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Old 07-02-02, 01:23 AM   #1
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this week's topic is..... you have 24 hours to live explain what you would do with those last 24 hours of your life

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deadline for verse is sunday at 11:59 pm (E.S.T)

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Old 07-02-02, 04:09 AM   #2
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Clock's ticking, what am I thinking, I've got no time to waste
Doctor diagnosed me as positive today
Only 24 hours till I say my last goodbye
There's a lot of things to get in today before I'll curl up and die.
First all of you I got beef with, you remembering me?
You will be after today, I've raided a government armory,
Fuck glocks, gats, nines, AKs and shotguns
I'll be blowing you to beirut with a nuke, 30 megatons.
But that's not all, there's more enemies to defeat,
What about all those stuffed suits that attempted to censor me.
We'll see just what they're doing when I kidnap their wife and kids,
Kill their dog, housecat, hampster, and flush down their goldfish.
After that they'll change their minds fifty times quicker,
when I'm done there'll be no more parental advisory stickers.
Then to end my day of violence I"m going to watch my last sunset,
Gather up all my family and say goodbye but I'm not done yet.
just don't think you can fuck with my kin when this day's done and I'm gone,
As a ghost I will watch over them and take care of anyone,
who tries to harm them, they can expect some trouble and haunting,
like poltergeist, "I'm here" and there's gonna be a lot more than taunting.
So for my last day with mother earth, I'm going to shake the system to its knees,
Although I'm going to fade away when it's over, I'll have achieved immortality.

Hmm... not sure that I like that a whole lot, but whatever...

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Old 07-02-02, 03:28 PM   #3
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i got 1380 minutes, 23 hours, it was 1 hour since i got told by the doc...
The news was about as positive as the the AIDS that ive got ( HIV )
Even worse, there's at least 26 girls that i slept with
and i gotta tell all those they may of been AIDS infected!!!
i feel de-crepid, a social outkast, like no one wants to know me
peeple think thats its contagious, even my homies!
but with my last 24, i'll donate all my shit to the poor
Give my all to the peeple who aint got nuttin at all
Then i'll get a full body tatoo, shave my head to a mohican
Start singing P.Diddy hits while raping puerto ricans
contemplate the many different ways of suicide
Put the gun between my eyes and pull the trigger cuz you only get one attempt at dying...
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Old 07-03-02, 06:51 AM   #4
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here's mine

