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Old 07-28-02, 05:21 PM   #1
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Week 9 Heavyweight Champion (5-0) Unfuckwithable Vs (3-1) -u.e.

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30 LINES MAX


MUST SIGN IN BY WEDNESDAY::


VERSES DUE FRIDAY MIDNIGHT::


IF YOU DO NOT SIGN IN BY WEDNESDAY,YOU WILL LOSE,IF YOU DO SIGN IN AND DONT POST BY FRIDAY YOU LOSE,IF THERE IS SOMEONE THAT SIGNS IN AND DOESNT POST A VERSE,YOU MUST POST AT LEAST TWO BARS FOR THE VICTORY
 
Old 07-28-02, 06:47 PM   #2
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Checkin in ..
How Many You Postin ?
-Payce
 
Old 07-29-02, 05:50 AM   #3
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Ahh..Checkin In..I'm Postin 18 Barz..Match Em..Pz..
 
Old 07-30-02, 07:13 AM   #4
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When Do U Wanna Post Up..Sonny..?
 
Old 07-30-02, 10:28 PM   #5
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i dunno .. by the deadline .. lmao

1
 
Old 08-02-02, 10:20 AM   #6
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I'll make this quick, the winner of this battle hit me up on aim or aol for your interview.

AIM-NigCool
AOL-Eightball01eight

1..
 
Old 08-02-02, 11:59 PM   #7
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ThingS 2 Kno..Unfuckwithable = Element..Crunch Is Another Word For Exercise..


[- Finisher -]

Ya Whole VersE Was Incredibly BorinG...I’ll SteaL Ya PridE And SnatcH YouR Glory...Elements ‘Going Down’ MorE Than DykeS At LesbiaN OrgieS..!

YouR Raps FloW Poorly...ThiS Nerds RippeD...I PuT My FinisheR At ThE Beginning WitH The SamE Intentions Of FasT Food Restaurants...So You’d GeT ‘ServeD QuicK’...


[- Verse -]

WoW...I’m Up AgainsT The ChamP...Yet It Makes No Difference, CausE I’ll Do WhaT Your MoM Does WheN She’s PisseD At YoU...SnatcH Ya BelT And BeaT U WitH It..!

ListeN U PrickeD Kid...When I BomB U Run...ElementS The TypE To Flirt WitH His OpponentS Before MatcheS JusT 2 Say He ‘HiT’ On Em’..!

I ShiT On ScuM...But ForreaL Cunt...I’m Just Toyin’...MeeT Ya DeatH And StarT To EnjoY It...AnD If U WiN, It’s CuZ U Got DickRodE To Hell AnD SataN JoineD In..!

Spitz DippeD In PoisoN...DestroyeD -N- DeaD...ThiS Kids Tryna’ GeT Signed AgaiN, Why MaN..!? Elements Audio’s ArE So WacK “Sound Click” Wouldn’t Sign HiM..!

SlicE Ya Ribs AnD Leave Em’ Intact, KiD Spittin’ Female RaP...Your PuncheS Can’t EveN ‘ReacH Me’, Like A FaT Man Tryin’ To GraB The LasT Chip In A PringlE Can..!

RaP..? NaH...U JusT Sing ReaL FasT...I’ll PeeL This FaG...Element RideS DickS So HarD U HavE To Literally AsK For YouR Penis BacK...

DeceiveD And SmackeD...My HeaT Attacks WitH No ResT...YoU Only ‘Think’ Of HarD Punches WheN My Fist Hits YouR ‘HeaD’..!

Ya RaP Flatly CompresseD...Why ContenD, I Got ThE Strength Of Five MeN You DykE...I’m Kickin’ This FaggoT Out NakeD Worse Then Allen Iverson’s Wife...

Dissectin’ Ya InsideS And Startin’ To PuncH Your SpleeN...I’ll ExercisE On YouR Goals...So WatcH As I ‘CruncH’ Your ‘DreamS’...

