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07-24-04, 12:41 AM | #2 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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Checkin in early so I don't forget.....lol
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07-24-04, 04:34 AM | #3 | ||||
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aight Check......
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07-28-04, 04:30 PM | #4 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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Alright, now I'm confused....I know I'm who this benefits
But who the fuck am I battling? I never even Met A Skriptz I'm making moves...breaking bread while you're sharing crumbs Even dropping knowledge....and here this dumbass comes a following So I became a plastic surgeon and started fucking up your colleging I'm wrecking holmes.....even got him questioning where he's from When it comes to my fans, he's number one...shoot three in his wig And Skriptz is fucking envious....he's even sporting a Big E in his sig I'm sick of this kid....so get ya shit quicker than I'm spitting this bitch Even if your written is sick....I'm still known for flippin the Skriptz Don't even spit a verse....fucking bitch, you've said enough Cause kids who wanna drop E usually end up getting fucked
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07-29-04, 04:14 AM | #5 | ||||
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He uses a Gas mask for his avatar To hid in Identity as a Fag Dreama Murking This Bitch so Bad I made he ask is there Eny Gma He useses a gas mask for His avatar to hide Faggot self from the big boys Sorry But ya ya not ready yet, Ya still playing which ya Tonka Toys ya Through Complata Complenday ya Miles well Get ya Ditch Because Working in a gym is the Only Time you will be hott Bitch Filling ya mouf wit Gun powder is the only time you will be the Bomb Like Telp Handout ya Tickets for ya Dick Ride Because ya going to need Bitch Go ahead And take off ya Gas Mask and Come Up to reality Cuz if I seen you I real life In will Ripp ya head off like a Mortal Kombat Fitality
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07-29-04, 04:46 AM | #6 | |||||||||
The Light
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IP: 5104 E24D
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ok... to me this was one sided.. Meta i like your punches..sometimes.. but your verses need a lil work..specially in the flow/sylable catagory.. and your verse was the most ledgible.. thats what brought you down.. hard to re read shit..and i hate that..i dont mean that ina good way when i said ihad to re read it..Enygma came with some nice ones..Decent battle verse..no majoy flaws .. No hate to either one of you.. i just felt the cards were in Enygmas hands in this battle.. Vote: enygma
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07-29-04, 05:28 AM | #7 | ||||||
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Alright, now I'm confused....I know I'm who this benefits
But who the fuck am I battling? I never even Met A Skriptz well worded 7/10 I'm making moves...breaking bread while you're sharing crumbs Even dropping knowledge....and here this dumbass comes a following ok 6/10 So I became a plastic surgeon and started fucking up your colleging I'm wrecking holmes.....even got him questioning where he's from good 6/10 When it comes to my fans, he's number one...shoot three in his wig And Skriptz is fucking envious....he's even sporting a Big E in his sig genius!! 10/10 I'm sick of this kid....so get ya shit quicker than I'm spitting this bitch Even if your written is sick....I'm still known for flippin the Skriptz v good 9/10 Don't even spit a verse....fucking bitch, you've said enough Cause kids who wanna drop E usually end up getting fucked ok closer 8/10 He uses a Gas mask for his avatar To hid in Identity as a Fag Dreama Murking This Bitch so Bad I made he ask is there Eny Gma wtf? i didnt understand it 4/10 He useses a gas mask for His avatar to hide Faggot self from the big boys Sorry But ya ya not ready yet, Ya still playing which ya Tonka Toys blah u used the word "ya" 4 times in the second line!!! 4/10 ya Through Complata Complenday ya Miles well Get ya Ditch Because Working in a gym is the Only Time you will be hott Bitch ok concept but not rele a diss 5/10 Filling ya mouf wit Gun powder is the only time you will be the Bomb Like Telp Handout ya Tickets for ya Dick Ride Because ya going to need help 2nd line was ok but still i wud expect more Bitch Go ahead And take off ya Gas Mask and Come Up to reality Cuz if I seen you I real life In will Ripp ya head off like a Mortal Kombat Fitality FUCKIN WEAK!!! u spelt fatality wrong! 6/10 vote enygma - easy win meta with a record like urs i expected better
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07-29-04, 08:07 AM | #8 | ||||
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I didnt even think E came that hard yet who was miles ahead of Skriptz.
