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07-07-02, 05:21 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Week 6 Heavyweight Champion (7-0) Black Flame Vs (7-4) Liquid Flame
IP: D385 5AAC
VERSES DUE BY FRIDAY, TRY AND GET THEM UP BY WEDNESDAY IF YOU CAN.
30 LINE MAX VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR 3 VOTES DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE.. MAKE THIS HOT!! |
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07-07-02, 10:31 PM | #2 | ||||||
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hmmm
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checking in
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07-13-02, 12:25 AM | #4 | |||||||
Says Avatars Suck !
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IP: 1636 8BC9
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<>George Washington Carver Invented Peanut Butter<> This kid lives in fantasy, to hiM TV is the REAL WORLD Claims to key but known to C TRL like 12 year old girls Make him fold and curl, he buckles when the heat is on His only hot SHIT is the heated STOOL he puts his feet upon I’m strong, enjoying your weakened stance even more C’mon whore, we all know what B.F. really stands for Flame the Chancellor, I kinda like that, bitch, call me sire Liquid always extinguishes Black when you fight fire with fire I’m a dryer for hire, spinning the hottest threads for a quarter got you still finding traces of my kids dead in your daughter be-headed and slaughtered, took a little off the top like barbers claim toast? Then I’ll P & NUT in your BUTTER like George Washington Carver Harvard? Nah, we all know you went to the school of hard cocks Audios? You’ll never go PLATINUM when I install credit card blocks Make him start and stop, die then breathe when I rewind the clip I’m directing this documentary entitled; Black Flame: Inside The Bitch I’ll make you LIe LOw in STITCHes, when I DIS kNEY’s & break joints only because I shake hands at introductions but B.F. shakes groins He’s got caked loins, three layers of shit, damn he’s full of it Black Flame, hollow be thy name like the end of my bullet tip He ain’t pulling CRIP, it’s a fact that he wants to say he BLUE fools Meanwhile I’m making him SHED BLOOD like gang garden tools Fangs aren’t in rules, so take them out you fucking biter, your snake rattles I bet you anything that you use at least 2 lines from your last phynam battle This bitch is cattle, getting branded and he’s running like mayors And it’s a fact that Black recycles more than ecology majors I’m just a player, making him mad when I steal this B’s honeys He got more than sonned, I dwarfed him 6 times and just left him Grumpy Feeling lumpy? Just put it in your cup cause I know your style to a TEA No pills for me, because I’m so ill that I make you reach ecstasy when I COUGH E
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07-13-02, 12:28 AM | #5 | ||||||
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hmm dunno if this counts
IP: 1636 8BC9
but here is my verse
Liquid's carrer is going no where, like broken throttles, but i'll have him running for cover like swimsuit models/ call me the devil because i got Wicked Game, i put water on lava thus rocking Liquid Flame/ your no one but still not unheard of, yell 187 cause this is murder/i like your jokes kid you think you a comic? i'll make you show your guts by ripping open you stomach/ dick riding is the only time he stays on top of his biz because liquid flame has a worst rap then unpopular kidz/ with ease I'll top ya crew, couldn't eat chicken but he know to eat a cockatoo/ i ripped you i know it makes you mad u hater, but i just because liquid likes given oral sex doesn't mean that he's a glad he ate her/ homo i will never miss a gay, you could battle the sun and still couldn't diss a ray/he could sell drugs and couldn't push his joint, but i stab him just to push my point/ so tell how does it feel to take a thrashing barred? you like dmx in movies you only acting hard/ bitch i'll trick you because your ass is mine, I'll smash his mind, so he can't think of winning, i'll make your career like your sex life, quickly ending/ things to know liquid flame lost to listen/chicken 3 times Last edited by BLACK FLAME : 07-13-02 at 12:32 AM. |
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07-13-02, 08:29 AM | #6 | ||||||
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Nice heavyweight shit here. I'm looking forward to getting in on the next round. Nice battle here.
