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10-10-04, 12:30 AM
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schema vs Nostradamus
IP: C38B B51C
Topic: Demise of the Human Race
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10-10-04, 12:30 AM
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IP: C38B B51C
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10-10-04, 12:31 AM
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
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10-12-04, 11:25 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Topic: "Demise of the Human Race" (A News reader on the television.) "We have just recieved a report.. There is a ball of rock hurtling towards the planet that is twice the size of Manhatten.. We do not yet know how far away the asteroid is, however it has been confirmed that it is on a direct collision coarse with the planet Earth......." "At First Glimpse" My heart stops with the world, as we hear the breaking news.. A mind blank creates an aura, silence capsulates my moods.. The countdown to judgement day, a psychological nightmare.. My hair stands on its end, as my concience becomes aware.. Of the trauma of this disaster, started off as a normal day.. Now my dreams for the future, within a blink drifted away.. What happens now? Whos to blame? How longs left on the clock?.. Living life now relates to trying to find blood inside a rock.. Transmission cuts, flash back to sitcoms like nothings wrong.. I walk outside, look to the sky, then collapse upon my lawn.. (A specilist's report.) "It has been confirmed that this rock, upon impact, will strike with the force of over 50 nuclear warheads. It is believed it will hit in a location in the Antarctic region, instantly melting the polar ice caps and sending 100 foot Tidal waves in every direction....." "Chaos Reigns" As anticipated, the world reached new~heights~of catastrophe.. Reports of mass suicide, rape, and plenty religious blasphemy.. Hearing gunshots and screams inside homes of peaceful families.. Seeing blood drop in dreams, while stressful anxiety captures me.. This is the world without hope, without laws & social boundrys.. Extreme ways of living, & un-forgiving truths told profoundly.. Our cirtain death drove us crazy, all morals suddenly lost.. We were living on the edge, lines of sanity~already crossed.. Most buildings were randsacked, in days, many militants arrose.. With a new moon formed in the sky, symbol of death.. I suppose.. (A presidents speech to a crowd of thousands) "We as a people, are at a time of great peril. It is true, that a lot of us will not survive to see the day after tomorrow. So I advise you to stay with your families, as I will be. This will be the last transmission made. Goodbye friends, and may peace be with you." "The Dawn Of Judgement Day" The morning was silent, in the aftermath of a violent night.. Many had died, and those who survived confided in suicide.. The world was still, a cold tranquil feeling beneath my feet.. Wandering the streets, full of crashed cars and the deceased.. A backing track, melodic rumble of earth being knocked around.. Gaining ground, the feeling of anticipation becomes profound.. Im scared.. I cant cope.. My stomach fluids inside my throat.. Hearing a crash, taking cover praying for any form of hope.. But as I peer around the corner, I throw up inside the room.. A great tremendous wall of water, spelling my cirtain doom.. "Final Thoughts" Was the world amazing anyway? So many problems existed daily.. Famine in third world countries, & so much gang violence latly.. Extremist's suicide bombing, the public controled like puppets.. Long hospital waiting lists, extortionists playing governments.. What happened to a world, where we respected our fellow men.. It seems weve become acustomed, to blindly following every trend.. Not to mention money & power, destroying and corrupting lives.. Not realising other people, have their own thoughts & vital signs.. So as my life drifts away, drowning & bones crushed from pressure.. I ponder the worlds problems, wishing to drift off in eternal pleasure.. Death is nothing to us, since when we are, death has not come, and when death has come, we are not. Epicurus (341 BC - 270 BC), from Diogenes Laertius, Lives of Eminent Philosophers. |
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10-13-04, 12:28 AM
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howdy
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IP: C38B B51C
The Plan
It all started with a nation's embarassment...Oaths taken in arabic... Politician's hands shaken with terrorists... World divided by too many lies...many energized... Plenty died on both sides...it's the end of friendly skies... Underhanded plans exchanged...brains with a slant of hate... Lay in wait like man-o-rays...plannin for gamma rays... Sleeper cells wait for orders...made it through the borders... Cant see trees for forest...its allah's plan for us... It finally arrived...the shipment's late...two nukes in a crate... Sittin on the inerstate...aint shit to to but sit and wait... This is hate...a sinner's fate...get a taste... They got a message for the kids today... The Cause TERRORISTS BLEW A TRUCK UP...shit is fucked up... A nuke blew new york into chunks of bloody rubble... MOTHERS CLUTCH THEIR BABIES...get incinerated... Shit is crazy...sin pervaded...give the win to satan... Buildings leveled...piles of bodies... Thirty mile wide circle completely disembodied... Revenge is imm-i-nent..Congress has BEEN wid' it... Unlimited power to the pres-i-dent... ICBM's in the air...saudi arabia gone... Iran, Iraq, Kuwait...all they people is gone... WE DOIN THE SAME SHIT...we're the terrorists... Logic is lost...nobodys makin that comparison... We got hit again and that was it... Everything we got is in the air again... Millions is dead...the world's imperial dread... We destroyin everything like bacterial spread... The Effect Earth is scorched...cities is gone... You wanna survive you better really be strong... Not everyone's gone...there's a few cats left... Matter of time till radiation gives you last breath... The human race is dying...And it's scary in the end... All this over who had the better imaginary friend... |
