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YO I CAN SPIT WHENEVR MAN

SO ONCE U DROP 20 LINES MAX IF THATSD COOL

ILL SPIT RIGHT AFTER

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MC TRAVEZTY

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Hi, I'll Drop 14. Match Me.

CoOL ?

yes i guess iits jus 14 isnt many but whatev er i say at least 16 ok?

so just drop like today if u can and ill spit like once i see it ill key it up


out

ps u got aim?

I have immortal thoughts and flows some consider unorthodox//
comin off the top I.E are u sure u really want this boy to talk?//
Like a pimp I order you to stop, your like the typical whore onthe corner block//
always on my cock dick jockey im tellin u now ull never be hard as a rock//
You're like an active environmentalist, you do so much recycling
Write your verse so it glows bright, it still wouldn't be enlightning//
u lost try again later dyin is nature u saw the light then ate the lifesaver//
So cue the violin playa an say ya goodnight prayors cuz u steppin to me is a joke like mike in the majors or hikin with strangers//
you wont win son stop ya dreamin ima monstrous demon//
incredible?believe it ona pedistool im seated TRAVEZTY a super intellectual bein//
If You really is a vet, end of story, I can't cut that deep//
You and real vets got one thing in common-u both put cats to sleep//
im the musical HE-MAN re-programing ure mental state on weekends//
its like ure sinking in quicksand and ure only grip is a tree branch//
Let me tell u sumthin- get out my face ure fronting//
and all ya rhymin is jus a waste of production- cuz u remind me of a mime never sayin nuthin//
I respect-you-lots, but u felt-trapped, so you came at me ya hardest//
But ya flowz lack important stats, ya handicapped, I.E. u know who gon’ make it the farthest?//
Like a pyramid I break you down step-by-step so forget-your-rep because you know it won't get-respect//
Cuz like lil kids in a swimming pool, you are out-of-your-depth//

20 lines let the best mc win

..WiZZord

Never beat i.E Recently All These Rappers Want A Piece Of Me
Cuz I Take Rocks & Smash Their Window Of Opportunity Easily
Your Not Decent B, Flaws Nobody Saw At All Cuz They Hate It
While I`ll Leave You More Down Under Then Australian Natives
Debate What I’m Saying, Stop Or Else You’ll Rot In The Rubble
Your Girls Clit Was A Problem & It Seems I’ve Got Into Trouble
Flew The Coop Was Subtle, And You Best Ta` Realize You Lost
Going To Be Jogging Your Memory, To Exercise Your Thoughts
You Oughta` Quit Bitch, You Think I’m Dope And I’m Guessing
My Daggers Are Witness’s, And Your Heart Is Open To Question
So, Bro Why You Stressing Me? Your Wife Is A Whole Lotta Girl
You’re Winning This? That’s Out Of The Picture, Like A Photographer
Yo..I’m Tired Of The Future, And Travis – The Past Wont Haunt Me
Travis Sees Pussy & Ass? Only When Looking At Cats & Donkeys
What The Fuck Were You Thinking Guy? If You Blink You Die
I’ll Paint A Picture…
And Use Your Bones As Brushes And Blood As My Ink Supply
On The Brink Of Rhymes, Travis..Don’t Ever Test A Vets Skills
You Couldn’t Run The Show, Putting Sitcoms On Treadmills
I`ll Take This Teen, And Find Some Way To Break His Spleen
Could Become A General Manager & Still Not Make The Team

The Perfect Example ..

I have immortal thoughts and flows some consider unorthodox//
comin off the top I.E are u sure u really want this boy to talk?//
^^^^^iight opener
Like a pimp I order you to stop, your like the typical whore onthe corner block//
always on my cock dick jockey im tellin u now ull never be hard as a rock//
^^^^^^um no
You're like an active environmentalist, you do so much recycling
Write your verse so it glows bright, it still wouldn't be enlightning//
^^^^^^^^ummm not feelin it
u lost try again later dyin is nature u saw the light then ate the lifesaver//
So cue the violin playa an say ya goodnight prayors cuz u steppin to me is a joke like mike in the majors or hikin with strangers//
^^^^^^^^hell naw
you wont win son stop ya dreamin ima monstrous demon//
incredible?believe it ona pedistool im seated TRAVEZTY a super intellectual bein//
^^^^^^still waitin on somethin nice
If You really is a vet, end of story, I can't cut that deep//
You and real vets got one thing in common-u both put cats to sleep//
^^^^^played but nice
im the musical HE-MAN re-programing ure mental state on weekends//
its like ure sinking in quicksand and ure only grip is a tree branch//
^^^^^^um no
Let me tell u sumthin- get out my face ure fronting//
and all ya rhymin is jus a waste of production- cuz u remind me of a mime never sayin nuthin//
^^^^^BLAH
I respect-you-lots, but u felt-trapped, so you came at me ya hardest//
But ya flowz lack important stats, ya handicapped, I.E. u know who gon’ make it the farthest?//
^^^^^iight
Like a pyramid I break you down step-by-step so forget-your-rep because you know it won't get-respect//
Cuz like lil kids in a swimming pool, you are out-of-your-depth//
^^^^^^tight.....