Liquid Flame... be-headed and slaughtered, took a little off the top like barbers claim toast? Then I’ll P & NUT in your BUTTER like George Washington Carver Probably your best section. Nice wordplay. he could sell drugs and couldn't push his joint Not bad. Meanwhile I’m making him SHED BLOOD like gang garden tools Not bad. And it’s a fact that Black recycles more than ecology majors lol He got more than sonned, I dwarfed him 6 times and just left him Grumpy Not bad. Black Flame... i'll have him running for cover like swimsuit models Nice beginning. with ease I'll top ya crew, couldn't eat chicken but he know to eat a cockatoo lol Nice multi too. just because liquid likes given oral sex doesn't mean that he's a glad he ate her Niiiice. i'll make your career like your sex life, quickly ending Great ending. The Breakdown... They had just about the same amount of hard hitting rhymes, but Black Flame had better fillers, and a more complex multiple rhyme scheme throughout. Vote: Black Flame |
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07-13-02, 12:30 PM | #7 | |||||||
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vote=BF
liquid flame had to many played lines plus i think BF edged this battle out wit a better personal "top ya crew, couldn't eat chicken but he know to eat a cockatoo/" ^best line out of the battle^
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07-13-02, 05:29 PM | #8 | ||||||
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breakdown..
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LIQUID FLAME::
This kid lives in fantasy, to hiM TV is the REAL WORLD Claims to key but known to C TRL like 12 year old girls THIS WAS OK , SETUP THOUGHT WAS OK..PUNCH I FELT COULD OF CAME A LITTLE BETTER..NOT TOO EFFECTIVE HERE Make him fold and curl, he buckles when the heat is on His only hot SHIT is the heated STOOL he puts his feet upon NOT BAD HERE..OK WORDPLAY..PUNCH NOT HITTING.. I’m strong, enjoying your weakened stance even more C’mon whore, we all know what B.F. really stands for USELESS WORDING HERE..TOO ME ALL FILLER..MAYBE IF REWORDED..COULD OF CAME HARDER.. Flame the Chancellor, I kinda like that, bitch, call me sire Liquid always extinguishes Black when you fight fire with fire OK... I’m a dryer for hire, spinning the hottest threads for a quarter got you still finding traces of my kids dead in your daughter LOL..MADE ME LAUGH..NOT BAD be-headed and slaughtered, took a little off the top like barbers claim toast? Then I’ll P & NUT in your BUTTER like George Washington Carver THIS WAS COOL..SETUP THOUGHT COULD OF CAME BETTER THOUGH.. Harvard? Nah, we all know you went to the school of hard cocks Audios? You’ll never go PLATINUM when I install credit card blocks OK..PLAYED CONCEPT THOUGH Make him start and stop, die then breathe when I rewind the clip I’m directing this documentary entitled; Black Flame: Inside The Bitch OK..BUT BLAH.. I’ll make you LIe LOw in STITCHes, when I DIS kNEY’s & break joints only because I shake hands at introductions but B.F. shakes groins THIS WAS COOL..NICE PUNCH. He’s got caked loins, three layers of shit, damn he’s full of it Black Flame, hollow be thy name like the end of my bullet tip GOOD..FEELING IT He ain’t pulling CRIP, it’s a fact that he wants to say he BLUE fools Meanwhile I’m making him SHED BLOOD like gang garden tools LOL..WAS NICE..BUT NOT EFFECTIVE Fangs aren’t in rules, so take them out you fucking biter, your snake rattles I bet you anything that you use at least 2 lines from your last phynam battle OK PERSONAL..AGAIN NOT TOO EFFECTIVE.. This bitch is cattle, getting branded and he’s running like mayors And it’s a fact that Black recycles more than ecology majors NICE PUNCHLINE HERE..ECOLOGY MAJORS SHIT MADE ME LAUGH..WILL BE IN TOP PUNCHES.. I’m just a player, making him mad when I steal this B’s honeys He got more than sonned, I dwarfed him 6 times and just left him Grumpy NOT REALLY FEELING THIS..GRUMPY LINE WAS ALRIGHT NOT TO HARD THOUGH Feeling lumpy? Just put it in your cup cause I know your style to a TEA No