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socrates 5 83.33%
saaran 1 16.67%
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Old 10-20-04, 09:14 PM   #1
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saaran vs socrates

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Old 10-20-04, 09:18 PM   #2
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Socrates has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 09:18 PM.
 
Old 10-20-04, 09:19 PM   #3
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saaran has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 09:19 PM.
 
Old 10-20-04, 09:35 PM   #4
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I hate this fuckin pussy, cuz damn hes not at my level
So imma torch his shit like he sat on a toilet for the devil
Saaran imma use you name against you, wrap you ho
Cuz fuck im on a mission, and youre still in a pueblo
Ill hit you below the belt, so when i aimed way down south
I swung and hit lips, and im NOT saying i hit you in the mouth
Fuck hes a whack everything. although he tries to fake it
Rhymes his softer than a pillow,so he should take his verse and blanket
Im smashing you head in sliding glass doors, fuckin nympho
So ill show you to the door for your loss, and take the win-dow

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Old 10-20-04, 09:39 PM   #5
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Claim ya runnin rv in text witcha vet status
you forget my text is rabid...
love to see how ass ya audio is... thats if you had it
I'ma whiteboi squeaky voice, i know it, cuz y'all seen this
Quit fuckin wit rv stick to penis...
diss how i'm white when ya name yaself afta a caucasion genius
no terms for played words, slowly killed ya cuz ya heard my sins
not bad 8 losses...had that by the time i had thirty wins
Glad you quit battlin, your verse more from a corny guy
Shit yo ass came back to rv to up your porn supply
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Old 10-20-04, 09:48 PM   #6
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hmm hard to vote i would give it to saaran he had nice punches but iunno...
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Old 10-20-04, 09:48 PM   #7
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LyrikalMonstuh [6:43 PM]: how bout this...
LyrikalMonstuh [6:44 PM]: if YOU win, ill change my user title to "saarans bitch" for one month
LyrikalMonstuh [6:44 PM]: If I win then you put "Socrates bitch" in your user title for one month
LyrikalMonstuh [6:44 PM]: deal?
accomplishmentdv [6:44 PM]: no cuz i aint bout that i wanted to battle you to see if you could back up how good you are
LyrikalMonstuh [6:44 PM]: hahahaha
accomplishmentdv [6:44 PM]: but if you win i'll do it
accomplishmentdv [6:44 PM]: no problem
LyrikalMonstuh [6:44 PM]: iight
accomplishmentdv [6:44 PM]: but you aint gotta do it if i win

just making sure its official and you dont deny it
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Old 10-20-04, 09:49 PM   #8
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yeah its notta big deal to me... i will do it... Pride is notta problem
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Old 10-21-04, 11:52 AM   #9
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uppin your dumb fukkas better vote dammit...........
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Old 10-21-04, 05:15 PM   #10
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yo up dis bitch .... c'mon hoes vote on this aight...
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Old 10-22-04, 11:48 PM   #11
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zzzzzz... sleepin hoes lets get some votes in dis bia bia
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Old 10-23-04, 01:30 AM   #12
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Voted For: saaran

This battle was pretty tight...nice wordplay and creativity from both but mostly saaran who had the better overall verse.
Saaran:
Claim ya runnin rv in text witcha vet status
you forget my text is rabid...
love to see how ass ya audio is... thats if you had it
^nice bar good structure and personal good creativity.
I'ma whiteboi squeaky voice, i know it, cuz y'all seen this
Quit fuckin wit rv stick to penis...
diss how i'm white when ya name yaself afta a caucasion genius
Kinda multy in there with goos personals again and a good punch.
no terms for played words, slowly killed ya cuz ya heard my sins
not bad 8 losses...had that by the time i had thirty wins
^Good personal AGAIN and good diss.
Glad you quit battlin, your verse more from a corny guy
Shit yo ass came back to rv to up your porn supply
This personal made me laugh I really liked it.

Overall saaran's verse was better for having nicer wordplay and packed with personals.

Socrates:
I hate this fuckin pussy, cuz damn hes not at my level
So imma torch his shit like he sat on a toilet for the devil
^Nice line,not too bad of a punch kind of an elementary diss though.
Saaran imma use you name against you, wrap you ho
Cuz fuck im on a mission, and youre still in a pueblo
^Wasn't feeling this line at all.Attempt at a personal but it came rather weak.Couldve been better with some rewording.
Ill hit you below the belt, so when i aimed way down south
I swung and hit lips, and im NOT saying i hit you in the mouth
Worst bar of ther battle I think, crappy punch and personal.
Fuck hes a whack everything. although he tries to fake it
Rhymes his softer than a pillow,so he should take his verse and blanket
^Kinda played out but well thought out, one of your best lines.
Im smashing you head in sliding glass doors, fuckin nympho
So ill show you to the door for your loss, and take the win-dow
^Good closer, good wordplay for that one.

Ive seen socrates come wayy harder in his other battles so I was kind of disapointed.Nice verse from both though keep doing your thing.

V/ saaran.
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Old 10-23-04, 01:31 AM   #13
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Return the favour when I get a battle up by the way, i forgot to add that in there...
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Old 10-23-04, 01:47 AM   #14
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I would RTF but that is real gay of you to have over 1000 posts and not know what wordplay and personals and punches are. saaran, im not bitchin and im not gunna get his vote taken off but damn

Ill hit you below the belt, so when i aimed way down south
I swung and hit lips, and im NOT saying i hit you in the mouth

^^he said that was a personal. LMFAO.not a good vote at all.
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Old 10-23-04, 02:22 AM   #15
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Voted For: Socrates

socrates: i didn't see any self-glorification and thats good
punches were straight but i don't really think you tried....
last line was pretty dope but it was a tad self-glorified at
the very end but it had nice wordplay...............
overall: 7/10

saaran: decent verse in my opinion nothing special
you talked about yourself a lot and you kept on saying your white for some odd reason I will never figure out maybe.....
punches got played close to the end of your verse and wasn't
as effective as socrates so by those facts I vote for...

socrates....
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