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Check in by: 11-03-04 at 09:45 AM

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ill game has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-04 09:48 PM.

King~~Dipset has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-04 09:48 PM.

hey lets both drop in this battle by tonight is that cool with you homie? and u r spitting first

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king u got no love for rap
u aint tight even if u pulled on ur strap
dip couldnt touch my ass if he was my crap
cant rap im as hard as the dick on my lap
after i seen his mom walking by
told him he was the king but it was a lie
write bak bitch just fucking try
after peeps check ur verse theyl be like "oh me oh my"
a newb with a attitude
punch this fool on three angles then a latitude
couldnt eat me up eaven if i was junk food
say im on his to merk list i dont give a shit
he needs to quit swallowing, and start to spit
u falling off like u tripped into a bottomless pit
likea dog with a cat all his ryhmes is bit

OMG Will You People Look At This Bitch
Hez Really Ill Game Bcuz Hes Makin Me Sick
Hez No NewB I Can really See Dat
But Call MChammer and make sure he getz He flow Bac
hey Ill game Has accpeted this Battle
Ill Fuck Him Up Like Jamie Fox In Collateral
Hey Ill How You feellin Dont Bac Down
You Was A King But Check Da Name........ Im Bac Now!
You A Bitch Nigga Full Of Opinions While I Lay The facts Down
You Lost Already Bitch Betta Luck Next Round
You Once Was lost And Yo Bicth ass Was Neva Found
Then You Challenged Me ....Bich You Must Cant See
That my Flow Goez N My Rymez Like A Dick N A Pussy
If Ya style A Student To Ya Verse then It Must B Playin Hookie
Ill Ya Style Only Good at Da Top til It Goes Down Like A Cookie
I Should End This Ryme Now But I Like to Kill rookies
U Seen The Verse Against Lamafia what Bitch You Didnt Learn
My Flow Is Like Fire N You Jus Some CMore Tryna Feel da Burn
Ill Have You In Scool Doin An equivalency Program
Now Dat Im Done U Jus Another Fabulous Cuz all U Can Say Is
DAMN!!

Voted For: King~~Dipset

Okay...the breakdown
ill-basic rhyme scheme...in other words...shitty..elevate, use multis...definitely need to EXPAND your vocab..structure was a little of, but decent flow...but a shitty drop

King-Hez No NewB I Can really See Dat
But Call MChammer and make sure he getz He flow Bac
haha, thought that was pretty funny...anyways...nice punches..structure was on lock most the time...you need to expand ya vocab too...no noticeable wordplay or multis...but a nice drop

V/King
Reason:Better rhyme scheme...punches...overall better drop

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oops...forgot to add....return the favor in my battles...preferrably the one against Khaos so it can get closed...thanks

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Voted For: ill game

ill-game-

king u got no love for rap
u aint tight even if u pulled on ur strap
no punches wack
dip couldnt touch my ass if he was my crap
cant rap im as hard as the dick on my lap
try of a punch there but didnt land
after i seen his mom walking by
told him he was the king but it was a lie
no punches WACK
write bak bitch just fucking try
after peeps check ur verse theyl be like "oh me oh my"
try of a punch again but no land
a newb with a attitude
punch this fool on three angles then a latitude
wack bcoz he not much of a newb
couldnt eat me up eaven if i was junk food
say im on his to merk list i dont give a shit
wack
he needs to quit swallowing, and start to spit
u falling off like u tripped into a bottomless pit
likea dog with a cat all his ryhmes is bit
kind of a punch3/10

King~~Dipset-

OMG Will You People Look At This Bitch
Hez Really Ill Game Bcuz Hes Makin Me Sick
bit of a punch didnt land good
Hez No NewB I Can really See Dat
But Call MChammer and make sure he getz He flow Bac
not much of punch there
hey Ill game Has accpeted this Battle
Ill Fuck Him Up Like Jamie Fox In Collateral
bit better got a punch and landed little
Hey Ill How You feellin Dont Bac Down
You Was A King But Check Da Name........ Im Bac Now!
good bost
You A Bitch Nigga Full Of Opinions While I Lay The facts Down
You Lost Already Bitch Betta Luck Next Round
better muhc better ok punch there
You Once Was lost And Yo Bicth ass Was Neva Found
Then You Challenged Me ....Bich You Must Cant See
good try of a punch nearly there
That my Flow Goez N My Rymez Like A Dick N A Pussy
If Ya style A Student To Ya Verse then It Must B Playin Hookie
ok punch there
I Should End This Ryme Now But I Like to Kill rookies
U Seen The Verse Against Lamafia what Bitch You Didnt Learn
ok punch again
My Flow Is Like Fire N You Jus Some CMore Tryna Feel da Burn
Ill Have You In Scool Doin An equivalency Program
Now Dat Im Done U Jus Another Fabulous Cuz all U Can Say Is
DAMN!!
good bostin and punch there7/10 (wins)[/b

[b]Vote switched

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=158474
return nd imma get strob to change dat

Voted For: King~~Dipset

Hey this one is real close i think. I truely liked both.

open: ill game took the opening, king's was a bit same old.
close: ill games close was good but the king's was DAMN good! liked the fabolous ting!
personals: a lot more personal stuff from king.
punches: Both had some really cool punchlines. I was really feeling ill games, "stop swallowin, start to spit". This kicked it but it was only that for you that done it for me. Dipest was non-stop, consistently above average.

win: overall im going with King Dipset. Sorry ill game, you was tight but just not this time.

And in case anyone wants to moan about me voting (lil youngsta). I am fair and i couldnt give a rats arse cos i hate most of you twats!

WeeDex out!

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uppin peeps hit this shit.........................

Voted For: King~~Dipset

King won this battle.........he had better structure, flow, vocab, and obviously punches, they hit way harder than the other kid's

the other kid's verse was fucked up.....the structure and flow was terrible, too much self glorifying....

king dipset took this easily

please return the favor on one of my battles thanks

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