pills for me, because I’m so ill that I make you reach ecstasy when I COUGH E NOT A GOOD ENDING ,SHOULD OF CAME HARDER HERE..PLAYED CONCEPT THE TEA LINE..BUT NICE VERSE.. BLACK FLAME:: Liquid's carrer is going no where, like broken throttles, but i'll have him running for cover like swimsuit models/ NOT BAD OF A BEGINNING..PRETTY NICE PUNCH..BUT SORTA PLAYED.. call me the devil because i got Wicked Game, i put water on lava thus rocking Liquid Flame/ OK,..SOME WONT GET THIS..BUT I FELT WAS DECENT SHIT..NOT TOO HARD BUT COO your no one but still not unheard of, yell 187 cause this is murder/BLAH i like your jokes kid you think you a comic? i'll make you show your guts by ripping open you stomach/ NICE..I LIKE THE VISIUAL SHIT.. dick riding is the only time he stays on top of his biz because liquid flame has a worst rap then unpopular kidz/ UMM NOT FEELING IT.. with ease I'll top ya crew, couldn't eat chicken but he know to eat a cockatoo/ NICE PERSONAL.. i ripped you i know it makes you mad u hater, but i just because liquid likes given oral sex doesn't mean that he's a glad he ate her/ NOT FEELING IT..I KEEP READING IT AND CANT FEEL THIS.. homo i will never miss a gay, you could battle the sun and still couldn't diss a ray/ NOOOO he could sell drugs and couldn't push his joint, but i stab him just to push my point/ SETUP WAS COOL..BUT THE SECOND LINE FOR PUNCH NOT EFFECTIVE AT ALL..FILLER NO NO so tell how does it feel to take a thrashing barred? you like dmx in movies you only acting hard/ NOT LIKEING IT.. bitch i'll trick you because your ass is mine, I'll smash his mind, so he can't think of winning, i'll make your career like your sex life, quickly ending/ OK ENDING..NOT REALLY HARD THOUGH.. UMM BOTH OF YOU FOOLS.CAME NICE..LIQUID CAME NICE FOR A KEY..I FEEL YOU SHOULD WRITE YOUR VERSES AND THINK ABOUT YOUR SHIT..BUT THIS WAS A NICE VERSE..HE HAD SOME OK WORDPLAY..AND FEW NICE PUNCHES..BLACK FLAME NOT LIKE YOUR USUAL VERSES..I FELT DIDNT COME AS HARD AS USUAL..BUT HE CAME WITH SOME NICE PERSONALS IN HIS VERSE..THAT WON IT.. VOTE BLACK FLAME.. |
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07-13-02, 11:20 PM | #9 | ||||||
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Vote liquid flame his punches were better and i was felling his style more than b f's but his flow was cool too
vote liquid flame |
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07-14-02, 01:54 AM | #10 | ||||||
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Vote-Liquid
IP: D411 5BAF
Man, I just wasn't feeling Black's verse this time around. Liquid's flow was awesome, his wordplay was good, and his punches hit pretty hard. He could of set some of them up a little better though. Black had some good multi's and personals, but it just wans't his usual caliber. Vote to Liquid for a tight verse.
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07-14-02, 03:43 AM | #11 | ||||||
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ILL ILL ILL BATTLE
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Liquid's carrer is going no
where, like broken throttles, but i'll have him running for cover like swimsuit models/ call me the devil because i got Wicked Game, i put water on lava thus rocking Liquid Flame/ -Caught mah attention better than any other line, fuckin creative as hell black... Flame the Chancellor, I kinda like that, bitch, call me sire Liquid always extinguishes Black when you fight fire with fire I’m a dryer for hire, spinning the hottest threads for a quarter got you still finding traces of my kids dead in your daughter --Ill ass lines from liquid.... Overall vurses breakdown Wordplay-Liquid Creativity- Black Punches-Black Rhyme scheme-Liquid Tha rest-Black Overall two fuckin ill ass vurses, but in end, better worded an written by Black |
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07-14-02, 10:44 AM | #12 | ||||||
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BLACK FLAME WINS
IP: D385 5AAC
BLACK FLAME- 8-0
LIQUID FLAME- 7-5 |
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