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Old 07-02-02, 09:31 PM   #1
Direkt-Threat
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E-Dub V.S Direkt Threat

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Go ahead, make rules and ish...
 
Old 07-03-02, 01:05 AM   #2
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first to 5 3-0 ko
no crew hate d/r vote
no free-posting
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for 30 pts.



u wanna holla back at dub lookin to put another name in ur rip-list..even thou u got da right name, u still couldnt hit dis..my adrenaline rush to rip ur ass is like a maddens blitz shyt/
fuckin up ur repatation as a good mc..nobody still wouldnt feel'ya even if u wuz a hood-mc..fuck with me and become a mystery mc..dis-mangle ur azz and now u a history-mc..flame off 75% of ur skin any time u try to play with dub fire dat burns to a 3rd degree/
lace pilots in ur skull and leave'ya metal plated in da brain..or i might do a quickie, duck-tape'ya mouth and inject anti-freeze in ur veins/
no-need to get'cha ghost-writer on dis one..(fuckit) bring him too so all both of ya'll can get a piece of da shot-gun..i let my kid kill'ya like a deer screaming "I got one" (very good son)/
and aint trying to come in dis battle with much..i just spit da right amount of barz to shut ur azz-up..runnin in ur home glock cocked face, mask-up..yo kid seen u tryin to defend and his thoughs were "dad sucks"..legs get snapped necks get broked and heads get cut/
dats how i do ya' after dis grab sum lotion cuz i doubt it dat ur gurl wanna screw'ya..(yeah u da tightest on rb) (sike)hahahaha! fooled'ya..nicca u a student in da game, so dont make me have to school'ya/
u get discipline just for writing ugly..hit'cha with da yard-stick and make ur eyez poke out like lights on a buggy../
text grippin..keystyle freestyle ass-whoopin..dat got ur face smushed-in..paralyzed from da waste down cuz u got 90% of ur body crushed-in..and dats da results of us battling/
get ur self wrapped up in bandages..forensic science had to gather up da remains of u on da vvv concrete canvas,kid.. commin down on u hader den snow on da hill of avalanches.. u winnin is 1 in a million like seein a prayin-mantis/
fuck u up so bad da it dont matter if u duck my last punch.. (its ok) cuz da last 9, i spitted dem metallish so i know dem 1's got cha crunched/

Last edited by De Niro : 07-03-02 at 01:10 AM.
 
Old 07-03-02, 12:58 PM   #3
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I hate excuses, but I just woke up man, Sorry...

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Spittin in V.V.V, no one wants to 'Battle this Vet'...
I'll give you 'Bank Account' for a 'Reality Check'...
Your not 'Hanging' in my direction, about to 'Make you Fall'...
E-Dud is wack, and to make it worse his name 'Say's it All'!...
Direkt spits hot, it's gonna' be sad to 'See you Melt'...
Im relevant to 'Liquor', Direkt's just 'Bad for your Health'...
Everyone get's one shot, 'Don't Bother to Count the Chances'...
You Thinking about Water, you'll face the 'Concious'-Quenches'(Consequences)
E-Dub-("Can I beat Direkt, you must be "Shittin me Dawg")
This kid is dirt on 'Toilet Seats' the way im 'Pissing him Off'...
'Same Shit', Direkt-Threat doesn't really care what you 'Came With'...
It's 'Shame Less' to know that 90% of this site is 'Brain Less'...
Trust,...the the unoticable 'Flames' that you 'Clame' are 'Lamley Spit'...
Your not a man, i'll 'Frame this Chick', here a tip at your style 'Change it Quick'...
E-Dub'll uses Glocks and Nines, I use knives, i'll 'Severe this 'Dude'...
You and your mother suck dick and she still spits 'Better the You'...(Cum)

Im out, peace. May the voting Start....
 
Old 07-03-02, 02:14 PM   #4
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Uppin!!!
 
Old 07-03-02, 02:29 PM   #5
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This was a nice battle,both came good,but Direkt left e-Dub trailing.E-dubs lines were way yoo long,you don't need a millon fillers to lead up to a punch,that kills the punch,thats most likely why his punches didn't hit too hard.

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E-Dubsu wanna holla back at dub lookin to put another name in ur rip-list..even thou u got da right name, u still couldnt hit dis..my adrenaline rush to rip ur ass is like a maddens blitz shyt/


see too many fillers.it totlally killed the punch,you also had some multies,but with the length of the lines it also killed the affects of them.

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Spittin in V.V.V, no one wants to 'Battle this Vet'...
I'll give you 'Bank Account' for a 'Reality Check'...
Your not 'Hanging' in my direction, about to 'Make you Fall'...


See,these punches are right to the point,they aren't load with a bunch of fillers and smooth nicely.Their is also lots of multies,which with direct punches,makes it flow really smoothly.

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lace pilots in ur skull and leave'ya metal plated in da brain..or i might do a quickie, duck-tape'ya mouth and inject anti-freeze in ur veins/

That was a good punch,just too many fillers

now look at Direkts
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Direkt-Threat
Direkt spits hot, it's gonna' be sad to 'See you Melt'...
Im relevant to 'Liquor', Direkt's just 'Bad for your Health'...
Everyone get's one shot, 'Don't Bother to Count the Chances'...
You Thinking about Water, you'll face the 'Concious'-Quenches'(Consequences)


Look at all thw word play,flow,multies and how it is direct to the punches.Direkt-Threat came out better everywhere,flow,multies,metaphors,and punches.His verse was better overall.

vote=Direkt Threat
 
Old 07-03-02, 02:38 PM   #6
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1-0, let's keep the voting on...remember this is worth 30 pts, finnaly i'll get some points up on the board.
 
Old 07-03-02, 03:09 PM   #7
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As im Uppin this battle, you fuckers a Downing it, Geez, please vote...
 
Old 07-03-02, 03:16 PM   #8
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E-dubs lines were way yoo long,you don't need a millon fillers to lead up to a punch,that kills the punch,thats most likely why his punches didn't hit too hard.

^Nuff said...I think it was a good battle all in all but Direkt came a lil more harder wit his punches. So my vote goes to direct based on that an that alone...Good battle fellas! Make sure you vote on mine with LackofLogic since I didnt sleep on your battle. ~1~
 
Old 07-03-02, 03:54 PM   #9
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Uppin...
 
Old 07-03-02, 04:19 PM   #10
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aight this was an easy battle to vote on....both came good, i just felt that direkt came harder in the end....

basically, this line did it for me...

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This kid is dirt on 'Toilet Seats' the way im 'Pissing him Off'...


that was nice...so punches-direct
wordplay-direct
creativeness-direct....

only thing that edub had were nice fillerz...no hatin on edub, but u got leveled

Vote=direkt
 
Old 07-03-02, 04:28 PM   #11
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I would have to agree wit konfidential, e-dubs bars where way to long seemed like the punches missed 'cuz a that



my vote goes to Direkt-Threat
 
Old 07-03-02, 04:38 PM   #12
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Good battle, mabey next time E-dub...remember, you owe me 30 pts yo.
 
 


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