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Old 10-10-04, 11:43 PM   #1
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Shi-1 vs. Manipulation

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Rules:
10-12 Lines Text
20-30 Lines Topical
*must specify battle type at check in
*pm your opponent to decide

Time Limits:
verse due by the 13th
good luck.

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Old 10-11-04, 03:25 AM   #2
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bring it.

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...girl we can get this crackin as soon as u check in. Why wait till Wed.? Today is the holiday so i got time if u got time.
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word, shes right. once your opponent checks in too, you can drop your verse when ever, as long as its in by wednsday. but if ya opponent waits till wednsday she has to drop one hour after her check. - the verb

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Old 10-13-04, 02:54 PM   #3
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shit...sorry bout this, only jus remembered bout it......
i`ll jus key sumthin quik.....

chkin in....
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Old 10-13-04, 03:17 PM   #4
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this lazy bitch bin here as long as me...but only 15 posts?
slower to post your weak spits..than a 56k modem host..
burned u like toast,coz i drop cold...and still got u chared..
u a piece of cake,but your presence not worth a birthday card!
fuck it im stuck,bored, so ima keystyle these next few lines..
you the only gurl on rv, that drops "bars", n it really is a chrime!..
missed off the T..shi-1,such a herb to be clowning..is no fun
i aint too much older than you...but if u were a boy,ud be SON!
i was gon say carry on your tradition, but fuck it post a verse..
coz its not like your rep on rv..could actually get any worse!


fuck it.im done,ha..really cudnt be arsed..lol...
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Old 10-13-04, 05:49 PM   #5
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taking out Manip

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I’ll silence this bitch’s audible babble... just know Shi leaves all obstacles tackled.
U suck at keys, and have no HOPE even if this was a topical battle/
Get your opticals rattled. My punches corruptin em,-that’s why u keep duckin them
We know how u got that name… When ya pops 1st manipulated your moms into fuckin him!/
In 10 lines I’m destructin’ fems! Yea girl my hospital needs patients
It’s Vietnam all over again,….. the way I’m slaughtering Free Agents (Asians)
I’ve heard about ur rep here, but frankly I’m anti-veteran
Manips over matched! Plus in this battle she’s ‘under armed’ like antiperspirants/
Drain bitches of estrogen. Don’t trip on the voters stipulations
No more shadiness in this tourney. Since I just took out Manipulation!



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Old 10-13-04, 06:18 PM   #6
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v/manip

both verses were whack as fuck to me but manip had one line that showed a bit of cleverness(presence+card) the other chick was trying to hard to be creative which never really works.

iono if i can vote but there it is

yes ya can vote, but im asking nicely that you stay the fuck out of my fourms.

- the verb . LOL
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Old 10-13-04, 07:18 PM   #7
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LMAO ^^^ ok..sure guy your vote can count!
*boy I love this*

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Old 10-13-04, 10:46 PM   #8
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o god, VA is so fine. i promise never to vote in your forums ever again.


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- the verb. lol
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Old 10-13-04, 11:26 PM   #9
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well, this was a dope text battle,,,great job both.....1
but heres my verdict......
manipulation~you had nice flow to your verse and you did come off with some good punches, and some decent personals, i think you have come stronger in the past...which i really thought you were gonna take this..but
Shi-1~comes along, and i didnt know she was here, and she drops a dope verse, gurl, your punches were great, and you had some funny ass lines in there, like your openeing bar, using fems names, and you used a good punch and personal on manipulations name, "underarmed like anitperspirant" another good line, and your closer gave your verse the extra kick,,,,,nice job on this.....i'm glad to see new fems here....vote to shi-1,...... manipulation, nice job,,,,both of you, well done fems.......1
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Old 10-14-04, 01:27 AM   #10
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thankx for the WELL EXPLAINED errr vote(s) thus far lol. ^^uppin
Shi1=1
Manip=1

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Old 10-14-04, 03:06 AM   #11
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LMAO@mani getting the first vote..not a suprise..

any who lemme get down to the bottom of what the outcome should be

Shi-1 took this No DOubt about it ..LINE AFTER LINE was hard hitting and she flowed fuckin nice with hers..Her wordplay was on point personals was on point ..Feeling that free agent line....and the manipulation line..she did her thing man

Manip was too fucking simple with the punches the flow was mad simple...and her punches werent really punches they were more like statements to me, i dont really have much nice to say about manip's lines ..she shoulda came harder in this battle...

Shi deserves the vote.
 
Old 10-15-04, 12:13 AM   #12
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update: Shi-1 (2-1)
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Old 10-15-04, 12:39 AM   #13
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manipulation vs. shi-1 was much anticipated, both seemed to me like they would have much potential on reaching the final round, when i first opened this tourney, but one would obviously not make it past this round, since ya both were paired together, not bad at all. manipulation had nice personals, ya punches hit for the most part, i respected ya meta efforts but ya multis lacked and so did ya wordplay, your main flaw was that a few senteces were a bit questionable, not bad over all though. on the other side we have shi-1, you had a great verse, much metas and multis shined through, which was a plus, ya had nice vocab and wordplay, but ya structure was weak, which is common. i loved the ending mini line, the two words at the end of the verse, that also completed a multi of the closure, your verse was over all good. which receives this vote.

vote: shi-1

even though i havnt seen much from you, looking foward to seeing more.

(3-1)

Shi-1 wins, due to 3 consecutive counted votes.

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