yo im a tooth ache not your ordaniry milkshake
now i battle till the earth quake look around
nigga you might b frm the same ground ill crumble you to mound like a cookie dont step up to me you still a rookie
ill break ya like a virgins pussy rip open up ya flesh
so the blood flows out you spit so cheep i bet your lyrics borrowed and if this battle dont finsh heres the keyboard finsh tommorw your lucky im typin the battle im out numered
cause your a hill biley wid a heard of cattle i make sure your face crackle im a leavin now get an pen and paper and write somtink down
||Phatinum stepping to me will leave you shaking like a bobble~head||
||Dawgs claims he hard but only if somehow he swollows~lead||
||Stop don't progress I'll shake~`ya~rep when I attach you won't fake~ya~death||
||Don't 'mouth off' I aint here to rate~ya~breath but here to break~ya~neck||
||Phat slow~off~da~splift doesnt show his pic cuz he looks like a cross between a ho~and~a~bitch||
||Phat thinking out loud "Yo Quake come near me lemme blow~on~ya~dick||
||Seems like you're attracted to jokes so lemme give the voterz a laugh||
||The only way Phatinum gets his dick wet is when he visitz the bath||
||And if you want 'beef' call the butcher it could be delivered to your front~door||
||I could teach you how to stunt~whore I could 'smoke' you closer to a blunt's~core||
||Plus you got 90 odds post and scared to battle cuz he scared that god would sin~me||
||Nah you watch 2 much TV espcially Oprah the way your battle record is Win~free (Winfrey)||
||And I got quick~eyes you winning explains men giving you dick~rides||
||You getting 1 vote, that bitch~lies u coming on top shows you lick~guys||
Quake gets it for harder hittin punches. Yo Phat yours were alrite but not hard enough(soft). Both of you had played punchlines. What did it was probably the 'Winfrey' weren't all dat tho'. Phat still work on your structure and flow your losin it although your punches have stepped up. Add more 'ooh' 'ahh' factor to your verses. One last thing it's 10-16 go for the max to give you a better chance and time to unfold your attack (I shud kno) and that's what Quake did learn from this battle and all your other ones. return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138043
__________________ Black Man White(BMW)
No Grudges.
Yo Im voting for Quake because I just read another one of Phatinum battles and he used the same lame lines about rhymes being borrowed and coming back tommorow and all that BS. Dog and you talked about me being original? He was Battling Gee by the way.