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Old 10-02-04, 08:55 PM   #1
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Revoke 'vs' Sick Wit It ™

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Old 10-03-04, 07:15 PM   #2
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Old 10-04-04, 07:56 PM   #3
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check..............
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Old 10-04-04, 09:17 PM   #4
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heas my 10 Lines...nuttin much

I throw more Spiked Punches then a High School Prom...
And the way my Mic explodes, you figure my Words contain Bombs...
Call me an 'Arkitech', so fuck with my structure yu’ll get Broken...
No Provokin, cuz like Straight-Faced Clowns, I’m not Jokin...
Like clovers with no leafs, your bad luck…and like Stingy Hoes you just Suck...
And even if you were 2 of 50 Cent you wouldn’t be worth a Buck...
Your vocab is consistent to that of my 4 Year Old Brother...
I know Faggot’s Love Blankets…that’s why Revoke stays Under-Cover...
So I take away your glory…like the Credits, I end yur Story...
And the way you “think” your iLL…hate to break it, its just Hallucinatory...
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Old 10-07-04, 10:19 PM   #5
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Please dog just give it up....... its not your turn
this battle's just like real life...your at a lost for words
I’ll have ya whole chest Aiken like Clay gave it away
If u don’t feel in intro-retrospect ur BRAIN’s in the way
No Limit Record's...LMAO please kid why waste their time
when nothing you write could compare with a passage of mine
He’ll be hurting for nights, while I succeed and proceed to come
While pressing his lines....... like I’m reading his palms
Your styles faded take this loss as a sign as an omen
because its sad your rhymes dont exsist..only in New Times Roman

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Old 10-08-04, 11:22 AM   #6
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uppin for some vote damn it...
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Old 10-08-04, 12:07 PM   #7
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easy battle...................

Revoke won this battle easy...........
overall better flow and structure...............
his punches and personals were there and hitting harder...................
better wordplay, more complex rhymin.........................
not much for creativity in the verses, but revoke was a little better............

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Old 10-09-04, 09:43 PM   #8
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uppin for some votes.......
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Old 10-10-04, 12:34 PM   #9
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easy battle to...
Revoke came dopes as hell
i wanna do a breakdown...

I throw more Spiked Punches then a High School Prom...
And the way my Mic explodes, you figure my Words contain Bombs...
i wasnt feeling it ok opener
Call me an 'Arkitech', so fuck with my structure yu’ll get Broken...
No Provokin, cuz like Straight-Faced Clowns, I’m not Jokin...
nah.. wasnt feeling it
Like clovers with no leafs, your bad luck…and like Stingy Hoes you just Suck...
And even if you were 2 of 50 Cent you wouldn’t be worth a Buck...
played concept.. flow was bad
Your vocab is consistent to that of my 4 Year Old Brother...
I know Faggot’s Love Blankets…that’s why Revoke stays Under-Cover...
that was iight
So I take away your glory…like the Credits, I end yur Story...
And the way you “think” your iLL…hate to break it, its just Hallucinatory...
ok closer


Revokes
Please dog just give it up....... its not your turn
this battle's just like real life...your at a lost for words
very god opener strong
I’ll have ya whole chest Aiken like Clay gave it away
If u don’t feel in intro-retrospect ur BRAIN’s in the way
it was iight... ok
No Limit Record's...LMAO please kid why waste their time
when nothing you write could compare with a passage of mine
NIce but i wasnt feeling the second
He’ll be hurting for nights, while I succeed and proceed to come
While pressing his lines....... like I’m reading his palms
Nice punch real funny
Your styles faded take this loss as a sign as an omen
because its sad your rhymes dont exsist..only in New Times Roman
This was a dope closer.. made me laugh..



yea thats why i vote Revoke..
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Old 10-10-04, 06:08 PM   #10
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V/. Revoke

Seriously why break it down i mean Sik Wit It that was garbage.
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Old 10-10-04, 07:23 PM   #11
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Revoke wins.
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