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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
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No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-25-04 at 07:16 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

riddlemethat has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-04 07:17 PM.

If you were on my level, I'd maybe look you in the face//
It's disgraceful how I leave you with a face without a taste//

Cos I slapped it out ya mouth like they do down south//
For ya sister sexin style that see ya frothin at the mouth//

The gay jokes get you nowhere, but you already there//
Try to elevate ya style before you could with me compare//

I know this is hard for you thats why you takin ya time//
How hard can it be for a retarded rapper to find a rhyme?//

Before I leave you s..s..s..stutterin in a bloody mess on the floor//
I'll lay it to you simple so as like you've never heard before//

You weak, lame an there to entertain, as the joke/jester//
The only thing you'll probably spit at me is michael jackson, child mollesterer//

poison has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-04 09:09 PM.

yo if u front i'll snap and lose it/
u'll get more beats than music/
u can read my lines but dont use it/
cuz u aint safe on the microphone homes/
u betta write ur own poems/
or get ur dome blown/
or put in a boot camp/
im the new champ/
im not the type to go out like a food stamp/
i'll erase u like pencil marks/
when my utencil sparks/
yo my rhymes ppl are jonsin/
cuz im known to spit poison/
I’ll plug u like wires/
make u quit the rap shit to hand out flyers/
step to this and get ran over with my tires/
I got more conection than a phone/
While I make g’s ur askin the bank for a loan/
So leave me alone b4 I rip u like the microphone

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Voted For: riddlemethat

flow-riddlemethat, lot better flow but was messed up near the end

punches/personals-riddlemethat, poison your verse wasnt full it was just like words being said there wasnt any descent punches being thrown here, extend your lines and make them mean somethin, sounds like a open mic, riddlemethat u have kind of the same thing going on yours didnt make much sense but it made more sense then poisons and hit harder in this case week battle though, gotta elevate more no hate jus honest vote

good luck peace

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Voted For: riddlemethat

you had way better punches blood, pioson had punches to but he needs to elevate

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Voted For: riddlemethat

EASY ONE TO JUDGE THIS........
riddleme that had beta structure, flow
better multies.more creative lines with sum ok metas.
poison most ya lines were self glorifying or simple statements no punches at all.riddle u elevated since last time i peeped your shit,keep goin jus get more creative

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