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**FLEx** 5 83.33%
Plutonium 1 16.67%
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Old 08-02-04, 12:49 AM   #1
Plutonium
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From: New Zealand
**FLEx** vs Plutonium

IP: 5E7E 501C

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15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Verse due in a hour from now
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good luck!

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Old 08-02-04, 12:52 AM   #2
System
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IP: F527 20D5

**FLEx** has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 12:52 AM.
 
Old 08-02-04, 12:57 AM   #3
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Plutonium has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 12:57 AM.
 
Old 08-02-04, 01:13 AM   #4
**FLEx**
Flyweight
 
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From: Canada
IP: F527 20D5

I'm an unstoppeble force who feels no remorse/
for weak faggots like you who's life is set off course/
your pores are clogged with the dirt of a horse/
who's mouth is gaping wide open with exposed sores/

I didn't clean your glass man i spat in your cup/
and just like heaven your time is up/
I can't stand, a mans, hand, to be cut/
then you'll pass out and take two in the gut/

come on my side of the screen and you may be flattered/
cuz i got more rings tan Saturn/
more phat then batter/
and I'll cut your head off between the legs of a ladder/

You may think this is vicious,you may get suspicious/
of my clearly forsaken wishes/
cuz like battleship, your rhymes are misses/

good luck
 
Old 08-02-04, 01:42 AM   #5
Plutonium
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From: New Zealand
IP: 9E5A FA61

check this out:

this cat's lines are so clean he sees nothin in his napkin//1
da kid just lost us 4ever cause it's my battle he ACCEPTED//2
kid is septic, deep inside he knows he’s no match for me//3
he couldn’t flow even if no one’s watching him do the potty//4
what’s funny, kid so up himself thinking he be a star//5
when only time his lines rhyme is when he choke out his Mars bar//6
I use up chronics wisely, this cat just wastes his time//7
It’ll be years before he makes up a multi-syllable rhyme//8
The pressures on this guy, he’s shooked so he just wrote in scribble//9
I’ma make his raps “flex” as if his underlines are rippled//10
With my touch of magic, you’ll just get your ass kicked//11
This would be those drastic total-blowouts labeled under “classic”//12
Your prewritten nursery rhymes will have you lyrically blasted//13
My standards are too high for you even if you smoked a joint//14
I can win and leave you untouched, talk about missing the point!//15
 
Old 08-02-04, 01:42 AM   #6
Plutonium
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aight let's get some votes in this battle, polls open people!
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Old 08-02-04, 01:50 AM   #7
**FLEx**
Flyweight
 
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From: Canada
IP: F527 20D5

Props to Plutonium!!!!! Good job that was my first battle, now we just gotta wait for the results
 
Old 08-02-04, 08:16 AM   #8
!RIFF RAFF!
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From: Newcastle..England..
IP: CCAE A7E8

Voted For: **FLEx**

close battle.....
werent much between you...
but flex was that lil better .............
none of you had a punch..they werent even slaps.....
but on flow and wordplay flex gets my vote..........
 
Old 08-02-04, 09:17 AM   #9
daillest1
Daillest Nigga~~NOK~~
 
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From: south east dc
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Voted For: **FLEx**

better punches better flow better dissed....i wasnt feelin the other guys verse too much...kinda boring too me
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Old 08-02-04, 12:20 PM   #10
NGstuntman
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From: london, England
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Voted For: **FLEx**

nice opener. . . i think there was mults in there. . .
i think the style was ok, i could kinda read up on the flow and i think it was aight. . .
i think some of the lines sucked, where u sacrificed rhymes for meaning, but if u keep practicing i think u'll master that. . .
well done
v/ flex
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Old 08-05-04, 12:29 AM   #11
malak
Light Weight
 
From: Chitown
IP: EECF 4742

Voted For: **FLEx**

alright this goes to flex his flow was raw and the punches by plu were weak. Plu your rhymes are simple you need to elevate. And flex you made up with not a lot of punches with that flow. Sick. yo show me some love. no hate

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Old 08-05-04, 03:55 AM   #12
Plutonium
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i dunno how weak my shit was...............uppin for votes
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Old 08-06-04, 12:50 AM   #13
Plutonium
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IP: 7189 3E18

uppin for more votes..................................
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Old 08-08-04, 02:02 AM   #14
Plutonium
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IP: 5E7E 501C

uppin for more votes..................................
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Old 08-08-04, 02:12 AM   #15
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
From: East Coast
IP: 5407 5CCC

Voted For: Plutonium

plut gets my vote because his ending got better then flexs cause it was pretty much even b4 that
struc tie
flow tie
metas pluto though some made no sense
voc tie
punch tie
ending pluto
close one decent shit flex pluto get the votte
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