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Old 11-15-04, 08:48 AM   #1
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Heavyweight Championship: Sdizzle .vs. Stephen Elwood

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Old 11-15-04, 04:00 PM   #2
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lol wow.......gl...
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Old 11-16-04, 12:51 AM   #3
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when its time to show his skills, stephens never owned it
fuck, the only reason your in this match is cuz i didn't have an opponent
kids heads gassed beyond belief, his face is bout to burst
he cant win on rapbattles... why do you think hes on rapverse?
kids not liked by anyone, so what he talkin bout his rep
hes got a 8-step plan for victory..
............................... but im just gonna skip past step
and i dont even understan dhis lines, to me its all ramble
then when opportunity knocks steph breaks the door handle
just take ur loss like a man & quit ur bitching
ima leave wood in a termite-able condition
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Old 11-16-04, 01:35 AM   #4
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we'll get this early.. im abit busy.. ill drop tomorrow..
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Old 11-18-04, 03:07 AM   #5
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Your finished..


Delete your account of RB, Or maybe just quit rappin son,
Cause you shot up on RV... other boards hes been dead for months,
Fat shit, Im above, you cant get higher than me,
You put shadows on the sun........
.....And hes never heard of Brother Ali,
Wannabe rapper, This bitch will never get full grown,
The crowds like rip sdizzle!..... Then puts it on his tombstone,
My punches hit hard, Plus idiot.. Man its stickin to you,
Asked him to make sense.. He pulled out the scissors and glue,
Case man you try to be funny, But really just a pain in the ass,
So i throw you in the garbage bin...
....Is when ur a barrel of laughs..


uh. ok.
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Old 11-18-04, 08:22 PM   #6
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sdizzle:

when its time to show his skills, stephens never owned it
fuck, the only reason your in this match is cuz i didn't have an opponent
lol. good opener.
kids heads gassed beyond belief, his face is bout to burst
he cant win on rapbattles... why do you think hes on rapverse?
another good one.
kids not liked by anyone, so what he talkin bout his rep
hes got a 8-step plan for victory..
............................... but im just gonna skip past step
okay, nice. wording was sketchy.
and i dont even understan dhis lines, to me its all ramble
then when opportunity knocks steph breaks the door handle
structure off, punch hit thought. good.
just take ur loss like a man & quit ur bitching
ima leave wood in a termite-able condition
again, last line a lil short on flow. but nice punch.

ya have great punches, some personals connected. structure was weak on some ends but the wordplay was good, could have squeezed a multi somewhere in there. overall good. 7.8/10


stephen eldwood:

Delete your account of RB, Or maybe just quit rappin son,
Cause you shot up on RV... other boards hes been dead for months,
bad wording, word j-j-jumbly.[b]
Fat shit, Im above, you cant get higher than me,
You put shadows on the sun........
.....And hes never heard of Brother Ali,
[b]um no.

Wannabe rapper, This bitch will never get full grown,
The crowds like rip sdizzle!..... Then puts it on his tombstone,
eh. ill give ya effort points.
My punches hit hard, Plus idiot.. Man its stickin to you,
Asked him to make sense.. He pulled out the scissors and glue,
ironically, this line didnt make sense.
Case man you try to be funny, But really just a pain in the ass,
So i throw you in the garbage bin...
....Is when ur a barrel of laughs..
got the punch, not bad. needed wordplay.

ya punches werent connecting, the analogy must have been from alabama, and the similies/ metaphors from texas. idk. lol. but ya didnt win, nice try though.


vote: sdizzle

congrats.

return the favor sometime.
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Old 11-19-04, 01:56 PM   #7
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damn, it was an okay battle...but still close...

both of yall had relatively decent structures.....Dizzle focused mainly on personals while Elwood focused mainly on punches......and i think Dizzle got this one...he was more consistent in his verse, even though i dont think that he had anythin that was truly outstandin...Elwood, it jus seemed like a lot of the punches were too abstract to hit hard enough...close one tho...

V/ sdizzle...
 
Old 11-19-04, 05:25 PM   #8
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first of all i cant believe this was for the heavyweight championship, somethings wrong here. elwood your punches were weak, and poorly worded, not hard hitting at all. sdizzle had a decent opener and an okay closer, only real punches of the battle

v- sdizzle
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Old 11-19-04, 05:31 PM   #9
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elwood punches>sdizzle punches
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Old 11-19-04, 06:26 PM   #10
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voted for sdizzle

his punches were hitting wayyyy harder than elwood's punches, both of ya, I was disapointed in the structure and flows by both of ya, they were one short one long, which is hard to read, both could work on that, elwood had punches that don't make sense as well, so he lost on that. Sdizzle had personals, elwood didn't.

so overall I vote for dizzle for a overall better verse...these RB cats have fucked up structures as far as I know, no hate.
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Old 11-19-04, 08:03 PM   #11
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Shit was wack.

Vote: dizzle
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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 11-19-04, 08:04 PM   #12
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I mean, vote Steph. Whoops.
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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
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Old 11-20-04, 07:02 PM   #13
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4-2..

lmfao.......
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Old 11-22-04, 03:39 PM   #14
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Closed. Dizzle wins 4-2. Both of you on voting probation...no votes next week and youre banned.
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