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Check in by: 08-07-04 at 02:09 AM

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BANG has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 01:48 AM.

headgames has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 01:57 AM.

aight so who is going to spit first me or you , i got no problems going first or second.

Check it, like a pussy, this kid's about to get hit...
betta tell your familly nice to know ya...
cuz my rhmes knock ya into a coma...
I bring the heat, cook you like a peace of meat...
intimidate like the boogie man, make you hide under your sheet...
and you should stay hidden, cuz people gonna laugh when they heard you been beat...
but this aint no laughing matter...
your whole reputation gonna shatter...
Man when it comes to rounds i could 9 like inches of of dick down the throught of a ho...
but you only got 2 inches to swallow...
the only way you could win is from a no show...
think you got game but you got none...
my ryhmes blow you away like a shotgun...
dont be hatin me it's good phsycology...
i murdered you lyrically like you was outa shap...
not just physcally but mentally

New? Na nigga- I been rappin
Set me up for the down fall? Na nigga it wont happen
Come at me when i introduced claimin the same
Couple minutes after that you bragin about some crew you fame/ By now everybody know that im ahead of ya game-
so them head games you tryin to play wont be the same/
Lames like you is so easy to tell
for that fact that you was so eager to fail
If you cant see I got you- then battle a nigga reading brail

Vetti Bang

tic-toc, tic-toc, tic-toc, yo bang your on the clock

shit bang , give you props, that was tight man thight

Voted For: headgames

ima have to give this to headgames although both need to elevate head games need to work on his structure big time, it was awkward to read
n Bang just need to work on everything else n make his rhymes more complicated n he'll b doin alot better
return the favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136344
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136650

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ha, lol i'd return the favor but i cant, need to have at least twenty posts to do it sry, thnx for the vote, and the advice, i wasnt pulling my best shit though, next batlle you guys ima rap harder, i underestimated BANG, yeye i'll fix my structure no doubt aight, ey sry, next time when i can i'll return the favor aight

uppin this battle aight

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Can I up this battle againg now or do i gotta wait. I dont know uppin

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"You know I own the steal
Everything aint jabs and hooks and you aint Holyfield"

"We respected Highly -Cus You aint gotta practice gymnastics to catch a body"

Voted For: headgames

nice one headgames nice personals, structure wasn't too bad the thing that wasn't good is the "..." after the sentances

Voted For: BANG

open bang
close bang
multi non
per bang
enjoy bang

v/bong

head the first half of yo shit dont ryme

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check it - hit
nice to know ya - coma

Dawgg you trippin, those rhymes, ryhme