Next...

The infamous I.E? the same one that had the line "you couldnt be ill if you were 101 in roman numerals"?

Never beat i.E Recently All These Rappers Want A Piece Of Me
Cuz I Take Rocks & Smash Their Window Of Opportunity Easily
^^^^^sick opener
Your Not Decent B, Flaws Nobody Saw At All Cuz They Hate It
While I`ll Leave You More Down Under Then Australian Natives
^^^^^nice
Debate What I’m Saying, Stop Or Else You’ll Rot In The Rubble
Your Girls Clit Was A Problem & It Seems I’ve Got Into Trouble
^^^^^ROFL, Ill
Flew The Coop Was Subtle, And You Best Ta` Realize You Lost
Going To Be Jogging Your Memory, To Exercise Your Thoughts
^^^^^^iight, played concept though

You Oughta` Quit Bitch, You Think I’m Dope And I’m Guessing
My Daggers Are Witness’s, And Your Heart Is Open To Question
^^^^ill
So, Bro Why You Stressing Me? Your Wife Is A Whole Lotta Girl
You’re Winning This? That’s Out Of The Picture, Like A Photographer
^^^^^^nice, didnt rhyme with the 1st line though
Yo..I’m Tired Of The Future, And Travis – The Past Wont Haunt Me
Travis Sees Pussy & Ass? Only When Looking At Cats & Donkeys
^^^^^ROFL....
What The Fuck Were You Thinking Guy? If You Blink You Die
I’ll Paint A Picture…
And Use Your Bones As Brushes And Blood As My Ink Supply
^^^^^umm no.
On The Brink Of Rhymes, Travis..Don’t Ever Test A Vets Skills
You Couldn’t Run The Show, Putting Sitcoms On Treadmills
^^^^^ROFL, sick
I`ll Take This Teen, And Find Some Way To Break His Spleen
Could Become A General Manager & Still Not Make The Team
^^^^^nice closer

Vote-I.e
took this easily with nice punches and wordplay

vote= i.e trav started off with like four bars of just filler not the best way to start a battle if it wasn't for that my vote my of been different but

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

i wait never mind, ROFL that was E-2......dumb me.

Vote I.E. niether really came stait at tha opponent with alot of punches but tha wordplay in this battle was sick,

wordplay-both
punches-I.E.
metas-I.E.

Gotta give it ta I.E.

Peace

TRAVEZTY


I have immortal thoughts and flows some consider unorthodox//
comin off the top I.E are u sure u really want this boy to talk?//

SORTA A WEAK OPENER MAN,SETUP WAS COOL,I FELT YOU COULD OF CAME ALOT HARDER WITH THE PUNCH


Like a pimp I order you to stop, your like the typical whore onthe corner block//
always on my cock dick jockey im tellin u now ull never be hard as a rock//

OK HERE,NOT REALLY FEELING IT,A LITTLE TO STRETCHED MAN,NOT HITTING HARD EITHER


You're like an active environmentalist, you do so much recycling
Write your verse so it glows bright, it still wouldn't be enlightning//

NOT HARD HITTING AGAIN,NOTHING DOING IT FOR ME HERE,NOT EFFECTIVE


u lost try again later dyin is nature u saw the light then ate the lifesaver//
So cue the violin playa an say ya goodnight prayors cuz u steppin to me is a joke like mike in the majors or hikin with strangers//

SETUP NOT GOING WELL WITH THE PUNCH,FILLER MAN BOO AT YOU,UMM THE PUNCH WAS WAY TO STRETCHED I LOSSED MY BREATH ALSO..lol


you wont win son stop ya dreamin ima monstrous demon//
incredible?believe it ona pedistool im seated TRAVEZTY a super intellectual bein//