Alright, now I'm confused....I know I'm who this benefits But who the fuck am I battling? I never even Met A Skriptz Nice opener I'm making moves...breaking bread while you're sharing crumbs I'm wrecking holmes.....even got him questioning where he's from I liked the wordplay but I think u cud of worded the 2nd bar of the 2nd line better. Even dropping knowledge....and here this dumbass comes a following So I became a plastic surgeon and started fucking up your colleging I really didnt get this. Im guessin ur linkin the "dropping knowledge" with "fuckin up your colleging" but I didnt get it. When it comes to my fans, he's number one...shoot three in his wig And Skriptz is fucking envious....he's even sporting a Big E in his sig yeh he probably changed his sig but thats nice. I'm sick of this kid....so get ya shit quicker than I'm spitting this bitch Even if your written is sick....I'm still known for flippin the Skriptz kool name flip. Don't even spit a verse....fucking bitch, you've said enough Cause kids who wanna drop E usually end up getting fucked thats 2nd part is a played concept. E.g. Kill you with E'z like pills blah blah. You came not very strong but it was decent. Im gonna be painfully obvious with ur verse He uses a Gas mask for his avatar To hid in Identity as a Fag Dreama Murking This Bitch so Bad I made he ask is there Eny Gma doesnt make sense. You attempt at whatever failed. He useses a gas mask for His avatar to hide Faggot self from the big boys Sorry But ya ya not ready yet, Ya still playing which ya Tonka Toys wack & basic ya Through Complata Complenday ya Miles well Get ya Ditch Because Working in a gym is the Only Time you will be hott Bitch Played concept & wack Filling ya mouf wit Gun powder is the only time you will be the Bomb Like Telp Handout ya Tickets for ya Dick Ride Because ya going to need 1st line [played 2nd line wack. Bitch Go ahead And take off ya Gas Mask and Come Up to reality Cuz if I seen you I real life In will Ripp ya head off like a Mortal Kombat Fitality shut up about the mask..thats such a weak attempt at a personal & u sealed this poor verse with a matching wack closer. BOOOOOOOOOOOO thats why I said u shudnt be in the tourny. Engyma took this easily Vote/Enygma |
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07-29-04, 02:17 PM | #9 | |||||
...i'm da nicest...
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Alright, now I'm confused....I know I'm who this benefits
But who the fuck am I battling? I never even Met A Skriptz ITS AIGHT....DECENT PLAY ON HIS NAME I'm making moves...breaking bread while you're sharing crumbs Even dropping knowledge....and here this dumbass comes a following NO PUNCH THERE So I became a plastic surgeon and started fucking up your colleging I'm wrecking holmes.....even got him questioning where he's from NOTHIN THERE When it comes to my fans, he's number one...shoot three in his wig And Skriptz is fucking envious....he's even sporting a Big E in his sig LOL PRETTY GOOD I'm sick of this kid....so get ya shit quicker than I'm spitting this bitch Even if your written is sick....I'm still known for flippin the Skriptz LOL PRETTY GOOD AGAIN Don't even spit a verse....fucking bitch, you've said enough Cause kids who wanna drop E usually end up getting fucked ITS AIGHT... __________________ He uses a Gas mask for his avatar To hid in Identity as a Fag Dreama Murking This Bitch so Bad I made he ask is there Eny Gma U WERE TRYNA PLAY OFF HIS NAME,BUT I WASNT FEELIN IT He useses a gas mask for His avatar to hide Faggot self from the big boys U SAID THAT GAS MASK THING ALREADY Sorry But ya ya not ready yet, Ya still playing which ya Tonka Toys WEAK ya Through Complata Complenday ya Miles well Get ya Ditch Because Working in a gym is the Only Time you will be hott Bitch NOT FEELIN THIS AT ALL Filling ya mouf wit Gun powder is the only time you will be the Bomb DONT LIKE THIS AT ALL Like Telp Handout ya Tickets for ya Dick Ride Because ya going to need ? HUH Bitch Go ahead And take off ya Gas Mask and Come Up to reality ANOTHER GAS MASK? Cuz if I seen you I real life In will Ripp ya head off like a Mortal Kombat Fitality WEAK.... ENYGMA DIDNT HAVE AS STRONG OF A VERSE AS I THOUGHT HE'D COME WITH....IT WAS JUST MEDIOCRE....BUT IT BEAT META SKRIPTS..FOR SOME REASON I THOUGHT IT WAS METAPHISIK WHEN I SAID I WAS ENTICIPATING THIS BATTLE...... ANYWAY VOTE ENYGMA...I DUNNO IF ITS 3 OR 5 TO KO
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07-29-04, 02:18 PM | #10 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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enygma:
