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| The Black Plague |
  
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5 | 100.00% |
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08-11-04, 03:52 PM
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The Black Plague vs Ruffridah187
IP: FE02 6F02
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08-11-04, 04:02 PM
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IP: B690 40FB
The Black Plague has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 04:02 PM.
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08-11-04, 04:03 PM
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IP: FE02 6F02
Ruffridah187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 04:03 PM.
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08-11-04, 04:18 PM
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... I Dont Hate...
I Speak The Truth
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IP: B690 40FB
This kid named himself ruffridah, cuz thats the way he rides dicks
His wackness is immense, like the variety of colors in a bowl of trix Kid needed serious help, so he thought hed join a suport group..Called Welfair Came to this site with big thoughts, but he's flopped worse than sebastian Telfair Just look at his rec, his 3 wins were against peeps actually wacker than he is I was suprised to find this out, his rhymes are pathetic, Stevie Wonder can see this Look at his avvy, just another reminder that this little herb is an ass He's gettin shocked, he thought he'd rip me, but i know he's learnin fast This fool could pick up burning dog crap, and still not "Drop" hot shit Already 8 battles, you'd think you'd pick up some skill, but u just dont got it |
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08-11-04, 04:20 PM
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... I Dont Hate...
I Speak The Truth
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IP: B690 40FB
Damn, struc is off again... Its hard to see how ya lines will turn out with this new battle postin thing
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08-11-04, 04:23 PM
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IP: FE02 6F02
The Black Plague? Fuck i'll relax and merk you with ease
You abused rap so bad that it gave you some 'Plague' or disease Mother fucker, i'm like usher, rhymes are fire, they hit you and let you "Burn" Have you twist and turn in your sleep and you still don't learn Face it bitch, i could beat you with basic shit Retrace it all the way back to a pop artist and the idenity'd fit You faulty bitch i don't have to beat you with multies n' shit Think your rhymes 'sweet' only if you steal suckers and jaw busters from Mr. Bulkies bitch Shit aint no reason to act like i'll lose, aint no reason to pretend Cuz i know i'll merk your punk ass, not with 20 lines, WITH 10! Quick verse....nothing amazing....just threw it together cuz i am busy...if i lose then woopty doo....another loss....lol |
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08-11-04, 04:24 PM
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IP: FE02 6F02
yea i know....i hate it
we'll get used to it....hopefully
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08-11-04, 04:29 PM
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IP: FE02 6F02
ok....Uppin
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08-11-04, 05:11 PM
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IP: 93AF 0EB2
Voted For: The Black Plague
vote= black plague reason: i was feelin both of yall flow but bp had more content and stronger punches than ruffrida. that stevie wonder line is kinda played but besides that your verse was fairly hot. ruff ridah yo verse was above average but you need to elevate on your vocab and punches, good battle.
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08-11-04, 05:26 PM
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... I Dont Hate...
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IP: B690 40FB
Aight uppin again...
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08-12-04, 10:42 AM
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... I Dont Hate...
I Speak The Truth
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IP: DC71 3BF5
Uppin...
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08-12-04, 01:50 PM
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IP: C56C 93CC
Voted For: The Black Plague
this was a very decent battle but i think black plaque took this my vote black plaque Expanation
ruffrydah187 you had a very decent verse... it had some nice punchlines... not many personals... The strucutre was off atimes but it was alittle better then black ... next:Meta: you didnt have any meta... multies ... i saw alittle bit but they were both wack and off....overall your verse was iight but not enought to defeat black plaque Black Plaque your verse was a pretty simple and good it had its ups and down... but this was apretty much on sided ... you had some nice punchlines.. your opener was alittle weak but you picked up hard and won this battle in my opoinion... overall vote :Black plaque
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08-12-04, 02:19 PM
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IP: 3B43 EB4A
Voted For: The Black Plague
Plague= yo verse was ok......you had some aight punchelines in it.....really no use of multis.....i think you coulda used betta wordplay....personals were aight........like i said at first ya verse was ok Ridah= ya verse wasnt that good........it seemed too simple to me....you didnt have no complexity.....punchelines really didnt hit hard enough.........that personal in ya second like it really wasnt no use for it cuz it did nothing.....so keep elevatin.......
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08-12-04, 02:25 PM
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... I Dont Hate...
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IP: DC71 3BF5
IIght thanks for the votes ya'll...
Uppin again |
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08-12-04, 03:20 PM
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IP: D135 D6AF
Voted For: The Black Plague
The Black Plague? Fuck i'll relax and merk you with ease You abused rap so bad that it gave you some 'Plague' or disease 7/10 Mother fucker, i'm like usher, rhymes are fire, they hit you and let you "Burn" Have you twist and turn in your sleep and you still don't learn 6./10 Face it bitch, i could beat you with basic shit Retrace it all the way back to a pop artist and the idenity'd fit 6/10 You faulty bitch i don't have to beat you with multies n' shit Think your rhymes 'sweet' only if you steal suckers and jaw busters from Mr. Bulkies bitch 6/10 Shit aint no reason to act like i'll lose, aint no reason to pretend Cuz i know i'll merk your punk ass, not with 20 lines, WITH 10! 6/10 This kid named himself ruffridah, cuz thats the way he rides dicks His wackness is immense, like the variety of colors in a bowl of trix 7/10 Kid needed serious help, so he thought hed join a suport group..Called Welfair Came to this site with big thoughts, but he's flopped worse than sebastian Telfair 7/10 Just look at his rec, his 3 wins were against peeps actually wacker than he is I was suprised to find this out, his rhymes are pathetic, Stevie Wonder can see this 8/10 Look at his avvy, just another reminder that this little herb is an ass He's gettin shocked, he thought he'd rip me, but i know he's learnin fast 6/10 This fool could pick up burning dog crap, and still not "Drop" hot shit Already 8 battles, you'd think you'd pick up some skill, but u just dont got it 6/10 came down 2 harder punches and overall better wordplay Ruff overall 50/100 Black overall 70/100
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