Battle Rules:

6 - 15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-19-04 at 11:47 PM

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cordless has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 11:49 PM.

oreo has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 11:51 PM.

i shoot venom when i spit like i was a cobra
and i make rappers like you retire from the game like your name was hove,
you must be a constapated rapper cuz im waiting for you to shit on me,
but not some of that nasty shitm you aint R.kelly,
you know you lost when you accepted to battle oreo,
cuz from wat i understand you is a puddle, you have no flow,
just to let you know that i aint playing,
ill put you eyes on my vocal cords so you can see wat i am saying,
im the victor here its no debate, no lie,
cuz ive already seen your fate like i got jesus eyes,
OOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOO

rippin....bout to tell a story yo/
about this little grimmy cat - it was a bitch named oreo/
before he know - i was bustin him up - then he put me on the maury show/
cryin little bitch - i told you not to squeal/
now youre in my porno all on top shaqeal o'neal/
imma chew you up and spit you out like altoids/
you fallin off kid - looks like you playin for the cowboys/
whats mal noise - is that you gettin on my nerves/
ive read your shit - sounds like you singin to the birds/
in this life - you gotta attempt shit in your battle/
i warned you kid - dont bruise your nutsack on my sattle

Voted For: oreo

lol weal battle but oreo came otu a bit harder still weak tho needs lots and lots of elavation:
punches: no one
vocab: no one
wordplay: no one
metas: no one
multi's: no one
opener: oreo
closener: oreo
flow: oreo
vote/ oreo

Voted For: oreo

another weak battle but oreo came with 1 good punch compaired to the rest of both of your verses,puddle line was basically the only decent punch in the whole thing??....
keep elevatin,both of you...

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

Voted For: oreo

my vote is goin to oreo caz of the punchlinez an meta'z
cordless i liked the multis but that was bout it the ounches were wack the word play was ok an thats about it oreo wasnt dat much better but he was better the eyes in the vocal cords was the best verse in the battle
loose the oreo in the last bar tho....not feelin that

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Voted For: cordless

damn yo i def have to say this battle went to cordless strait up man no doubt u had a sick punches and nice struchture and u just had it all the way man good job

oreo man you lacked style and flow..your raps were all like wrtoe out and not that good of a structure work on your shit man cuz you def need help cuz you just got delt!

return the favor if you can

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Voted For: cordless

weak battle

punches- cord
personals- cord
multis- cord
metas- cord
word play- neither
flow- oreo

Cord work on punches and more personals. U barely got my vote. Work on your "multis" also.

Oreo u had one good punch that wuz it. Work on punches and personals.

Cord:
"imma chew you up and spit you out like altoids/
you fallin off kid - looks like you playin for the cowboys/" i just like altoids. u dont spit out altoids.

oreo:
"just to let you know that i aint playing,
ill put you eyes on my vocal cords so you can see wat i am saying," second line wuz good, but work on wordin.

v/ cord

word. i wasnt really goin for punches anyway. i mean i could ahve said some shit like "your styles so ill correct - the symptoms kill teretze"...but i was just cruisin. it was a weak battle...but i aint worried. its all fair in hip hop and freestyles. (if you dont understand what i just wrote then dont be discouraged....i barely understand the shit myself)

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Pardon me, but I'm fuckin sickwiddit
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shit all my battles are just quikies, if i could see wat they look like i would rip the, from head to toe
or hat to shoe

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Voted For: oreo

yo i gotta give this one up for OREO cuzz he had some nice lines ans good vocab and a good structure them lines was tight tho never seen ppl use them before ah ha do ya thing


cordless ya lines was tight to mayn dont get me wrong but oreo had better vocab and structure and thats what i think its mainly about

man willl somone close tis battle with my vinnig vote?

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