Alright, now I'm confused....I know I'm who this benefits But who the fuck am I battling? I never even Met A Skriptz I'm making moves...breaking bread while you're sharing crumbs Even dropping knowledge....and here this dumbass comes a following So I became a plastic surgeon and started fucking up your colleging I'm wrecking holmes.....even got him questioning where he's from ^^^This First Part Was Decent And Worded Nice A Couple Good Punches Some OK W/P....A Good Personal Wasnt As Hott As You Usually Drop When it comes to my fans, he's number one...shoot three in his wig And Skriptz is fucking envious....he's even sporting a Big E in his sig I'm sick of this kid....so get ya shit quicker than I'm spitting this bitch Even if your written is sick....I'm still known for flippin the Skriptz Don't even spit a verse....fucking bitch, you've said enough Cause kids who wanna drop E usually end up getting fucked ^^ This Second Part You Ripped It Tho And Came Real Nice Obviously Using Some SKill You Got There...A Couple Good Personals Decent Punches And Decent W/P Overall : 7.5/10 Skripts:: Your Verse Was Way Too Basic...You Are Still Talking About Kids Playing With Tonka Trucks And Other Little Toys That You Talk About In Every Battle You Need To Elevate Because What You Have Been Writing Recently Just Isnt Cutting It... Overall: 3.5/10 Vote: Enygma ~!1!~
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07-29-04, 02:58 PM | #11 | |||||
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Alright, now I'm confused....I know I'm who this benefits
But who the fuck am I battling? I never even Met A Skriptz 7.5/10...nice play off his name. I'm making moves...breaking bread while you're sharing crumbs Even dropping knowledge....and here this dumbass comes a following 5/10...no. So I became a plastic surgeon and started fucking up your colleging I'm wrecking holmes.....even got him questioning where he's from 8/10...nice, punch/personal When it comes to my fans, he's number one...shoot three in his wig And Skriptz is fucking envious....he's even sporting a Big E in his sig 10/10....battle over. I'm sick of this kid....so get ya shit quicker than I'm spitting this bitch Even if your written is sick....I'm still known for flippin the Skriptz 7/10...nice Don't even spit a verse....fucking bitch, you've said enough Cause kids who wanna drop E usually end up getting fucked 7/10...lol..good closer overall - 7.416....the biggie line... Skriptz He uses a Gas mask for his avatar To hid in Identity as a Fag Dreama Murking This Bitch so Bad I made he ask is there Eny Gma 6.5/10...weak personal, didnt rhyme He useses a gas mask for His avatar to hide Faggot self from the big boys Sorry But ya ya not ready yet, Ya still playing which ya Tonka Toys 5/10..No. ya Through Complata Complenday ya Miles well Get ya Ditch Because Working in a gym is the Only Time you will be hott Bitch 6/10...so simple Filling ya mouf wit Gun powder is the only time you will be the Bomb Like Telp Handout ya Tickets for ya Dick Ride Because ya going to need 5/10...no...wack. Bitch Go ahead And take off ya Gas Mask and Come Up to reality Cuz if I seen you I real life In will Ripp ya head off like a Mortal Kombat Fitality 6/10...blah! overall - 5.7...weak drop...nuttin really good. v/Enygma
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07-29-04, 10:11 PM | #12 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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LMAO.....I fucked up when I was rearranging my lines.....it was supposed to look like this.....
Alright, now I'm confused....I know I'm who this benefits But who the fuck am I battling? I never even Met A Skriptz I'm making moves...breaking bread while you're sharing crumbs I'm wrecking holmes.....even got him questioning where he's from Even dropping knowledge....and here this dumbass comes a following So I became a plastic surgeon and started fucking up your colleging When it comes to my fans, he's number one...shoot three in his wig And Skriptz is fucking envious....he's even sporting a Big E in his sig I'm sick of this kid....so get ya shit quicker than I'm spitting this bitch Even if your written is sick....I'm still known for flippin the Skriptz Don't even spit a verse....fucking bitch, you've said enough Cause kids who wanna drop E usually end up getting fucked I noticed everyone was saying that my second and third bars made no sense.....well now they do
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07-29-04, 10:13 PM | #13 | |||||||
The Light
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i know i correcte dthat in my vote -_-.. now go vote in jpoll ands i battle.. ur battle is almost over n we have like 2 votes.. -_-
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07-29-04, 10:15 PM | #14 | |||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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Just to clarify for you....I was saying that I was dropping knowledge, and he's right there.....kinda like he was my student......and fucking up your colleging/collagen, a bit of wordplay....
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07-29-04, 11:34 PM | #15 | |||||||
Heavy Lies The Crown
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but that biggie punch and that drop e quick closer was all u needed in that shit that closer ive used a line like that cause u know how it is everyone talkin bout drop e quick as a personal shit is played the flip is tight on it though an the biggie punch was ill nice lines meta didnt like it to much on the gas mask personal and it wasnt never used good an none of the other punchs really hit hard to me on that note kind of an all filler verse as shit forgot to put this vote/enygma
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