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MotiF | 3 | 37.50% | |
Word processor | 5 | 62.50% | |
Voters: 8. You may not vote on this poll |
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09-07-04, 02:40 AM | #1 | |||||
~God Of The Metaphore~
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MotiF vs Word processor
IP: 8E23 70D4
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 is ko Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-07-04 at 03:25 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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09-07-04, 02:41 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: B682 856F
MoTiF has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 02:41 AM.
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09-07-04, 02:46 AM | #3 | ||||||
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Word processor has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 02:46 AM.
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09-09-04, 08:59 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: CEE9 1CB9
alright-
goin into this battle, two things is prewritten your versre and death,test in my skillz you get killed like a curious kitten* this battle bout ta give you sum divine MOTIFvation to help you cope wit this loss everyones anticipatin' you stupid bitch, im a head of you like fuckin pre-fix bitch, if you amputated limbs you couldn't DE-FEET this** i aint no smooth lyricist i muderer you non-discretely sever ya head but like ya punches wont finish tha job completely your a fucking nothing to me, be on the health facts on bottles of aquafina*** u fuckin geomtry pop-Quiz, battlein' you is talkin' "SQUARE BIZ" like Teena**** Motif gets clapped and niggaz call him tha mummy but Motif will never learn, so ima "let him burn" and tuck his tummy (style switch) four line ryhmez and mabe then voters will show him alittle sympathy i own you TOBY, get that through you head or have a ephiphany don't ever fuckin Question me, you have no authority like slaves you OWNED in this battle , you prolly gone runaway from me***** ~his last hours (closer)~ like that 15yr old boy from flrodia you getting an unjust sentence you've just been BURNT, now please leave tha board room you fuckin' APPERNTICE... explanations- * cley-shay curiousity killed tha cat ** double meaning think about it *** aquafina has O% of every thing on tha health fact things **** teena marie had a song called square biz, tha radio was playing old school music wen i wrote dis *****lika runaway slave, a little multi The closer- in florida this 15yr old nigga got life in prison for accidently killing his 8 yr. old neighbor when wrestling wit her and instead of saying your fired i said your burnt, another double meaning |
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09-10-04, 01:48 AM | #5 | |||
The Truth
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IP: B682 856F
Just a Small child Knock him out if i Coughed..
....You Micro Bitch evan to Bill Gates ur Soft.. Drop bars and smash u like a fat kid out Bp.. Talk big for a recess kid u cant Beat-Me.. Understand u cant Stand from a 1 Man Band.. ur Body trembles if my Keys are near my Hand.. Dont come back for a fight u cant win.. Ur chance is 0 to none Like LK gettin with Men.. |
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09-10-04, 01:49 AM | #6 | |||
The Truth
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IP: B682 856F
I tried sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hard
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09-10-04, 07:39 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: D979 BFDC
Voted For: Word processor
ima have to give this one to u homeboy...some of ya punches just stood out to me...like the defeet this one..i liked that...opener was ass becuz it was hella stretched..i wasnt really feelin ya closer either... Motif...it seemed like u really didnt put forth a effort on this...opener i wasnt feelin dat...punches werent really hittin...i wasnt really feelin ya closer either...so i guess u should try more next time... i took the time out to vote return the favor on my battle in frontlines agsint Empire...links mess up when i copy them so i didnt use one thank u
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09-10-04, 08:00 PM | #8 | |||||
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IP: CEE9 1CB9
haha motif ima KO your bitch-ass, add you to my sigg
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09-10-04, 08:10 PM | #9 | |||||
~God Of The Metaphore~
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IP: CEE9 1CB9
you got yo ass sooooooo whooped trying hard or not
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09-10-04, 11:52 PM | #10 | ||||
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: Word processor
Word processor -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out.. MoTiF -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..
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09-11-04, 12:54 AM | #11 | |||
The Truth
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IP: B682 856F
Just vote for him jeez i didnt evan try i forgot bout this
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09-11-04, 11:53 AM | #12 | ||||
In ya area.
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
Voted For: MoTiF
Ok, Motif came with better punches and better structure. Word, your lines were stretched at times, and some of your lines didn't make any sense at all. But no hate, you started off pretty good, just your verse fell apart after a lil' bit. And on your finisher "you just got BURNT, so leave the boardroom you fuckin' apprentice" would've worked better had you said FIRED instead of BURNT, as that's what Donald Trump really says. But hey, maybe you saw an episode of the Apprentice that I didn't, I don't know. Your verse just could've took a little more effort... Vote - Motif Return the favor at the link in my sig, honest votes only...
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09-11-04, 06:28 PM | #13 | |||||
~God Of The Metaphore~
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IP: 9B03 61D8
you took my KO, dam you.lol
uppin |
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09-13-04, 12:14 AM | #14 | |||||
~God Of The Metaphore~
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IP: E79E 6A1E
uppin...
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09-13-04, 07:14 PM | #15 | |||||
~God Of The Metaphore~
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IP: CEE9 1CB9
uppin for sum fuckin votes
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