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View Poll Results: -SoLdiEr- VS Lyriclesolja | |||
lyriclesolja | 3 | 37.50% | |
-SoLdIeR- | 5 | 62.50% | |
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08-20-04, 07:36 PM | #1 | |
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lyriclesolja vs -SoLdIeR-
IP: 2553 ECFD
k, 8-16 lines,
no d/r, no recycling, spit 180 mins after check in (check in within 20 mins) AND spell my name coorect in future bitch!! Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-20-04 at 08:06 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
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08-20-04, 07:37 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 2553 ECFD
-SoLdIeR- has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 07:37 PM.
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08-20-04, 07:44 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Lyriclesolja has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 07:44 PM.
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08-20-04, 07:59 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
oh did i spell your name wrong you big fuckin baby,
"I need time to pre write my shit please some body save me", christ get over ya self for 15 mins. do us all a faver, whats ya next excuse "im drunk and cant think of any thing to use so ima get a piece of paper", ill break the bottle ya drank from over your head and bring a new meaning to alcohol abuse, you shoulda got a clue that ya gonna lose, wont stop bitchin you be naggin in my ear, so i beat you over the head wit dat bottle of beer, so every body steer clear of the queer, cause this cat will suck ya dick for a battle win, and if he cant he'll go prewritten wit a pen. |
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08-20-04, 08:39 PM | #5 | |
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IP: 2553 ECFD
This a “real” wanna be emcee, postin his verse for jokes on RV,
As I said I’ll beat this punk drunk, or even OD’d! He wants to be a SOLDIER, just like me, But it’s a shame that he lost his dictionary! (solja/soldier) You think that all from England is the queen and tea, But are U.K, (YOU OK) wit da USA getting beat by me?? You lines are weak, stop punchin above ya weight, You know I’ll erase ya, cos your were always a mistake! I shoot you in the arse cos shit is all you spit! I don’t need a chance, I got that extra four fifth (he lost ten, I lost 2) When I shoot, y’all know im reckless, shootin at ya penis…..that’ll leave ya sexless! You really shouldn’t post to me, just leave it text-less As if im gonna lose to a “rapper”, straight outta Texas!! |
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08-20-04, 08:52 PM | #6 | |
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IP: 2553 ECFD
uppin....
uppin.... uppin... im out now!! get some votes on this
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08-20-04, 10:41 PM | #8 | |
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
Voted For: Lyriclesolja
soldier no good punches and you aint really try to diss him hard you just made us jokes and talked shit flow was ok and strture was nice 3/10 lyric good punches and diises all throughout flow was good structure was off alittle punches and disses fell off in the end still you got a 4/10
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08-21-04, 04:20 AM | #10 | |
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IP: 2553 ECFD
uppin...
lets get some more votes on this!!!
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08-21-04, 06:53 AM | #11 | |
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IP: 7A16 BCAC
Voted For: -SoLdIeR-
Vote: SoLdier Lyrics: slodier took it on a higher level not jus comin wit da usual shit structue: soldier easy to rhyme and wud sound hectic wordplay: soldier had a few didnt c any in the other cats punches: neither about equal Overall: soldier took, rhyme was better so was lyrics Check my battles: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143324 Elusiv G vs. Invader_ZIM http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143098 Elusiv G vs. SLick SKillz http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143810 Elusiv G vs. lyrical metaphor Peace.
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08-23-04, 01:46 AM | #15 | |
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IP: E198 D20B
Voted For: Lyriclesolja
Lyris won this cuz.. i liked your punclines more ya know? more creative, your opener was nice also, the following bar was pretty good also, more content in your verse.. soldier, jus work on punchlines and set ups more, also try and use personals.. lyris you get my vote.. return favore right here plz.. thanx, heres the link. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144411
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