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No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-14-04 at 04:20 PM

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100%Gifted has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 03:51 PM.

yo im going 5 Bars... dude..... w/e you do is your problem go yo hardest

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~Those To Fuckin Weak~
Vs 8th Wonder KO
Vs -Demon- KO
Still Iller Than u
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=149276
^^some thing to get fix...
cas i messed up on the set up... alright.. admins.. delete that loss please.. thanks

Here to Ko yo sorry ass

Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 03:56 PM.

..laugh at ya u, i rule-ya-chances, my hits gunna trade off ya like trade with [pool'd-witd frances!]|..I'm sick wit it, i'll leave this ['punch line empty'] like full bladders at [school-dances!!]1
..ya up on me, nah i'll leave ya health-unsteady, cas i hit from all sides with ya see like im [stealth-ready!]|..this dude sorry, i would take him and put an end(N) to em but he did it to [himself-already!!]2 Triple( N)End
..take me i'll break this guy into twig-u-hoe, call me an artist, cas i'll make ['triple n collide into the wall'] n leave him tated to it like how his [fuckin sig-shows!!] 3 check his sig
..fuck you, i;ll take it easy on before ya shook, just scare ya like big dudes with [coat-looks!]|..i'll unload on triple, n put have more ['bullet holes in'][ him than [spiral note-books!] 4
..last bar you ain't worth it, so im rush-in-my-work, my hits are crazy they come [snuff-in-with-hurt!]|..gift'd t's up, playin golf but i'll t gettin [rock'd n tag's] more than air [brush-in-shirts!!]

i forgot to put it in my verse for explantions
his the master of punchline.s.. the punch line diss
his sig line is self explanitory
triple n.. N sounds like End ok you get me... alright peace waiting for your dropp my n***a

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~Those To Fuckin Weak~
Vs 8th Wonder KO
Vs -Demon- KO
Still Iller Than u
Battles

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=149276
^^some thing to get fix...
cas i messed up on the set up... alright.. admins.. delete that loss please.. thanks

Here to Ko yo sorry ass

Ah'ight here we go

He has a inferiority complex due to his puberty stall
Cuz he could fumble twice an still not drop his balls
He's a good samariton, makes sure da starvin' don't bicker
Da hungry ain't gotta wait cuz his verses create "snickers"
U "reside" in "shit" then wonder why all ya verses "stink"
If u dream of win, u need to do like "ya ego" an "see a shrink"
Ya lines have "loose ligaments" they must do yoga
Verses generate as much heat as monks dat forgot their toga
Your fully aware that you'll never be considered a vet
But u don't mind cuz your "gift" is to up your opponents recs


Explanations----> ok when I say he resides in shit I am refering to his "from" column.
Lines have "loose ligaments" is a meta for stretched, stretching is for loosening liagaments an muscles
Monks wear nothing more than togas so if they forget it, they are walking around naked.

gifted had better word play , punches and personals than u he took it but i cant vote so ........just checkin

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Voted For: Triple_N

ok triple n took this shit easy the other guy had tha wackest structure i have ever seen some wack punches they were to basic triple n you had a decent verse structure was good your punches were hittin harder so i vote for triple n

Voted For: Triple_N

gifted:
yours was really hard to read... do something bout ya structure... cos im sure there was flow in there but i couldnt find it.. punches were nuthin special..

triple:
good verse. Creative punches, steady flow,nice wordplay.. nice structure.. a couple lines made me laugh.. and the rest hit hard.. so s'all good with ya verse.

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Voted For: Triple_N

i gotta say... this battle one sided..

gifted: i really hate your battle style. you have that urban flow scrub structure..w tf is that ? you have no distinct bars, and its jsut one big bar.. fix that ish.. and you had no direct punches that hit at all.. you need to up ya game.. change ya style massivley, or here u wont get any votes.

triple: i thought ya verse had alot of punches i have never seen before.. most cats flipa nd spin.. but i didnt ne of that heere really.. ibig up to ya text.. you got some nice lines inthere.. snickers being of one of em..


this battle was triples to me.. his punches and battle style really out does the keystyle type stuff i saw in gifteds verse

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Voted For: Triple_N

100%Gifted

..laugh at ya u, i rule-ya-chances, my hits gunna trade off ya like trade with [pool'd-witd frances!]|..I'm sick wit it, i'll leave this ['punch line empty'] like full bladders at [school-dances!!]1
decent opener...kind corny...

..ya up on me, nah i'll leave ya health-unsteady, cas i hit from all sides with ya see like im [stealth-ready!]|..this dude sorry, i would take him and put an end(N) to em but he did it to [himself-already!!]2
forced rhyming...punch didnt hit that hard...it was decent but nothing special

..take me i'll break this guy into twig-u-hoe, call me an artist, cas i'll make ['triple n collide into the wall'] n leave him tated to it like how his [fuckin sig-shows!!] 3
forced rhyming...decent punch it was kinda cool

..fuck you, i;ll take it easy on before ya shook, just scare ya like big dudes with [coat-looks!]|..i'll unload on triple, n put have more ['bullet holes in'][ him than [spiral note-books!] 4
there arent bullet holes in spiral notebooks...i know what youre saying but it wasnt very hard hitting

..last bar you ain't worth it, so im rush-in-my-work, my hits are crazy they come [snuff-in-with-hurt!]|..gift'd t's up, playin golf but i'll t gettin [rock'd n tag's] more than air [brush-in-shirts!!]
blah...wasnt feelin it

your verse was ok against a noob but dont bring that against a vet maine...i was feelin parts of it but most of it was just blah...structure was fucked...it was ok..


Triple_N
He has a inferiority complex due to his puberty stall
Cuz he could fumble twice an still not drop his balls
basic rhyming but funny..cool idea

He's a good samariton, makes sure da starvin' don't bicker
Da hungry ain't gotta wait cuz his verses create "snickers"
blah...second line pretty good

U "reside" in "shit" then wonder why all ya verses "stink"
If u dream of win, u need to do like "ya ego" an "see a shrink"
ha...nice punch

Ya lines have "loose ligaments" they must do yoga
Verses generate as much heat as monks dat forgot their toga
cool first line once i got it...second line...ha nice try...

Your fully aware that you'll never be considered a vet
But u don't mind cuz your "gift" is to up your opponents recs
ha...pretty good


not your best shit but good enough for the win here...o.k. punches here at least they made sense without having to go back and read them..


->>v/Triple_N

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