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10-13-04, 07:30 AM
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IP: CCAE A7E8
Voted For: Nostradamus
Now to be honest i don't particually enjoy topicals (I'm jus doin this to up my battle credits)...but my vote will be honest Nostradamous Topic: "Demise of the Human Race" (A News reader on the television.) "We have just recieved a report.. There is a ball of rock hurtling towards the planet that is twice the size of Manhatten.. We do not yet know how far away the asteroid is, however it has been confirmed that it is on a direct collision coarse with the planet Earth......." "At First Glimpse" My heart stops with the world, as we hear the breaking news.. A mind blank creates an aura, silence capsulates my moods.. The countdown to judgement day, a psychological nightmare.. My hair stands on its end, as my concience becomes aware.. Of the trauma of this disaster, started off as a normal day.. Now my dreams for the future, within a blink drifted away.. What happens now? Whos to blame? How longs left on the clock?.. Living life now relates to trying to find blood inside a rock.. Transmission cuts, flash back to sitcoms like nothings wrong.. I walk outside, look to the sky, then collapse upon my lawn.. (A specilist's report.) "It has been confirmed that this rock, upon impact, will strike with the force of over 50 nuclear warheads. It is believed it will hit in a location in the Antarctic region, instantly melting the polar ice caps and sending 100 foot Tidal waves in every direction....." "Chaos Reigns" As anticipated, the world reached new~heights~of catastrophe.. Reports of mass suicide, rape, and plenty religious blasphemy.. Hearing gunshots and screams inside homes of peaceful families.. Seeing blood drop in dreams, while stressful anxiety captures me.. This is the world without hope, without laws & social boundrys.. Extreme ways of living, & un-forgiving truths told profoundly.. Our cirtain death drove us crazy, all morals suddenly lost.. We were living on the edge, lines of sanity~already crossed.. Most buildings were randsacked, in days, many militants arrose.. With a new moon formed in the sky, symbol of death.. I suppose.. (A presidents speech to a crowd of thousands) "We as a people, are at a time of great peril. It is true, that a lot of us will not survive to see the day after tomorrow. So I advise you to stay with your families, as I will be. This will be the last transmission made. Goodbye friends, and may peace be with you." "The Dawn Of Judgement Day" The morning was silent, in the aftermath of a violent night.. Many had died, and those who survived confided in suicide.. The world was still, a cold tranquil feeling beneath my feet.. Wandering the streets, full of crashed cars and the deceased.. A backing track, melodic rumble of earth being knocked around.. Gaining ground, the feeling of anticipation becomes profound.. Im scared.. I cant cope.. My stomach fluids inside my throat.. Hearing a crash, taking cover praying for any form of hope.. But as I peer around the corner, I throw up inside the room.. A great tremendous wall of water, spelling my cirtain doom.. "Final Thoughts" Was the world amazing anyway? So many problems existed daily.. Famine in third world countries, & so much gang violence latly.. Extremist's suicide bombing, the public controled like puppets.. Long hospital waiting lists, extortionists playing governments.. What happened to a world, where we respected our fellow men.. It seems weve become acustomed, to blindly following every trend.. Not to mention money & power, destroying and corrupting lives.. Not realising other people, have their own thoughts & vital signs.. So as my life drifts away, drowning & bones crushed from pressure.. I ponder the worlds problems, wishing to drift off in eternal pleasure.. Death is nothing to us, since when we are, death has not come, and when death has come, we are not. Epicurus (341 BC - 270 BC), from Diogenes Laertius, Lives of Eminent Philosophers. /\ WOW is all i can say to this verse dayum how i never enjoyed topicals but this was amazing...the storyline gripped me it's like a movie script the way it was layed out real creative and the quote at the end authenic? yes it is i checked...that there was good lookin...structure wordplay rhyming flow all consistent i'd be surprised if he could top this in his next battle...most definitely be peeping Schema The Plan It all started with a nation's embarassment...Oaths taken in arabic... Politician's hands shaken with terrorists... World divided by too many lies...many energized... Plenty died on both sides...it's the end of friendly skies... Underhanded plans exchanged...brains with a slant of hate... Lay in wait like man-o-rays...plannin for gamma rays... Sleeper cells wait for orders...made it through the borders... Cant see trees for forest...its allah's plan for us... It finally arrived...the shipment's late...two nukes in a crate... Sittin on the inerstate...aint shit to to but sit and wait... This is hate...a sinner's fate...get a taste... They got a message for the kids today... The Cause TERRORISTS BLEW A TRUCK UP...shit is fucked up... A nuke