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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
verbal vision 4 44.44%
warrior 5 55.56%
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Old 10-22-04, 04:54 PM   #1
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verbal vision vs warrior

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Old 10-22-04, 04:56 PM   #2
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Verbal Vision has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 04:56 PM.
 
Old 10-22-04, 05:07 PM   #3
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Aight....Didnt wanna do this But.....

Ima -Propel- a Golden -Shell- right thru his Tissue//
Breaking this Bitch's Ego & Confidence simply aint a Issue//

Ya name Is Mismatched "Warrior" Don't Fit Ya style//
Leave ya -Distraught- Emotions -Wrought- Sculpted in Denial//

Bitch's Rhymes Aint Complex They just Lack Interaction//
Even if ya Spat ya best Ya skills Dont even Equal a fraction//
Done Wit this Hoe......
 
Old 10-22-04, 05:25 PM   #4
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Old 10-22-04, 05:29 PM   #5
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here comes ya first loss stupid

hey faggit listen up.............if u fuckin win its luck/
i should be known as pepper spray the way im fuckin Vision up/

fuck dis wack herb that lacks words he'll neva get his raps heard/
my respect list could resemble the dictionary and i still wouldnt adverb(add verb)/

this dude talked shit and accepted the nattle like he want-to-lose/
Verbal Vision could put his initials together and still wouldnt get a W/(VV)
 
Old 10-22-04, 05:41 PM   #6
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checkin the poll? lol hahahha .........nice punches by tha way......
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Old 10-22-04, 06:19 PM   #7
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uppin ............................................
 
Old 10-22-04, 06:19 PM   #8
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Voted For: Verbal Vision

Verbal..... you have this,......

I like your flow.... I cna really understand your flow as i read along.... Your rhymes are really Nice too....

Your punches were pretty good.... you could have came harder with some of them...... but i still liked em... Good job with them.....

Your structuer was pretty sweet ..... i dont think any were too short or too long.... I like it....

You wordplay........ I like it.... I had to look up Distraught... lol ... I am really feelin the wordplay.....

warrior.....

I liked... your punches a little but verbal cam e harder here.....

Your flow was alright .... you and Verbal were the same here...

U didnt really like your structure.... some of your linez were streched......

Over all...... Verbal got this right here.......

Peace~~~~...

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Old 10-22-04, 06:30 PM   #9
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thnx for the vote *cough*bullshit*cough *cough*dickrider*cough* dammn i must have a cold 1-0 your way
 
Old 10-22-04, 06:32 PM   #10
Verbal Vision
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No need to get Annoyed for a Honest Vote Blud......If u cant take 1 vote against u U shouldnt be Doin dis Game.....any ways Uppin for this peeps.....
 
Old 10-22-04, 06:41 PM   #11
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Voted For: warrior

Here to amke your voting easier.....

fuck dis wack herb that lacks words he'll neva get his raps heard/
my respect list could resemble the dictionary and i still wouldnt adverb
^^Best line great wordplay and multis for a short verse. The persoannals was pretty ill. I'm really impressed with this drop.
8/10

Bitch's Rhymes Aint Complex They just Lack Interaction//
Even if ya Spat ya best Ya skills Dont even Equal a fraction//
^^Best line. No wordplay, some perrsoanls i guess. Better structure n flow but not by much. Other tahn that not too great.
6/10

Yeah not bad for a short battle

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Old 10-22-04, 06:52 PM   #12
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Voted For: Verbal Vision

right now this one was a hard one i looked at it and i have read the raps 3 times each and i couldnt come to a disision but finaly i have
v.v your vocab was exelent and u had a good structure and some hard hitting punches flow was nice and easy to read
all togather 5 out of 6 2 for vocab 1 for structure and 2 for punches

warrior you had a good structure and quite good punches although i thought they never hit as hard witch i think gave v.v. the win flow was good and structure was good all in all i think ild give u 4 and a half out ov 6 1 for for structure 2 for vocab and 1 and a half for punches sorry dawg i voted as fairly as i could i hope you understand
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Old 10-22-04, 07:03 PM   #13
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aight thnx for the vote son uppin 2-1 ur way..........
 
Old 10-22-04, 07:14 PM   #14
Spectre
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Voted For: Verbal Vision

disgoes to vv but only just..his vocab killed warrior..btw good spit by warrior for a nooby....evry area was tied except
warrior-7/10
VV-7.5/10
vocab which vv got...
Structure/Tied
Punches/Tied
Vocab/VV
Flow/Tied
Vote/VV but only just.....
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Old 10-22-04, 07:17 PM   #15
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Thanks Homie.....^ Uppin for votes Please.........
 
 


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