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Old 10-17-04, 05:07 PM   #1
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CarsonJetX2 'vs' Plutonium

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Old 10-17-04, 06:22 PM   #2
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Old 10-18-04, 04:44 AM   #3
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Old 10-20-04, 03:55 AM   #4
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Wasn't going to show..........but I managed to cook up some time

Yo...check this out...check this out...here we go...

Speaking plain...I've got love for the game...until Carson came
Yeah, I know he's a household name...on Chrit's Hall Of Shame
Should've call it quits...he miss more than Kournikova's raquets
I mean, he makes more Vanish Acts than Pac's Criminal Records
It's too bad Hitler fits up most of your sig...no authentic funeral
Cause even your roommate think you're just a Armchair General
Got a planet-sized ego...trust me only beefing will make you fat
Have top-notch nutritions makes me ask...is Mr Daz your Dad??
Even Daz thinks you a fag...kid your outcome doesn't look bright
I'd ask number beefs you had daily, but ya can't count that high
Even Bond has better lines...so I'm asking you checked and why
Your line's dry, most cats have nine lives, but you only live twice
I'm the underdog...it's ok the kid's spits backfire more than SpUL
But I am wack.........................ing the shit out of CarsonJetX2!

If you don't understand any of my lines, don't vote. Hope you drop soon Carson.
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Old 10-21-04, 10:14 PM   #5
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Try.And act 3rd round quality, but pluto ur not sellin it-
You lack the vet-development, Shit, not even a solid-element
Im simply tellin it, Kid I'm not a hater just your waiter..
You have no flavor, Thats why they made you a moderator-
Your not apealing...Pluto, your bar's. We just ain't feelin....
But don't take it harsh, we don't expect anything from New Zealand
An outcast of trash, the way u break we should have named u glass.
Instead you pass'd, research'd and pick a rap name that defines a gas.
So...if what you say in ur sig is true, that "you watch my every move"
Then u know what's ahead for you.....Cus your simply bound to lose.
It's the path you chose, u stepped in thread. An left un-cloathed....
And we both Know. If RV had vets..U'd be out 3 rounds ago....
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Old 10-21-04, 10:48 PM   #6
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i understanded plutoniums verse and it was very good. i mean hardest punches i ever saw. it didnt make me laff like carsonz but it was still dope. i'll give your verse 10/10
carsson you had strong punches like he did but you needa come harder. i dont have strong punches but i kno what they are. there supposed to be humorous and strong.
i'll ive your verse a 9/10 jus a slight below but i still like yourr verse. plutonium you had good flow man good job on that.10/10
carson you had a good flow but was off a little.8/10
aight therez my explained vote.
my vote=Plutonium.
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Old 10-22-04, 12:02 AM   #7
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Thanks for the vote,

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CarsonJetX2 - 0

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Old 10-22-04, 01:18 AM   #8
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V/Carson

he had punches, pluto didnt. The main problem for this site seems to be distinguishing a punch from a statement. Pluto, you should go read the tutorials on punches. dont take it as offense. So yeah punches>no punches
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Old 10-22-04, 01:58 AM   #9
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Vote declined. (Hate)

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Old 10-22-04, 02:51 AM   #10
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Plutonium - 2
CarsonJetX2 - 1

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Old 10-22-04, 03:10 AM   #11
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Sorry Pluto but as a fair mod of this tourny i have to decline Will S.Unyu's vote because looking at his signature it is technically considered a hate vote.
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Old 10-22-04, 03:16 AM   #12
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.......................

Plutonium - 1
CarsonJetX2 - 1

uppin for more votes.......
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Old 10-23-04, 08:39 PM   #13
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vote goes to caesonjetx2, just one line of your battle one it for you, the rest was all even .... Try.And act 3rd round quality, but pluto ur not sellin it-
You lack the vet-development, Shit, not even a solid-element
^^^that intro was dope as!! loved it, flow was a bit off, pluto your flow was th best iv seen, bars were amazingly even.
i understood your punches pluto but they jst didnt hit quite as hard, carson your verse was funny shit, but overall very even battle

vote to carsonjetx2, return the favour, drop a vote on one of the battle below
 
Old 10-23-04, 09:41 PM   #14
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yo can you please disqualiry my vote!!!!!! i was not ment to vote in this battle so my vote does not count
 
Old 10-23-04, 11:14 PM   #15
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^^^^^.........................................

more votes needed.........so uppin.........
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