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Fr3MiSoul | 1 | 16.67% | |
**FLEx** | 5 | 83.33% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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08-08-04, 09:54 PM | #1 | |
Flyweight
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**FLEx** vs Fr3MiSoul
IP: 668E 7881
Battle Rules:
10 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting allright no prewritten shit cuz we can tell Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-08-04 at 10:24 PM Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in. |
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08-08-04, 10:02 PM | #2 | |
Guest
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IP: C1DA C961
Fr3MiSoul has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 10:02 PM.
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08-08-04, 10:03 PM | #3 | |
Guest
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IP: 668E 7881
**FLEx** has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 10:03 PM.
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08-08-04, 10:12 PM | #4 |
New to RB
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IP: C1DA C961
ayo, go get me my hand a gun, so i can send this punk back to canada
dont even spit punk bastard flex,tryin to rhyme with the best/ who u think u are?go back to white castle kumar, u'll b hurt wit 2 bars/ whose in charge?/me, ima beast with the gift of speak/ go home and get back to beatin ya meat/ with ya uncle p.diddy/u wont b as lucky as 50/ cuz u wont b alive after this gun gets empty/ no reason to come back quickly, i ended ur shit with the line wit p. diddy/ |
08-08-04, 10:18 PM | #5 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 668E 7881
You're wanted for murder and I'm about to close the case//
i can rite my name all over this crime sceen and still won't leave a trace// i don't like animals but they call me Ace// when nature calls, I break yo shins and piss on your face// you might wanna watch from someone who can teach// or get shit on like seagulls at the beach// my speech, is complex and above your status// your "flex" is so small, and your mouth is the fattest// you use other mens joysticks just to play// you get more wood in your ass than Arbour day// |
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08-08-04, 10:24 PM | #6 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 668E 7881
Yo the minimum is 10 lines you retard............but Props to you anyway
lets uppin the votes |
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08-08-04, 10:25 PM | #7 |
New to RB
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IP: C1DA C961
o my fault... it said unlimited so i wuznt thinkin.. my fault props 2 u 2
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08-08-04, 10:33 PM | #8 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 668E 7881
lol doesn't bother me.... uppin the vote in hear people
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08-08-04, 10:35 PM | #9 | |
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
Voted For: Fr3MiSoul
Blah Horrible Battle, Barely Any Good Punches Were Thrown On Either Side, And Flex Didnt Throw Any, He Said Hell Spit In Frems Face, And He Has A Small "Flex"... Punches- Frem Flow- Frem Wordplay- Niether Metas- Niether Multis- Niether Originality- Tie Structure- Tie Horrible Battle V- Frem
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08-08-04, 10:41 PM | #10 |
New to RB
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IP: C1DA C961
ight, i'll work on it, thanx for the constructive criticism
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08-08-04, 10:45 PM | #11 | |
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
If You Want Constructive Critiscm, Here Ya Go.....
Example Say Someone Was Makeing Fun Of You At School Or Anywhere, You Would Think Of A Diss Back Right?, And You Want That Diss To Be Truthful So It Hurts More, Well Same Thing In Battleing, Think Of Things You Know About The Person Your Battleing, And Diss Them, Also Have An Equal Flow, Dont Just Say A Diss, Make A Diss That Flows Good, Hits Hard, Is Truthful, And That The Reader Will Understand, Also, Dont Bring Mainstream Rappers Into Your Verses, Its Been Done Many Times, Try To Be Original And Witty... There That Should Be Enough To Help You Out For Now...
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08-08-04, 10:47 PM | #12 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 2C69 8F6D
Voted For: **FLEx**
flex- iight punches and some wordplay, ok flow.. some stretched lines but overall it was iight..6.5/10 fr3misoul-ur lines were very stretched and ur punches didnt hit to hard, u had a personal on where he was from but it was weak..6/10 v/flex |
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08-08-04, 10:47 PM | #13 |
New to RB
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IP: C1DA C961
ight thanx... i'm new, but that did help alot, i'd like to check out 1 of ur battles, just 2 c wat a good battle rap looks like
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08-08-04, 10:48 PM | #14 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 2C69 8F6D
return the favor.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140464
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08-08-04, 10:54 PM | #15 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3C58 486D
Voted For: **FLEx**
Man, ima vote for flex, but both needa elevate, I was feelin the begginin of flex's verse and i like the ending, but wasnt really feelin the middle of it, but flex WHERE WERE THE PERSONNELS, i liked the flows and some punches hit, where were the multi's? n soul, man i wasnt feelin that too much you had personels, but your rhyme sceme i didnt like, the endin was just sooo weak n i wasnt feelin your flow, you had a few puches, but all in all ima have to give it Flex, both still needa elevate |
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