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Old 10-02-04, 08:37 PM   #1
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Schema 'vs' Nostradamus

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Old 10-02-04, 10:22 PM   #2
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check...should be good...

edit: i retract my "should be good"...


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Old 10-03-04, 12:02 AM   #3
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Check...Should be......A battle...

Edit: I punch Schema in the nose.

Edit Again.. When the hell are you gonna drop.. I wanna get this up for votes.
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Old 10-08-04, 06:40 AM   #4
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Ok, heres my wackness.. I didnt even try. By the looks of it, Schemas not even gonna drop anyway.. ..

Way to kick off Writers Block, hope Schema actually drops man..
Cuz theres those that take action and those that remain a 'plan'.. (scheme)
Seems he dont like being 'right', what a predicament when he spit..
& 'Left' be wantin to punch his nose, like the peeps in his sig..
Holy Shit, ring the fab 5.. Seriously, how gay can one kid be..?
Hopfully grabbin nuts will put a stop, to ya pitiful family tree..
Son please.. You talk so much shit, ya mouth resembles a rectum..
Previous battles I checked em, So wack, even his avatar left him..
Son Ill decapitate ya rhymes n keep a'head' of last battle's bullshit..
Left me sadistic, Schema......................................
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Old 10-09-04, 07:06 PM   #5
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you musta figured you could go hard but youll just get tossed so why try...
changed your name to nostradamus...guess you saw this loss in ya mind's eye...
go back to topicals...rap about struggle peace and love...
in text you dont fit...youre just like oj simpson's bloody glove...
judging by your shit youre about as "pumped up" as an empty tire...
killing a dude from my own crew...call my verse friendly "fire"...
thought i was gonna feed...i dont know how dogg...please explain to me...
my mind cant process wack shit...your verse looks blank to me...
so go make an open mic about how a loss left you with a dry heart...
cause you just cant see my text like the bottom line of a eye chart...
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Old 10-10-04, 10:31 AM   #6
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ummm.. better verse is sshema....
Smeha: you prolly took very loong to make that.... im guessing you prewrote.. but i ono.. you had very strong punches and nice personals... also ya strucutre was very g ood and ya flow good.. punches were not as gooda at some places..........but you did reall good.....

NOst : you really didnt try at alll but you had some strong punches and nice personals too streched but ya structre was not that good and it flow iiight......looks like ya keyes ya shit..

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Old 10-10-04, 10:33 AM   #7
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lmao...i get even hours on the computer my brother gets odd hours...we got home at 5:30...my brother got on until 6...then when i was about to write my stepdad got on until 6:40...so i wrote that in about 25 minutes...which is why the flow is all choppy and shit...i probably took longer than him but it wasnt like i wrote a letter a day or some shit...

anyways 1-0 me...
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Old 10-10-04, 12:13 PM   #8
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Vote- Nostradamus
Alright.
First off, Schema. You came way stretched to begin with.
Sizing down does not increase flow. Sorry.
The metiphores you threw were vaugly played.
For instance. OJ's glove has been flipped a million ways.
You had personals' but obviouse ones.
Yes, You CAN over research a person.
Latin Kitten proved that. And, also....what happened to punches?

As for Nos.
You had a lil bit on longevity in each line.
But I'll be honest, I like you ryhme scheme alot better.
It FLOWED.
Thats important, Also you had sum funny and hard personals.
Including this one....
Best Bar of The Battle:
Son please.. You talk so much shit, ya mouth resembles a rectum..
Previous battles I checked em, So wack, even his avatar left him..


You see....
He's smart, He used a personal first. And made it the second line.
And then created a great wordplay/metiphoricla set-up.
Thats what wins battles.

People Dont Notice this....
THEY SHOULD. -1
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Old 10-10-04, 07:15 PM   #9
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Wow. I got a vote. Thanks bro.

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Old 10-10-04, 07:32 PM   #10
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