FuckeD With Ease...AnD Since MotheR GoosE Rhymes Ain’t WorkiN’...I DecideD I’ll JusT Use YouR Verse To PuT My Baby SisteR To SleeP...

Ya TexT ReapeD...I’m TeariN’ Through FagS...My Punches’ll CausE So ManY ImprintS On ElementS Head...ThaT AfteR The MatcH He’ll StarT Wearin’ Du-RagS..!

I BruisE FagS...I’ll SliT Ya WrisT...This BitcH Is AddicteD To CigaretteS...And HaS To TalK ThrougH A HolE In His ThroaT...No WondeR Element Can’t SpiT..!

I’ll BomB U BitcH..! Ka BAM..! I BloW Up LikE Nitrogen...Elements So DesperatE FoR A iLL Verse...I CaughT Him BeggiN’ Cancer PatientS 2 GhosT - Write For HiM...

BuT Fuck Recitin’ ThiS...I’m DonE Wreckin’ ThiS Bitch...I Should’ve ‘StompeD’ Your VersE Instead Of RippinN’ It...BuT I HatE Steppin’ In ShiT..!
 
Old 08-03-02, 12:03 AM   #8
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Post Up Jim Jim..Its 12:02 on Rapbattle Time..
 
Old 08-03-02, 12:04 AM   #9
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Yo CHeck it ..

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Yo, Kid You About To Get Smotherd, Brotha
You Young 'TEXT KIDS' Nowadays , it's Always
Just ' IN ONE EYE AND OUT THE OTHER ' !!! <>
Get Off My Dik-A-Bit , You Wack Bitch,You 'll
Die Quick ,Wha U Didnt think I Would Mention
That Your Makin a Graphic For HyBrid ????? <>
This Fools a Fiend, I'll Shoot ya Spleen, You
Get Slit Wit a Knife, I'll BOOT Your Computer
Screen So You Can Get a KICK OUT OF LIFE!!<>
Took Facts, This Rooks'-Wack, You Shook Lad,
I Dont Want Your Played Name In My Lyrics Be-
Cause It Will Just Make My Verse LOOK BAD!!!<>
Understand, You Aint Da-Man, DAMN Where's
Ya-Fans ? Claim You Dont Have Resources For
Audio's When EVERYTHINGS MADE IN JAPAN!!<>
I Bet Ya Left Swelled, Ya Text Iz Next ...WELL ?
Wuts It Like To Get A Ride To The ChampionShip
Just To Say Bye To The HEAVYWEIGHT BELT ?<>
I Define Rhymes, Aint No Way This Guys Rippin
Me , Kid Dont You Remember When You Got
Sonned By Twelve Lines From ICEDIGGITY ? !!<>
It's A Fact, I Kno You Like Rippin A Crack, Why
You Spittin That Wack ?hmm... Am i The Only
One That Notices That Ur Like a MINI-ADAPT?<>
Playin Wit Guns?You Get Raped Son,We All Kno
That This Hoe's Done, 'n' Bitch If You Calling Me
Wack, Well Then IT TAKES ONE TO KNO ONE!<>
::Sigh::This Demon Flies, And This Teen Just
Dies,This Kid Went And Moved To JAPAN cause
AMERICA Kept Makin Fun Of His PENIS-SIZE!!<>
It's Madness, I'm Fuckin Sik Of This Guys Weak
Tactics,Your The Wackest-Bitch,After This,You'll
'NEVER BE THE SAME' Like 'IP ADDRESSESS'!!!<>
Bitch I'll Leave Ya Necked Swelled, I Wreck Well
And Infect Cells, I'll 'THROW THE DEVIL AT YA
HANDS', So This Bitch Can 'CATCH HELL' !! <>
It's A Fact,This Hoe Just Lacks,And Thas THAT
U Beatin Me?NOT LIKELY!When 3 Months Ago
On AIM I Fucken SHOWED YOU HOW TO RAP!<>
Damn This Bitch Lies, These Lines Will Damage
Ya Eyes, Battlin Me? Iz Like Havin To CARRY A
BUCKET OF SHIT... Wit The HANDLE INSIDE!!<>

Things To Kno:
U.E. Lives In Japan
My Crew Name Iz Hybrid


-peace kid .. And Good Luck
 
Old 08-03-02, 12:07 AM   #10
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Nyce Verse Element..Hit Me On Aim..
 