NOT FEELING IT



If You really is a vet, end of story, I can't cut that deep//
You and real vets got one thing in common-u both put cats to sleep//

OK,NOT EFFECTIVE THOUGH


im the musical HE-MAN re-programing ure mental state on weekends//
its like ure sinking in quicksand and ure only grip is a tree branch//

NOTBAD,ALSO NOT TOO HARD


Let me tell u sumthin- get out my face ure fronting//
and all ya rhymin is jus a waste of production- cuz u remind me of a mime never sayin nuthin//

BLAH AT THIS,NOT FEELING IT



I respect-you-lots, but u felt-trapped, so you came at me ya hardest//
But ya flowz lack important stats, ya handicapped, I.E. u know who gon’ make it the farthest?//

NOT TOO BAD AGAIN,NOT EFFECTIVE SHIT ,A LITTLE STRETCHED ALSO


Like a pyramid I break you down step-by-step so forget-your-rep because you know it won't get-respect//
Cuz like lil kids in a swimming pool, you are out-of-your-depth//

NOT REALLY A GOOD ENDING,NEED TO COME HARD HERE,I TELLYOU FOOLS ALL THE TIME TO COME HARD AT THE BEGINNING AND END,NOONE LISTENS,OH WELL GOOD BATTLE



I.E.

Never beat i.E Recently All These Rappers Want A Piece Of Me
Cuz I Take Rocks & Smash Their Window Of Opportunity Easily

GOOD OPENER,FLIPPED THE WINDOW OF OPPORTUNITY WELL,IVE SEEN IT USED ALOT THOUGH LATELY BUT PRETTY GOOD


Your Not Decent B, Flaws Nobody Saw At All Cuz They Hate It
While I`ll Leave You More Down Under Then Australian Natives

PRETTY PLAYED CONCEPT MAN,SETUP COULD OF BEEN BETTER ALSO


Debate What I’m Saying, Stop Or Else You’ll Rot In The Rubble
Your Girls Clit Was A Problem & It Seems I’ve Got Into Trouble

MADE ME LAUGH,WASNT REALLY A HARD PUNCH,BUT DECENT SHIT

Flew The Coop Was Subtle, And You Best Ta` Realize You Lost
Going To Be Jogging Your Memory, To Exercise Your Thoughts

GOOD SHIT


You Oughta` Quit Bitch, You Think I’m Dope And I’m Guessing
My Daggers Are Witness’s, And Your Heart Is Open To Question

AGAIN GOOD FLIP,PLAYED ALSO,BUT EFFECTIVE SHIT HERE

So, Bro Why You Stressing Me? Your Wife Is A Whole Lotta Girl
You’re Winning This? That’s Out Of The Picture, Like A Photographer

NICE AGAIN,NOT TOO HARD THOUGH



Yo..I’m Tired Of The Future, And Travis – The Past Wont Haunt Me
Travis Sees Pussy & Ass? Only When Looking At Cats & Donkeys

DECENT SHIT HERE,SORTA CREATIVE SHIT



What The Fuck Were You Thinking Guy? If You Blink You Die
I’ll Paint A Picture…
And Use Your Bones As Brushes And Blood As My Ink Supply

GOOD VISUAL,I LIKE SHIT LIKE THAT,GOOD PUNCH



On The Brink Of Rhymes, Travis..Don’t Ever Test A Vets Skills
You Couldn’t Run The Show, Putting Sitcoms On Treadmills

NOT REALLY FEELING THIS


I`ll Take This Teen, And Find Some Way To Break His Spleen
Could Become A General Manager & Still Not Make The Team

DECENT ENDING,EFFECTIVE NOT HARD AS HELL THOUGH




BOTH HAD GOOD VERSES,BUT ONE HAD THE BETTER VERSE AND IE GETS MY VOTE



VOTE IE,I THOUGHT HE HAD MORE CREATIVE PUNCHES,AND HARDER ONES AS WELL,TRAVEZTY I THINK YOU NEED TO SETUP YOUR PUNCHES A LITTLE BETTER BE MORE CREATIVE

i.e took this with his punches and his wordplay,travezty didnt open too well and that hurt him..um whateva

vote-i.e.

5-0.

..Anymore?

i-e took this no doubt with werd play punches and a pretty much better overall verse.....

"Your Not Decent B, Flaws Nobody Saw At All Cuz They Hate It
While I`ll Leave You More Down Under Then Australian Natives"

one my faves
vote=I.E