need
5/10...no...wack.
Bitch Go ahead And take off ya Gas Mask and Come Up to reality
Cuz if I seen you I real life In will Ripp ya head off like a Mortal Kombat Fitality
6/10...blah!
overall - 5.7...weak drop...nuttin really good.
v/Enygma
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Old 07-29-04, 10:11 PM   #12
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LMAO.....I fucked up when I was rearranging my lines.....it was supposed to look like this.....

Alright, now I'm confused....I know I'm who this benefits
But who the fuck am I battling? I never even Met A Skriptz
I'm making moves...breaking bread while you're sharing crumbs
I'm wrecking holmes.....even got him questioning where he's from
Even dropping knowledge....and here this dumbass comes a following
So I became a plastic surgeon and started fucking up your colleging
When it comes to my fans, he's number one...shoot three in his wig
And Skriptz is fucking envious....he's even sporting a Big E in his sig
I'm sick of this kid....so get ya shit quicker than I'm spitting this bitch
Even if your written is sick....I'm still known for flippin the Skriptz
Don't even spit a verse....fucking bitch, you've said enough
Cause kids who wanna drop E usually end up getting fucked

I noticed everyone was saying that my second and third bars made no sense.....well now they do
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Old 07-29-04, 10:13 PM   #13
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i know i correcte dthat in my vote -_-.. now go vote in jpoll ands i battle.. ur battle is almost over n we have like 2 votes.. -_-
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Old 07-29-04, 10:15 PM   #14
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Even dropping knowledge....and here this dumbass comes a following
So I became a plastic surgeon and started fucking up your colleging
I really didnt get this. Im guessin ur linkin the "dropping knowledge" with "fuckin up your colleging" but I didnt get it.


Just to clarify for you....I was saying that I was dropping knowledge, and he's right there.....kinda like he was my student......and fucking up your colleging/collagen, a bit of wordplay....
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Old 07-29-04, 11:34 PM   #15
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^ word

but that biggie punch and that drop e quick closer was all u needed in that shit that closer ive used a line like that cause u know how it is everyone talkin bout drop e quick as a personal shit is played the flip is tight on it though an the biggie punch was ill nice lines

meta didnt like it to much on the gas mask personal and it wasnt never used good an none of the other punchs really hit hard to me on that note kind of an all filler verse

as shit forgot to put this vote/enygma
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