Old 08-03-02, 03:11 AM   #11
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Votes..! Hello..!
 
Old 08-03-02, 09:12 AM   #12
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ue... hahahaha

Elements Audio’s ArE So WacK “Sound Click” Wouldn’t Sign HiM..!

that line was quality. he could've worded it better but hella nice line

Elements So DesperatE FoR A iLL Verse...I CaughT Him BeggiN’ Cancer PatientS 2 GhosT - Write For HiM...

terrible..

thats about it that i liked.. for a championship contender i expected alot more.. most was played and stupid... multis were stupid.. structure was awful.. punches were either played.. dumb or too simple.. one witty punch... verse wasn't good for a title match..

unfuckwithable...

This Fools a Fiend, I'll Shoot ya Spleen, You
Get Slit Wit a Knife, I'll BOOT Your Computer
Screen So You Can Get a KICK OUT OF LIFE!!<>


thats a played concept and i honestly have to say you worded it terribly... and what is it with this style.. everyone seems to use it now.. i personally think it's wack..

Claim You Dont Have Resources For
Audio's When EVERYTHINGS MADE IN JAPAN!!<>


that was a good concept but not entirely true.. i see were you coming from.. coulda been better if worded better...

'n' Bitch If You Calling Me
Wack, Well Then IT TAKES ONE TO KNO ONE!<>


that was a good line.. nicely worded..

It's A Fact,This Hoe Just Lacks,And Thas THAT
U Beatin Me?NOT LIKELY!When 3 Months Ago
On AIM I Fucken SHOWED YOU HOW TO RAP!<>


i dunno wether it true.. badly worded anyway.. concept woulda been pretty good aswell... verse was choppy.. some ok lines but badly worded and you were just chattign shit.. you forced lots of multis and i fell of flow quite alot.. i dunno why you had capital letters at the end of each line when practically three quarters or more weren't hard hitting.

I was dissapointed in this battle.. beign the heavyweight title i expected alot more... i thought both were average and mayeb they could've come better... that soundclick line killed the battle.. from what i've seen i'd expect that too be #1 in top punches next week.. but i seemed to think rest of u.e's verse was bum.. unfuckwithable had about three good concepts with one worded good and rest worded bad.. forced multis but i flowed to his slightly better.. both were off

vote - unfuckwithable

just about earned my vote.. i'm very dissapointed in this as title match...
 
Old 08-03-02, 09:41 AM   #13
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disappointed ? Kid shut up i dont even care if u voted for me .. ur like 10 times shittier than this .. i wrote this when i got home at 11:20 last night .. forced multi's ? plz kid And ur dumb man , how many soundclcick lines r there ? i'm not sayin he bitt but for real u sayin my concepts r wack but tha soundclick line isnt when it's been used like 5 times in the Past 2 RM tourny's . . for real i dont care about this battle but ur a fag for real .. i dont care wut the rest of u kids think about this battle , if u read this and decide for a gay reason to vote against me cause i'm bein a dik go right ahead i could really care less , no beef to UE .. Ridah ur gay
-peace
 
Old 08-03-02, 12:30 PM   #14
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somebody can't take criticism.. if i heard the line befor i wouldn't have said it was good... and it's good caus eit's true.. if you wanna battle then you can battle me.. just not at this dickriding site.. rtm is the place i will battle ya...
 
Old 08-03-02, 12:37 PM   #15
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I Can Take Criticism .. But Not from Some1 Like You . No i'm not gonna Battle You . I'm Done With Text . And This Site Period . And If ur sayin i get dikryddin than ur dumb .. do u kno how many peeps Beef wit me ? for real kid shut the fuck up .
 
 


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