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...in...

~signing in~

good job you're gonna take this loss like a man...

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why even post that??you both have till friday topost,he already checked in,now he will show for his verse by friday,just edit

oh i forgot... i'm in a few leagues so due dates get mixed up...

^ blah, blah whatever kid

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Week eight: week of hate, Lets play join the dots //
Even this filler's iller than you, see I’m hot, your not //
Without the wack theres no ill, so I need you to be ya self //
I’m insane enough to suck your blood and drink to ya health //
If I hit ya wid a even number of punches, you won’t get amnesia //
And I’ll kill you in cold blood, but wont get to freeze ya //

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How can anyone feel you, when they can hardly see you ? //
Cause only overweight amnesiacs wish they could be you //
When ya ride, ya mean a bicycle, an when ya roll, it involves a hill //
But certainly you don’t seem to understand that battling involves skill //

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Half these voters aint heard of ya name //
Like playin chess wid ya self, this is a bored game //
Which of course makes battling a dot a trivial pursuit //
And your scared at the noise when ya start up fruity loops //
I shoot, kill, steal, slang, hang, and do it the hood way //
So your below par, like tiger woods having a good day //
Only his good at what he does, your nuttin but a chore //
at the end of the day…I’m battling a dot… need I say more ??? //

edited spellin mistakes.

"guillotine" this cat is soft his name means "bad head" put it in an he "bites it off"/
he allergic to illness... I'm here and he starts to cough/
his mind's aloft and to yall if it's all the same/
i'm sick enuff to kill this cat... "wit his own name"/
"crumblin" his "frame" "rebuild" and let his body linga/
he "wood" beat me but i broke him down again... like playin "Jinga"/
crushin him "five times" one time for every "finga"/
watch me as i crush his center 2/3rds a wanna be 5%er/
i'm cold as ice and got him as white as winter/
they asked who wanna be freed he said me first/
cause he him locked up & gettin killed wit a "keyed verse"/
guillotine gettin punished for his crimes/
cause he's "litterin" spittin a "waste of lines"/
Beatin this cat forever D.o.T. the perpetual/
maybe not forever... jus 2/3... but finish the decimal...

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Vote=Guillotine

Flow-Guillotine
Punches-Guillotine
Multis/Inners-Guillotine
Wordplay-D.o.T
Overall-Guillotine

This battle was a very close battle...Guillotine got this because he posted up more material....D/o/T had nothing spectacular in his verse but neither did Guillotine...If D.O.T had gone as many lines and had s few more nice lines this would have been different...you should always match lines in a battle.
Guillotine had the best line of the verse:
So your below par, like tiger woods having a good day //
/\that was pretty nice.

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