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Old 07-02-02, 05:00 PM   #1
DoubleG
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biggdz40cal vs DoubleG

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yo....... Rules:

no beef votes
no dickrideing
no crew votes
10-20 bars

and any thing else i said....i think got all of it though...

good luck
 
Old 07-02-02, 11:36 PM   #2
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my verse

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how you try'n to read and rip when ya punk ass is elitorit/
yo dawg, i know your in your pireid, but don't have a fit/
for either one of us, there's nothing to benifit/
EXCEPT THE FACT I'M GONNA LYRICALLY POP 16 CAPS IN YA MOTHA FUCKA/
you know that i did heard about that shit with you and ya boy friend, sucka sucka!/
but any way, with you a weck bitch and me and my rap killing sensation/
youthey all can tell that i'm gonna be the one that's called for you time of assassaination/
cause truely, only way to beat me is to bring ya ryhmes to a higher elevation/
cause ya try'n to test this, now there's another artical in the newspaper/
but this time it's not going to be about your dad's wife, male rapper/
because ya shit is weck, you should get a new hobbie subjection/
cause pretty soon ya'll be dead, but it's just a painless injection/
but i think you would of felt the 10 hits with that bat, sorry man they weren't optional/
why aren't you moveing or breathing, i think that shit made you disfunctional/
after being hit with this combonation/
ya gonna need to be rushed to the emergencey station/
cause when i come in with my lyrical disastar, it's gonna feel like an alien invation/
cause motha fucka, there's no way ya can beat this cockation/
cause only thing ya got won't work, ya pycopathic tactic/
think ya sick, ya not ya dumb ass male chick, why don't you go fishing you fuck'n hick/

Last edited by DoubleG : 07-02-02 at 11:42 PM.
 
Old 07-03-02, 12:05 AM   #3
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MY LEVEL

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how can you think that your even on MY LEVEL..
your HEADS UP IN THE CLOUDS, I'm DOWN HERE WITH THE DEVIL..
so HERE's shovel DIG ME...
your comin short like PIGMY's...
I stand on court HARD like Shaq, your SOFT like MISS PIGGY...
three FEET TALL, 6 inch HEELS AND ALL,
you might as well be a BITCH the way you RESPOND TO MY CALLS..
now I'm runnin' up inside you like A VIRUS DOES...
your playin PEE WEE HERMAN games and I'm LIKE CYRUS WAS...
CRIPS AND BLOODS, I'M HOLDIN DOWN BITCHES AND THUGZ..
and don't make me LET'EM UP CAUSE THEY'LL BE SPITTIN THEM SLUGZ...
and you couldnt wRAP if you were made of CELLOPHANE..
your SEE THRU like a WINDOW that's WHY I'M BRINGING HELLA PAYNE...
SHATTERING your hopes watchin'em SCATTERING FAST..
they say you SHOULDNT THROW STONES FROM HOMES MADE OUT OF GLASS...
but I aint throwin' stone's I'll be throwin SOME LEAD...
in the form of a LYRICAL BULLET PENETRATING! YOU'RE NOW DEAD!!!
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Old 07-03-02, 12:06 AM   #4
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got my vs. in G

uppin this ish
 
Old 07-03-02, 01:31 AM   #5
sunshine
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dubG no big ups the flow was horrible, all Biggs had to do is throw one punch and its over. this battle reminds me of tyson and lewis.

VOTE=biggs
 
Old 07-03-02, 07:13 AM   #6
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not a bad battle my vote is for double g this is how it breaks down

word play= none really from either

flow= double g
voclab= double g
multi's = double g
punches= double g
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
 
Old 07-03-02, 11:17 AM   #7
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OOOOWEEE!

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OOOWEEE! Sorry Double G, but tha DOGG got in yo ass on this one. I felt his punches were harder hitting, his rhyme scheme was tiggity, and just an all around betta verse. Double G just seemed to be trying too hard and his flow seemed choppy as hell ta me, but that's my opinion.

FAV LINES:"CRIPS AND BLOODS, I'M HOLDIN DOWN BITCHES AND THUGZ..
and don't make me LET'EM UP CAUSE THEY'LL BE SPITTIN THEM SLUGZ..."

VOTE=biggdz40cal

L.O. C-YA!!
 
Old 07-03-02, 11:34 AM   #8
$__CrEaTiVe_$
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My vote gots to go to biggzD because he had a flow wit some nice punches......
DoubleG this was a nice piece here ya just need to work it in wit a flow.....

Breakdown........
flow= double g
voclab= double g
multi's = double g
punches= double g

im wit that kid in the dirt on wordplay........

Nice battle please return the favor on my battles PeAce.....
 
Old 07-03-02, 11:36 AM   #9
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this battle waqs ok, the only thing that made it ok was bigg's verse,

double g: had no worlplay, bad flow(the rhyme scheme kept changing and it was hard to follow), same old shit i hear every time, no lines that caught me eye, i hated reading it, i thought it would never end, bad verse overall.....

biggs: had alright flow(it was good at the beginning, but then at the end, it ended up like g's), could have made it more creative but i still liked it,
(how can you think that your even on MY LEVEL..
your HEADS UP IN THE CLOUDS, I'm DOWN HERE WITH THE DEVIL..
so HERE's shovel DIG ME...
your comin short like PIGMY's)
4 great lines i really liked, i enjoyed reading it at the start but at the end it died(like double g's whole verse), an o.k verse overall...

VOTE: bigg's(although ur verse is bettah, it ain't that much bettah)
 
Old 07-03-02, 11:36 AM   #10
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Quote:
Originally posted by DirtBoy69
not a bad battle my vote is for double g this is how it breaks down

word play= none really from either

flow= double g
voclab= double g
multi's = double g
punches= double g


99.99% of the time you vote for the loser,what the fuck is up with you,your vote doesn't count,it will count when you stop RIDING DIRTY DICKS..................
Now my vote,it was obvious bigz took this one home,if you disagree,well then you don't know what the fuck you are talking about.He had better flow,with nice multies,some basic punches,but compared to Double G's,he knocked him the fuck out.And he had nice metaphors.

Vote=Bigz
 
Old 07-03-02, 11:44 AM   #11
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thnx for the votes. I'd say it wz a shut out. 5 to 1 oops I mean 5 to 0. thnx ya'll. sorry G.

K.O.
can we close this thread yet?
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Old 07-03-02, 12:12 PM   #12
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sorry man,read the vote wrong

Bigz wins
 
 


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