Sittin in the doctors office with tears in my eyes/
I know I was dying so why when you know everyone cries/
While everyone except my girl with her I’ve held up between the lies/
What to do with my last day on earth?/
So much to do why has my death have to be so close to birth/
Only eighteen years old haven’t even had a chance to vote yet/
I can drive my first thing to speed while driving in my corvette/
Get pulled over, get a ticket say I’ll never have to pay I bet/
That was fun but now it’s time to be serious/
Got to go and tell my girl without causing a big fuss/
She seems alright and even has ideas as to how to spend the time/
First comes the best sex ever and this ain’t a bullshit line/
I’m a graf artist so it’s do some tagging without paying for the “crime”/
Next stop sky diving high smoking up on the way to the air port/
On the plane and with the rush I’ve got I wonder why this ain’t an bigger sport/
In mid air holding hands with my girl it feels like paradise/
Missin life already wondering why I threw a snake eyes with life’s dice/
No family to be with but my girl will be suffice/
Go to a party get drunk back at my house we do it again/
15 minutes left looking at the clock it’s a quarter to ten/
My girl went home crying sittin in my chair ready to de alone/
Tears pouring down as I take my final breath with a moan/
Close my eyes ready to die alone in my home/
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Old 07-03-02, 10:51 AM   #5
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O my God, millions of thoughts run through my Brain all at once/
My mind and actions become more fucked up than a serial nonce/
I gotta do sumat, 24 man, First off a bitch 2 fuck/
4 hours it takes till finlly i play the card of luck/
Bust a nut for the last time, but for some reason i still feel awake/
Get outta bed quickly, pull up my pants “Now how long will this take?”/
“I think i got time.My Shirt? Fuck that” i wanna be like my day of birth/
Take of my garments and run around the streets, the way God put us on this earth/
Clocks tickin, but i find an underground club “Over 18’s? i don’t think so”
I grab the club’s mic, bust a quick rhyme, then exit “Only 3 hours to go!”/
Me knocks on my house, finds my family, makes a few telephone calls/
“Yes Granny i love you” “Christine SUCK MY BALLZ!”/
My next of kin, leave me alone, to contemplate my living state contribution/
Life ain’t a bitch, it’s a gift, but sometimes you can’t find the final solution/
With that i bow my head in prayer, knowing that only soon/
God will sit before me, “Lord please let me in the Upper Room/
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Old 07-04-02, 12:06 AM   #6
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Doctor just gave me the bad news, got 24 hours to live/
I'm mad now, so I grab the gun and spit the clip in his rib/
I yell "Nurse", she comes thru the door/
Told her to provide me sex, right on the floor/
She said yes while the doctor's dead/
Not seein' his dead body, she provides me head/
The door is locked it's four o' clock/
I'm a knock this whore on the spot/
She screamin', got others worry/
She tells me "hurry"/
Cause she thought I was a 1 min man/
Turned out to be an hour, her fuckin' pussy is try as sand/
Then I finally bust a nut, she screamin' "what the fuck"/
I said gotta go hoe, only got 22 more hours to go/
So I sneaked out the window, the buildin' only had two floors/
Jumped in my two door, called up my man and told him to meet me at the food court/
As I got in to the mall, my dog was in the corner smokin'/
I said "I got 24 hrs to live and I'm not joking"/
He drops his blunt right when a astroird hit's earth/
It wasen't big, cause we still breathin' while I get shitted on by a bird/
I say fuck, I'm dyin' might as well go out wit a bang/
He said what u gonna do, I said point blank the president/
What am I sayin', I'm goin' nuts/
While this dude in the parkin' lot doin' donuts/
Then I realized life is all about gettin' recognized/
So all the wrong doer's get victimized/
I tell ma friend "peace" while I go cop a bazooka, shit's big in size/
Cause size does matter, I'm a splatter their insides/
So I go to the nearest police station, and one shot left that shit in smoke/
All of them are dead, who's gonna chase this "ghost"/
Then a state troopers gets behind my car/
As I was headin' towards the bar/
All of a sudden a fuckin' helicopter shows up/
I said "O fuck", I ain't goin' no where, I might as well blow up/
I pulled over and got out quick/
Shot the helicopter down, and before it hit the ground/
The fuckin' cop shot one threw my dome/
For a split second I turned and aimed toward his chrome/
And squeezed but nothin' came out/
The bullets were flammed out/
And my time ran out, I'm headin' towards the hell house/
Got decieced in my 16th hour/
But left the city in a blood shower/
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Old 07-04-02, 12:11 AM   #7
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^^^damn my fault about the bar limit, I just kept goin'..ma bad...1
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Old 07-06-02, 02:43 AM   #8
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yo Im late but I got 24 hours to live, no time to post shit//
gotta go coast to coast and i have no time to loaft kid//
hope to do as much as I can in my time left//
I might not have much time but I got a few rhymes left//
gotta visit my fam, thank my mom for life//
got aids from dis girl now im payin the price//
i was more unprotected then rent-a-cops//
thank my pops for raisin me, tell him i love him lots//
give him a kiss like jada tell him im gone for miles see//
tell him its all over but its okay, its my life like styles P//
i gto 24 hours to live jus think about it//
days go bye we dont even thank god for livin//
now dat it over i realize how good life really is//
how much i wanted kids, to have a fam and really live//
im too mashed and im past the deadline so I cant win//
now im dead, satnd in a line..put ya hands in

