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Old 07-23-04, 09:26 PM   #1
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2. Shabba Ranks 'vs' 7. LatinKitten

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And sorry Rascal, you were ejected from the tournament.
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Old 07-24-04, 12:50 AM   #2
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lol....wut happened to rascal, anyway....check...LK, we battlin for nudes..lmao
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...6600post1446600
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...7435post1447435
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Old 07-25-04, 06:42 PM   #3
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checkin in...............

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...600#post1446600

imma try to vote on more battles,but im workin right up until sunday,n unless ppl drop today, tomorrow i may not have time...........holla

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Old 07-29-04, 07:54 PM   #4
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Word...mic check 1...2...1...2, Im bout to do it like this yo, yo, yo....


This bitch took Headshots like swallowing capsules of Advil...
She talks so much Shit, its starting to affect ya rap skills...
I think she got the complaining and herbish ways from her lover...
This Hoe do alotta Research no wonder shes always Undercover
You ugly as hell, AK only got you for the dick you be blowing...
Its like this Stray Kitten is livin in all the Garbage shes posting...
Ive never seen a a creature like this before...
"ROFL", You look like youve literally been Rolling On The Floor
Why you always got beef, making friends should be your task...
Especially with Murderous, your ugly, you need the Mask...
You cannot be serious, your nowhere near to this...
And the Convo with ~R~ was the closest you ever came to a Sexual Experience


And it goes like that...Fuck wit me, and you can get soulclapped...E-STYLE!!!My niggas Strobe and Cprog, wuts hood....All yall know what it is, you want it, u can get it...ITS NOTHIN....
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Old 07-30-04, 05:44 PM   #5
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his name on original =EMULATED
Quote:
Originally Posted by Biggie_XL
AND YOU MUST BE DIRTY BY NOW CUZ OF ALL THA ROLLING ON THA FLOOR LAUGHIN SO TAKE A SHOWER OH WAIT BY THA LOOK OF YA PIC YA NEVER DID BEFOR

not tryna feed...but EMULATED..gotta let it be known/
his BEST PUNCH...not 1^^^ ,but 2 ppl SAID IT BEFORE//
n beggin the whore in my sig for nudes..must be fuckin ugly/
he's 13..but the NUMBER aint why he never GETTIN LUCKY//
then askin ME for nudes? NO...august 22 is his birth though/
all the SIGNS of a VIRGIN...no wonder this kid's a VIRGO//
6ko's,hides his record on original..but expects to burn me/(2 many links)
only RANKS SHABBA received was...WACKEST IN THE TOURNEY//
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Overated?
shabba ranks
Wackest?
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horny lil kid JERKIN OFF to my pics..plus his verses blow/
sig says "NUTTIN right now"...is this how he HOLDS HIS OWN?//
he got ATE(8)like da grade he finished..no need to expose/
left him LAID OUT..like his mom still does with his CLOTHES//

btw..i'll vote on more battles as time permits...i'm postin this shit from work....holla...plus a lotta battles ain't done yet
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Old 07-30-04, 05:52 PM   #6
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Okay Doke...so About Those Nudes.....lol, And Im A Leo Hoe
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Old 07-30-04, 05:56 PM   #7
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stop posting in here n swaying...aug 22 falls on the border,so it can be both leo or virgo...i know cuz i'm leo ....now stop talkin in here kid
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Old 07-30-04, 09:13 PM   #8
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lol............


latin wins this due to personals out the ass.... lol...


Shabba:i think this was weak for you... your usual witty style would beat this wordplay and complexity you tried to pull off here.. wasent really a witty verse i expected from you... 6/10

latin:lol.. every bar was good... personals were pretty good... this was one sided to me... i was feeling the flow,wordplay,and personals... Good Job
8/10


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Old 07-30-04, 09:19 PM   #9
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word shabba came weaker than usual & latin made me laugh w/ personals & funny lines.

n beggin the whore in my sig for nudes..must be fuckin ugly/
he's 13..but the NUMBER aint why he never GETTIN LUCKY//

he got ATE(8)like da grade he finished..no need to expose/
left him LAID OUT..like his mom still does with his CLOTHES//

then askin ME for nudes? NO...august 22 is his birth though/
all the SIGNS of a VIRGIN...no wonder this kid's a VIRGO//

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Old 07-30-04, 10:04 PM   #10
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V/Shabba

I'll explain later.
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Old 07-30-04, 11:32 PM   #11
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I thought Shabba had a good verse, but Latin took it with that 'Laid Out' punch....other than that the verses were pretty much neck and neck

