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"De"Nihil, with my style, I "de"file and "de" vour/
The only bars you're dropping are bars of soap in the shower/
I spend all my time rapping, with my talent, it's like heaven sent this/
You spend your time searching body "cavities" like a "dentist"/
Walking around flashing monopoly money, (salesperson's voice)"Umm... sir you can't spend this"/
Know this, that if your rap is lightweight I will rend it/
D.o.t., you should change your name to D.O.A.(dead on arrival)/
I already spent my day hearing your girl complain?
Apparently you're like "Uncle Ben" you're done in less than five minutes/
Your girl said she loves you but she needs more than three inches./
Man, get a "Clue", I'll meet you with a "knife" in the "study"/
You were doomed from the start, I'm "Mr. Green", you're "Mr. Body"/
I think your best bet is to learn from the KING OF GRUNGE ROCK/
Just like KURT you should give that shotgun a cock/
then point it at yourself and let that lead fly/
That way my victory won't be the last thing in your head when you die/
Instead it'll be your own ammo going through your cranium/
I'm sorry but it seems "invincible" is just the "image God made me in"/

There, I hope the punches get understood... drop quick man, I wanna see the votes on this.

Man, please don't no-show, this verse took me some time, and I don't want to waste it.

...ill drop tommarow...

omg, denhil verse waz wack ... nothing hard hittin

dot first two linez won it for him ... no lie

my vote:dot

word for 2day iz elevation

uppin' for some more votes on this.

...1-0 me... uppin above the closed..

My vote is on Denihil better punches
DOT was tight to but i think denihil came wit better punchlinez

VOTE=Denihil

DENIHIL::


De"Nihil, with my style, I "de"file and "de" vour/
The only bars you're dropping are bars of soap in the shower/
NICE OPENING, I WAS FEELING THIS SHIT..NICE PUNCH TOO



I spend all my time rapping, with my talent, it's like heaven sent this/
You spend your time searching body "cavities" like a "dentist"/
NOT BAD...COULD OF BEEN WORDED DIFFERENTLY


Walking around flashing monopoly money, (salesperson's voice)"Umm... sir you can't spend this"/
Know this, that if your rap is lightweight I will rend it/
BLAHHH AT THIS


D.o.t., you should change your name to D.O.A.(dead on arrival)/
I already spent my day hearing your girl complain?
NOT FEELING IT..


Apparently you're like "Uncle Ben" you're done in less than five minutes/
Your girl said she loves you but she needs more than three inches./
SETUP OK..BUT SECOND WAS FILLER


Man, get a "Clue", I'll meet you with a "knife" in the "study"/
You were doomed from the start, I'm "Mr. Green", you're "Mr. Body"/
SORTA WEAK


I think your best bet is to learn from the KING OF GRUNGE ROCK/
Just like KURT you should give that shotgun a cock/
NOT LIKING IT


then point it at yourself and let that lead fly/
That way my victory won't be the last thing in your head when you die/
SIMPLE BASIC SHIT


Instead it'll be your own ammo going through your cranium/
I'm sorry but it seems "invincible" is just the "image God made me in"/
NOT A GOOD ENDING..



D.O.T.::


first things first net-thug don't say u gat pumpin
second lesson go and get a name that means somethin
NOT BAD OF A OPENING..NICE PUNCH..


thirdly follow the "birdie"...
and ya "flat chick" "flashed" me... only thing from u that hurts me
forth like u "sniffin glue" i got u "horse"
got u "gallopin away" cause youre a "stud" wit no "intercourse"
SORTA MADE ME LAUGH..NOT BAD

ok time to teach a "forign language" to my adversary
first thing Den pull out ya "wack to ill dictionary"
nex sex edd... oops Den beat us to masterbation...
but he needs Geography he doesn't even know his location
OK


Den's not about-shit got him "choken" on green like "curncy's weed"
and he put "his money where his mouth is" he thinks he can beat me though
OK..NOT HARD ENOUGH THOUGH



i'm "breakin" his vocal "chords" like a "talkin piano"...
and he think's that he's the man...
he's must got a "antique watch" wit so much "time on his hands"
BLAH

he couldn't hook-up wit Maria if his name was Santana
cause she know's his "lines are counterfit" like "fat albert" with a "bandana"
NOT BAD OF AN ENDING..KIND OF EFFECTIVE PUNCH


UMM BOTH VERSES WERE COOL..DENIHIL YOU STARTED OF NICELY,BUT GOT BORING AND SHIT..AND STARTED LOSING ME..YOU NEED TO SETUP YOUR PUNCHES BETTER
DOT YOU STARTED OFF NICELY TOO BUT KEPT CONSISTANT NICE VERSE BY BOTH

VOTE DOT

My vote goes to denihil because i like his beginning but dot's verse was also tight dont get me wrong.
Vote denihil

And back and forth it goes, 2-2, uppin.