haha unk outta ma jace..jus wanted to make da appearance yall...
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Old 07-06-02, 03:02 AM   #9
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me i'd be the craziest mo'fo by far, stealing planes off mat's of tars//
no need follow the law die a star, ellude the cops starting fights in bars//
str8 live it up and steal a viper or a supra or some other super cars//
fucking pull a stunt out,twirl and shoot som people n get drunk with my girl//
if ima die in 24 ima die fucking my girl with finger up saying fuck the world//
you gonna kill me, then ima kill haters and shoot the fucking ozone layer//
getting with my girl don't pay her, writing last words lika true rhyme sprayer//
seeking out them faggot sand jockies more eager to kill me one than a traitor//
i mean if ima die ima take some scum motherfuckas with my dirtn track ass//
no need for present or past, just alcohol filled glass and a blunt with grass//
my task is to tap my girls ass, might happen fast if ima die like from an OD a crack//
some people wonder why the fuck im talking like im the only whit kid thats whack//
oh, and 24 hours to trash, i'd find jay'z and make sure his career don't last//
but of all things last, i go out on my own damn watch ima die going 140 ina crash....


was this supposed to be freestyled or keystyled or whatever...i was...wasn't written...just so you know...

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Old 07-06-02, 03:23 PM   #10
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i pushed the deadline

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sunday now keep dropping
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Old 07-07-02, 10:37 PM   #11
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24 hours!

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24 hours before Ima let these suicidal thoughts take
full effect/
thinkin bout puttin a teck to my neck over a
lost bet/
I know the clock is tickin, gotta say good-bye to my
fam/
maybe the pain will be quick if i put my face up to high speed
fan/
i might as well get rid of my foes, for talkin all that mess to my face/
should roll up to they spot laced wit explosives, and blow up the whole place/
I think I'll do that, lets roll and get the C-4 out the
trunk/
They wont even notice it after they come back from the bar
drunk/
only 300 minutes left, I might as well come back when i only
five/
wait till i got 10 seconds left, then run in they spot while I'm in it, and blow it sky high/
As my 10 seconds turn to none, its like someone's throwin my lungs, cuz i cant catch my breath/
as my 24 hours ran out, the smoke turned to a bright light as i met my death/
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Old 07-07-02, 10:41 PM   #12
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^^^^^^^why did my bars post weird, and was i suppose to drop at least 20-25 bars? Cuz if was suppose my bad.
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Old 07-07-02, 10:51 PM   #13
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It's About Lunchtime Somewhat Near Noontime
Start The Day Off With A 50foot White Line
On A Glass Mirror That My Boy Just Delivered
Thats My Nigga Getting High Before I Die Go Figure
I'm Blackin Out The Windows And Planned Sumthin Quite Simple
Load Up A Couple Of Burners As The Sky Started To Drizzle
Thinking Skillful On How To Leave The Whole 17th Precint Cripple
With An Arsenal Of Only 4 Pistols
Damn The Drugs Just Hit Me, Paranoia Came Swiftly
I Pointing Guns At The Cieling, Thinkin Someones Hearing Me
Goin Insane Feelin Adrenalin Racin Through My Veins
My Boy Poured More Cocaine On The Glass To Further Pulsate My Pain
And At That Very Moment It Started To Rain
Cocked Back The Guns And Proceeded To Run
Through The Front, Shunned And K.O.ed Some Eldery Nun
Palmin The 44 With A Fuckin Lock-Jaw Mumblin Fuck The Law
Precint's Right Down The Block At Same The Rain Decided To Stop
Runnin Like A Crackhead For The Rock As My Other Gun Got Cocked
In The Background I Hear Lil Girls Screamin Faint Voices Of My Team men
And Why The Fuck Is My Fuckin Nose Bleedin?
Damn Forgot To Say Goodbye To My Seeds In
My Mother's House Wifee's Gonna Be Fightin And Grieven
Look At Me Dodgin Bullets, Bobbin And Weavin
Bang!
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