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Old 07-30-04, 11:36 PM   #12
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Quote:
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This bitch took Headshots like swallowing capsules of Advil...
She talks so much Shit, its starting to affect ya rap skills...
The set-up was nice, but the follow-up line was sub-par. Could've been a killer opener with a harder punch tacked on the end of it.
I think she got the complaining and herbish ways from her lover...
This Hoe do alotta Research no wonder shes always Undercover
Funny personal- That pretty much sums up her style. To me, it hit harder cause I'm against all that research shit that she does, but i'll get to that later.
You ugly as hell, AK only got you for the dick you be blowing...
Its like this Stray Kitten is livin in all the Garbage shes posting...
I don't understand the first line, but the 2nd is nice. Not the hardest hitting- but definitly good in this battle.
Ive never seen a a creature like this before...
"ROFL", You look like youve literally been Rolling On The Floor
Her picture won't load, but from the comments... i'll assume it was really bad. This punch was a little bit of okay, but nothing special or out of the ordinary.
Why you always got beef, making friends should be your task...
Especially with Murderous, your ugly, you need the Mask...
Assuming there's no subliminal punch in there, i'll give this a filler rating of around 6/10. Again, I wish I could see her pic... but i'll just have to go with what i've heard on this one.
You cannot be serious, your nowhere near to this...
And the Convo with ~R~ was the closest you ever came to a Sexual Experience
Ah geez ... I'm not following the personals here. You should either include links (which is sorta herbish), or else don't use these things. As a voter, I can assume things, but it's just not the same. And i'm not going to rate it high, because of that.

On a side note, I looked at some of your previous battles, under the name Gotanasswhoppin4u or whatever the fuck that was. Anyway, I gotta say you've elevated alot. I'm not sure if you read through the Rules and Guidelines, but this is the first time i've seen you use a different looking text style. That kinda shit gets me all warm inside. [/I]


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not tryna feed...but EMULATED..gotta let it be known/
his BEST PUNCH...not 1^^^ ,but 2 ppl SAID IT BEFORE//
You just had to throw in 'Emulated'. That was an interesting fact, which I didn't know... but it was ineffective as a punch/diss/anything else. I'll be looking, and if he did bite a punch or two... he may be DQ'd. But i'll look into that myself.
n beggin the whore in my sig for nudes..must be fuckin ugly/
he's 13..but the NUMBER aint why he never GETTIN LUCKY//
Lol, this was the best punch i've read so far. I haven't peeped through the rest of the battle closely enough.. but i just may be changing my vote. We'll see.
then askin ME for nudes? NO...august 22 is his birth though/
all the SIGNS of a VIRGIN...no wonder this kid's a VIRGO//
You've always got that hint of research, which bugs me. Can't you put together a punch without it? To me, that overshadows the punch here. Just cause I'm constantly being reminded of that. I'll call this one average. If you do move on, I challenge you to use some 'non-personal bars.' If you move on.
6ko's,hides his record on original..but expects to burn me/(2 many links)
only RANKS SHABBA received was...WACKEST IN THE TOURNEY//
No more research please...... again it overshadows the punch. Go ahead and use 1,2,3 of these. But to compose your whole verse with them? Nah...
horny lil kid JERKIN OFF to my pics..plus his verses blow/
sig says "NUTTIN right now"...is this how he HOLDS HIS OWN?//
Now a sig punch?!?!? Things are starting to look grim.
he got ATE(8)like da grade he finished..no need to expose/
left him LAID OUT..like his mom still does with his CLOTHES//
Ahaha... good stuff here. (Even if a personal.) There's a difference in personals. Ones like these, that incorporate wordplay. And then there's the ones that rely strictly on research. And the strictly research ones are the ones that bug me.

I like how you also bolded and seeing a [I]'text style' was refreshing.


Vote- Latin.

Fuck, I change my vote. Shabba was more consistent overall - but he didn't stand out enough. I want to see what Latin can do next round, and if she can post a battle without using so many personals. Sorry Shabby, better luck next time.
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Old 07-31-04, 12:07 AM   #13
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ummmm....karl, if i say somethin.........would that be considered swayin.......
cuz it seems u ppl aint get some of my shit........
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Old 07-31-04, 12:09 AM   #14
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Go ahead and say it. I'd like to hear it.
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Old 07-31-04, 12:16 AM   #15
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well i gotta explain 2 personals:
When i said the "Mask" one...it was some dude she was beefin wit...and his name was "Murderous Mask" hope you get the wordplay
And the "convo wit ~R~" is when she had made a fake aim name to talk to restricted and for a battle, and then he started cybering with her........
if u dont care, like apo says "Fuck you, and think about me fucking your mum"
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