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lyric | 3 | 37.50% | |
AutoMATIK™ | 5 | 62.50% | |
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10-05-04, 01:10 PM | #1 | |
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lyric vs AutoMATIK™
IP: 23CC 11AC
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10-05-04, 01:11 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 7753 EEA0
lyric has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-04 01:11 PM.
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10-05-04, 01:11 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 23CC 11AC
AutoMATIK™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-04 01:11 PM.
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10-05-04, 01:23 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 23CC 11AC
I was declined from IJL … Now Ya crew hopeless
My Spits sick to leave ya shit wet like pump action on super soakers Now who hard as this ? Yo whole squad is bitch When im threw, ya crew gonna have to view u threw a glass like aquatic fish Heres a tip kid … battling me in a key, is the worst way to lose Face it … you and ya niggas play sick like me on the first day of school Im punkin this dude wit verbs that’ll leave his stomach in two You stuck-and-its-true you know imma win. So theres nuttin to lose You trying to live? How When I eat Punches and until my flow Inflict Hi’ Gunna Have u Grabbin Ya Throat And Gasping For Breath' Like Pneumonia Symptoms good luck man |
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10-05-04, 01:23 PM | #5 | |
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: 7753 EEA0
Your shits all played and old school, It's sad this loser stuck wit this fate
Cause sending yourself valentines, is the last time you had an up-date You payed your ghostwriter too much, now you in debt but fuck it How you gonna throw a verse at me, when you can't even budget Comin at me on AIM, desperately begging me to get in my crew When-you-write-like "this and" still say that your "not-a-newb" ^Who writes like that anymore, dawg quit using worthless rhymes Faggot jacked off on a newspaper, just to get with the Times Jus a fuckin bitch, you aint improving, whackness hasn't passed Cause this dumbass hit the learning curve, and his computer crashed |
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10-05-04, 01:44 PM | #6 | |
SEE YA AT THE TOP
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IP: B375 960E
Voted For: lyric
vote for lyric, had a better flow and both had good structure, opener goes to lyric closer goes tolyric, matik you need to elaate, lyric even said you spit like a newb, just being honest. and the punches goes to lyric only cuz they were funny Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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10-05-04, 02:13 PM | #7 | |
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
Voted For: lyric
Emcee:AutoMATIK Verse: I was declined from IJL … Now Ya crew hopeless My Spits sick to leave ya shit wet like pump action on super soakers Now who hard as this ? Yo whole squad is bitch When im threw, ya crew gonna have to view u threw a glass like aquatic fish Heres a tip kid … battling me in a key, is the worst way to lose Face it … you and ya niggas play sick like me on the first day of school Im punkin this dude wit verbs that’ll leave his stomach in two You stuck-and-its-true you know imma win. So theres nuttin to lose You trying to live? How When I eat Punches and until my flow Inflict Hi’ Gunna Have u Grabbin Ya Throat And Gasping For Breath' Like Pneumonia Symptoms Comments:um...nothin much to say but elevate and hit harder wit ya punches...aiight metas but not really all that ya know.. Marks: Wordplay - 4/10 Metas - 5/10 Vocabulary - 6/10 Structure - 5/10 Punches - 6/10 Opener - 5/10 Closer – 6/10 Personals – 4/10 Enjoyment – 3/10 Creativity - 4/10 Overall - 48/100 ----------48% Emcee:lyric Verse: Your shits all played and old school, It's sad this loser stuck wit this fate Cause sending yourself valentines, is the last time you had an up-date You payed your ghostwriter too much, now you in debt but fuck it How you gonna throw a verse at me, when you can't even budget Comin at me on AIM, desperately begging me to get in my crew When-you-write-like "this and" still say that your "not-a-newb" ^Who writes like that anymore, dawg quit using worthless rhymes Faggot jacked off on a newspaper, just to get with the Times Jus a fuckin bitch, you aint improving, whackness hasn't passed Cause this dumbass hit the learning curve, and his computer crashed Comments:well i can safely say that you came harder wit metas and punches...thats what winz the game... Marks: Wordplay - 5/10 Metas - 7/10 Vocabulary - 6/10 Structure - 7/10 Punches - 6/10 Opener - 6/10 Closer – 6/10 Personals – 7/10 Enjoyment – 6/10 Creativity - 6/10 Overall - 62/100 ----------62% |
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10-05-04, 02:13 PM | #8 | |
Phlogiston
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
return the favor in my sig.....
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10-05-04, 02:21 PM | #9 | |
I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP: D2B8 EE3F
Voted For: AutoMATIK™
matik murked this nigga.....lyric had decent personals an punches an some was kinda lame...like jackin off of a newspaper to get with the times.....matik had a tru battle verse an ripped this man from kingdom come Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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10-05-04, 02:35 PM | #10 | |
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IP: D5FE 7245
Voted For: AutoMATIK™
punches/personals-automatik, for a fast freestyle in 15 min i think automatik jus had harder hittin punches and more that made sense, lyric attempted at some and shit but i jus felt they didnt hit as hard as automatiks creativity and vocab-i think auto got both of these, a higher vocab level was put in here then lyrics verse and it was more creative put for a fast verse no hate on nobody honest vote good luck peace Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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10-05-04, 02:52 PM | #11 | |
To The Ground...
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IP: A713 E6BC
Voted For: AutoMATIK™
"Your shits all played and old school, It's sad this loser stuck wit this fate Cause sending yourself valentines, is the last time you had an up-date You payed your ghostwriter too much, now you in debt but fuck it How you gonna throw a verse at me, when you can't even budget" ^the beginning was the best part of your verse Lyric so good job with that, good job to the both of you but i really think that Lyric took this one due to his better punches and his flow was just a lot more on target than the other dudes, good job to the both of you but i think that Lyric just took this battle EASILY... v/ Lyric. Switched
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10-05-04, 02:53 PM | #12 | |
To The Ground...
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^OH OH OH.. i didnt know i had to post it in a certain box... crap, i am new to this whole battle hack ish.. so sorry, can a mod make my vote go to Lyric?
thank you.
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10-05-04, 03:09 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 1AF0 6ADD
Voted For: AutoMATIK™
aight this was a pretty tight battle, both people came hard here and i respect that.. this ones gotta go to automatik tho with better flow, punches/personals and structure... both had good wordplay and all that but i was really feelin autos verse.. i especialy liked the opener on that shit auto.... good stuff good battle from both of yall but this one goes to automatik with better punches personals structure and flow... great battle, no hate to lyric but this one goes to automatik VOTE- AUTOMATIK
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10-05-04, 07:49 PM | #14 |
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IP: ED5A 904C
Voted For: AutoMATIK™
lyric: decent verse............. your downs were obviously your played lines...... it flowed smoothly and was never choppy.......... punches were decent some effective................ originality...some were some weren't................. overall: 6/10 auto: slightly above average verse flow got choppy sometimes in my opinion......... punches were effective and half-decent.......... originality was better................................... overall: 7/10
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10-06-04, 02:31 PM | #15 | |
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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honest votes please .............
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