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0 | 0% |
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5 | 100.00% |
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07-26-04, 09:13 PM
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the medicine man
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Dilettante vs hotshh! (punchline battle)
IP: A49A 4FF0
Punchline battle
10 lines no feeding no biting, no crew votes/hate votes no dickriding. you first me after mine'll be up tomorrow |
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07-26-04, 09:16 PM
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IP: 4488 3E13
Checkin in, but eyyo......i thought a punchline battle was 2lines 1 punch...........this is a text battle....but i'll styl murda u neway.
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07-26-04, 09:25 PM
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the medicine man
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IP: A49A 4FF0
check in
its 10 lines as long as theres a punch in each 2 lines |
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07-26-04, 09:47 PM
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IP: 4488 3E13
This nigga can't finish his name cuz he goin into seizure
My words take his soul like I'm da Grim Reeper Fake Emcee callin this a punline battle? You mo hopeless then the plot of Sleepless in Seattle My lyrics screw you so much you look like a contortionist For you to stop I insist, but you styl persist So I bend ova for yo lips dat ain't never been kissed And have you pucker like you drinkin a lemon pepsi twist Everyday a broken clock is right at least two times But you a powered off electro dat been blanked from my rhymes
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07-26-04, 10:18 PM
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the medicine man
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IP: A49A 4FF0
Ha! Ha!
lets go Diledicky's telling jokes but he aint come Prepared Cause Ima Son You like me and ya Moms Had an Affair And my Metaphors you aint Ready For/ There's Plenty More They'll be talking to ya Ghost Like Patrick Swayze And Demi Moore So what I need A Semi For? He's not Worth It If I turn Around and spit on this Clown, Ill make the Earthsick You implode like Internal Combustion Fall into Narcalyptic Sleep As I go deep like Finger Fucking Now you can act like a man, But that would only make You an Actress Wack Bitch...Ill lay you out flat like a Boxspring Mattress That it |
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07-26-04, 10:42 PM
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#6
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the medicine man
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IP: A49A 4FF0
vote.............................................. ................
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07-26-04, 10:52 PM
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look at this
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IP: 8B67 2952
ight honest vote hotshh!
dil-ya shit was all played lines u didnt have much complexity our originalty in ya punchs ive read just about all of that shit before so it was boring to read i didnt feal really any of ya punchs hit hard hotshii-decent punchs your structure had me fucked for a second but nnot to hard to read lil bit more creative then dil an somewhat harder hittin but i think u edged this battle out |
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07-26-04, 11:06 PM
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#8
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IP: 4488 3E13
uppin............................................. .................................................. ............................................
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07-27-04, 01:04 AM
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New to RB
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IP: 4488 3E13
uppin2............................................ ......
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07-28-04, 11:40 AM
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the medicine man
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IP: A49A 4FF0
uppin
"If lifes a test, what u gotta do to pass? who decides when you fail? and whats the name of the class? -hotshh- |
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07-28-04, 12:54 PM
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Daillest Nigga~~NOK~~
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IP: 3240 794D
ill give my vote to hotshh....he had sum creative shit...punches....stucture was a lil off...overall good vere
dtante....good verse but didnt really hit as hard as hotshh..... vote~~hotshh
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07-28-04, 01:06 PM
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IP: E198 D20B
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again, ok.. 7/10 Hotshh, I can't quote you so heres the breakdown.. You started off kinda, i don't know.. but everything else was more creative than his. also the rhyme scheme was much better. I liked how you rhymed with metaphore also.. so v/hotshh |
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07-28-04, 01:44 PM
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the medicine man
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IP: A49A 4FF0
uppin............................................. ..........
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07-29-04, 03:54 PM
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the medicine man
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IP: A49A 4FF0
Man just vote, i dont care but finish this....................
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07-30-04, 04:10 AM
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Detrimental Thoughts
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IP: C713 1A01
ok...good battle but Hotshh! took it
Hotshh!-you had a good flow...your punches hit harder than his...more creative and i liked how it all was rhymed with metaphor....nice....ok structure Dil-That structure was ok....not that good...no offense...i dunno...your punches were weak....they like nipped him...your punches just was kinda bad...Hotshh! would've took it with just half of his verse 
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