blew new york into chunks of bloody rubble... MOTHERS CLUTCH THEIR BABIES...get incinerated... Shit is crazy...sin pervaded...give the win to satan... Buildings leveled...piles of bodies... Thirty mile wide circle completely disembodied... Revenge is imm-i-nent..Congress has BEEN wid' it... Unlimited power to the pres-i-dent... ICBM's in the air...saudi arabia gone... Iran, Iraq, Kuwait...all they people is gone... WE DOIN THE SAME SHIT...we're the terrorists... Logic is lost...nobodys makin that comparison... We got hit again and that was it... Everything we got is in the air again... Millions is dead...the world's imperial dread... We destroyin everything like bacterial spread... The Effect Earth is scorched...cities is gone... You wanna survive you better really be strong... Not everyone's gone...there's a few cats left... Matter of time till radiation gives you last breath... The human race is dying...And it's scary in the end... All this over who had the better imaginary friend... a nice verse really is all i can say...this isn't a winning verse in my opinion it was jus what all the other topicals are about the layout could've been better the rhyming was aight nice wordplay the story was good but i feel u were beat today a good verse but ya was beaten...sry theres my sig \/ return favours honestly
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10-13-04, 01:47 PM
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IP: E40B 9458
Voted For: Nostradamus
pretty good battle, but i honestly didn't feel it was close...Nostra had MADD imagery, every detail screamed at me, it was like i was there...if i had a script i could of made a movie off that....but besides imagery...this section As anticipated, the world reached new~heights~of catastrophe.. Reports of mass suicide, rape, and plenty religious blasphemy.. Hearing gunshots and screams inside homes of peaceful families.. Seeing blood drop in dreams, while stressful anxiety captures me.. This is the world without hope, without laws & social boundrys.. Extreme ways of living, & un-forgiving truths told profoundly.. Our cirtain death drove us crazy, all morals suddenly lost.. We were living on the edge, lines of sanity~already crossed.. Most buildings were randsacked, in days, many militants arrose.. With a new moon formed in the sky, symbol of death.. I suppose.. that seperated the two verses in a very large way, thats showing the break of humanity, within the end of humanity...it's two birds with one stone...the physical and mental rapture..that was absolutely genious... on the other hand...schema...you had a really strong verse politically...you had some really good and strong points i agreed with...and it made your verse really enjoyable...although the imagery wasn't there...and i didn't see anything that seperated you from nostra...good verse though stay up playa...nothin but respect for you
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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10-13-04, 06:25 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Uppin for more votes to finish this................
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10-13-04, 06:33 PM
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howdy
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IP: C38B B51C
^^werd............................................
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 "Frank White the menacin, chron chron's the medicine.... I got the lettuce and... ...you turn green like cucumber skin Got the new hummer in the summer when I was a new comer then... drugs and mac-10's...hugs from fake friends..." Quote:
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10-13-04, 08:07 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 8FB6 AEBF
Hey, our battle link isnt in your sig. *feels left out*
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10-13-04, 08:13 PM
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IP: C38B B51C
yeah it is...vs. herb...hah jp i didnt have room until that battle closed...you get your spot now buddy...
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"Frank White the menacin, chron chron's the medicine.... I got the lettuce and... ...you turn green like cucumber skin Got the new hummer in the summer when I was a new comer then... drugs and mac-10's...hugs from fake friends..." Quote:
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10-13-04, 08:26 PM
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IP: ED5A 904C
damn you................i can't vote............ 
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10-13-04, 08:48 PM
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IP: 5671 DBDD
Voted For: Nostradamus
ok aint yall both in a.i?anyways poet had a more complex drop and wayy better ender schema had a good ass drop dope as fuck but his ender sucked schema also had a better flow and good ass inamgery on both parts but i felt poets story more it was more vivid and had better vocab and length which made it more enjoyable this is the 1st topical i read by either and its pretty good dope shit but poet wins with a better more complex description of the story cuz i feel the world would fall in to a time of lawless evil if man knew his end was coming vote poet
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10-13-04, 10:10 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 8FB6 AEBF
Well if ya thought my shit didnt flow. Then you obviously cant pick up on assonance.
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10-14-04, 08:26 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Upping again. Keep voting, dont sleep on this shit kids.
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